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1、Continuation WritingContinuation Writing（读后续写）（读后续写）2021/6/161 读后续写读后续写:提供一篇350词以内的材料，要求考生依据材料内容、所给段落开头语及所标关键词续写一篇150词左右的短文。（满分25分）新高考考试说明2021/6/162评分原则本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分第五档第五档(21-25)与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理衔接合理。内内容丰富，容丰富，应用了应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词个以上短文中标出的关键词语。语。所所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，使用语法结构和词
2、汇丰富、准确， 可能可能有些有些错误，但完全不影响意义表达。错误，但完全不影响意义表达。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。文结构紧凑。2021/6/163两个要弄明白的问题：l原文原文有什么用？有什么用？l续写续写要写什么？要写什么？原文原文理解理解续写文续写文模仿模仿素素材材2021/6/164素素材材情节情节基调基调核心核心矛盾矛盾故事故事框架框架语言语言设定设定潜伏潜伏信息信息2021/6/165高高融洽度融洽度 tone(情节基调情节基调)languagecharacteristics(语言特征语言特征)content(内容内容
3、:plotdevelopment-“W&H”) 2021/6/166Step 1. Readforbasicinformation1.tone(情节基调情节基调):? A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. . funnyahappyending2021/6/167Step 1. Readforbasicinformation2.Languagecharacteristics(语言特征语言特征):? A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was
4、on the way to work one day. . .“It looks like youve got a problem,” Arthur said. “Im afraid so. Im in a big hurry and I cant start my car.”Storynarration(故事旁白故事旁白)Conversation-directspeech(直接引直接引语):simple(简单)2021/6/168Step 1. Readforbasicinformation2.Languagecharacteristics: vivid(生动生动) Now the air
5、was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions. .Arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him. .2021/6/169Step 1. Readforbasicinformationone dayalong Park Avenue near the First Natio
6、nal BankArthur & a young man Arthur helped a young man carry a suitcase but made himself a suspect of the bank robbery. 3.content(内容内容:plotdevelopment-“W&H”) How will the story develop?When:Where:Who:What:How:PassageAmainlytells:One day, Arthur helped a young man carry a suitcase on Park Avenue near
7、 the First National Bank, but made himself a suspect of the bank robbery. 2021/6/1610Step2.Readfor plotdevelopmentclues( (情节发展线索情节发展线索情节发展线索情节发展线索) )Find out the key clues(线索) based on the beginnings:Para1: As he wasrunning, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”Para2: Thetaxi sto
8、pped in front of thePoliceStation and Arthur. _isinsidethesuitcase?What2021/6/1611Step3.Predictpossible plotdevelopmentIn a group predict how the story will develop:(tone:funnyahappyending)Theunderlinedwords:Park Avenue, the young man, suitcases, in the back seat, loud noise of an alarm, the bank, r
9、obbery, the shouts, people, the bank thief money other things 2021/6/1612箱子里箱子里所属人所属人Youngman身身份份可能情节发展可能情节发展1Money the young manthief碰巧抓住抢劫犯（即结尾1）2not thief碰巧把刚从银行取钱赶路的人当劫犯，最后到警局传来抓到劫犯消息3another manthief碰巧碰到一个刚偷了其他人钱的小偷，最后到警局传来抓到劫犯并找回银行失钱的消息，最后在Arthur帮助下抓到另一个小偷4not thief路遇一个路人帮人搬运装满钱的行李箱，而Arthur错把路
10、人当劫犯，最后澄清消除误会5Other thingsthe young manthief错把普通小偷当劫犯，最后帮助抓到该小偷6not thief错把路人当劫犯（即结尾2）7another manthief碰巧碰到一个刚偷了其他人东西的小偷，最后到警局传来抓到劫犯并找回银行失钱的消息，最后在Arthur帮助下抓到另一个小偷8not thief路遇一个路人帮人搬运普通行李箱，而Arthur错把路人当劫犯，最后澄清消除误会2021/6/1613Possibleversion1:As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind
11、, “Stop, stop!” Arthurinstantly realized that the young man might bethebankthief.Soheranfaster.Themomenthestoppedataxi,hejumpedinwiththesuitcaseandsaid to the driver. “Please hurry to the PoliceStation. The man shouting behind is the bankthief.”Thedriverfollowedhimandracedaway.2021/6/1614The taxi st
12、opped in front of the Police Station and Arthurdirectlywentinandtoldthepolicewhathehappenedtohim.Obviously,thepolicehadalreadylearnedabouttherobbery.AsArthurexpected,theyfoundalargesumofmoneyinsideafteropeningthesuitcase.ThentheyaskedArthurtodescribetheyoungman.Later,withthehelpofArthur,thepolicesuc
13、cessfullycaughttherobber.BoththebankandthepolicethankedArthuralot.(151words)Possibleversion1:2021/6/1615Possibleversion2:Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”Suddenly,realizinghehimselfmightbemisunderstoodasthebankrobber,Arthurranfasteruntilhestoppedataxi.Hegotintoitwithth
14、esuitcaseandsaidtothedriverinonebreath:“Themanshoutingbehindisthebankthief.PleasehurrytothePoliceStation.”FollowingArthur,thetaxiracedaway.2021/6/1616Possibleversion2:ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthurrushedintotheoffice.JustashewasdescribingwhathadhappenednearthebankonParkAvenue,Arthu
15、rheardavoiceoutside,“Help!Help!”Tohissurprise,itwastheyoungman.HehadfollowedArthurinanothertaxi.Itturnedoutthatinsidethesuitcaseswerejustsomeclothesandtheyoungmanwasinnocent.Embarrassed,Arthurapologizedtohim,butthepolicementhankedhimanyway.(153words)2021/6/16172021/6/1618Howtowriteacontinuation?1.Re
16、adforbasicinformation2.Readforplotdevelopmentclues3.Predictpossibleplotdevelopment4.Draftacontinuation5.Checkandcopyyourversion-tone, language characteristics, content (“W&H”) - the beginning - the clues, the underlined words 2021/6/1619Give comments on your deskmates continuation according to the c
17、riteria.Write a continuation of about 150 words for Passage B using what we have learned in this class.Assignment:读后续写，就这么简单！2021/6/16202021/6/16212021/6/1622Theunderlinedwords:Park Avenue, the young man, suitcases, in the back seat, loud noise of an alarm, the bank, robbery, the shouts, people, the
18、 bank thief Sortouttheunderlinedwords:Step2.Readfor plotdevelopmentclues( (情节发展线索情节发展线索情节发展线索情节发展线索) )Who:.Where:.What:.2021/6/1623 Languagecharacteristics:Tipsfordrafting acontinuation( (起草续篇起草续篇起草续篇起草续篇) )simple(简单)vivid(生动生动)Polishandcohere(润色衔接润色衔接):discoursemarks(衔接语衔接语)Content:includetheunderl
19、inedwords( 5)2021/6/1624Para.1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”Para.2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur. Step4.Draftacontinuation(起草续篇起草续篇)2021/6/1625融洽度高融洽度高 tone(情节基调情节基调)languagecharacteristics(语言特征语言特征)content(内容内容:plotdevelopment-“W&H”) 2021/6/1626SharingyourversionStep5.Checkandcopyyourversion( (检查誊写检查誊写检查誊写检查誊写) )2021/6/1627 结束语结束语若有不当之处，请指正，谢谢！若有不当之处，请指正，谢谢！
