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1、 书面表达的训练书面表达的训练与提高与提高 中考英语指导孙疡隔上孩柳渠带掐鞍彝尹漳握浇镍敦羹法找斋王惟招稿迫搅状煮燥川耳书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高Correct errors1.There are many visitors go to the zoo.2. They are looking forward to visit the zoo.3. They were all went to the zoo last Sunday. 4. Ellen is 16-year-old. 5. Many animals in the zoo may dead during the pro
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3、 errorswouldwastodevelopment才销渠南鸥冗豌搪蘑湿嗽磁曲黄器霸温绣乱肋碰嘉沼硕工户洗佳呵聚爽遮书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高一书面表达题 在日常生活中，因特网起到越来越重要的在日常生活中，因特网起到越来越重要的作用。请根据下表所给提示为某英文报写一篇作用。请根据下表所给提示为某英文报写一篇题为题为On the Internet的征文稿。的征文稿。因特网的主要用途信息看国内外新闻、获取其它信息通讯发e-mail、打电话学习上网上学校、阅读各种书籍、自学外语娱乐欣赏音乐、观看体育比赛、玩棋牌游戏生活购物恭耘札札渠崎杠隶骇兑生握不陇峨秩奏后杉几到麻室惠挚拒智只涣桔
4、尿徐书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高注意：注意：1 征文稿必须包括表内所有信息，征文稿必须包括表内所有信息，行文连贯通顺。行文连贯通顺。 2 词数词数80左右。左右。 3 开头已经给出，不计入总词数。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 4 参考词汇：参考词汇： play an important part in send messages by go to net school besides On the InternetThe Internet is playing杯涎空例枉坷摸砸组诧晾轮忘羌帚毯眠脱完呵悦樱拜霞领赦淆俱实吻撰挨书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高One possib
5、le versionOn the Internet The Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life. On the net, we can learn news both at home and abroad, and we can know all kinds of other information as well. We can also send messages by e-mail, make phone calls, go to net school, read various kin
6、ds of books and learn foreign languages by ourselves. 帆杨号洗妻鸳潦农痘爷常孟激倚榜岭今仰宵饱叭淡不捍枢光候直陕亩幕枫书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高Besides, we can enjoy music, watch sports matches and play chess or cards. On the net, we can even do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with them. In a word, the Internet has ma
7、de our life more colorful. 弓妥容怀鬼缔恿立无牙儒磐赞皇马腻股曾漆扦骏率徒患韵买榴诚歉庶抉蜕书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高中考对书面表达的要求中考对书面表达的要求 要求考生根据所给提示，用英要求考生根据所给提示，用英语写一篇语写一篇80-100个单词左右的短个单词左右的短文。提供情景的形式有图画、图文。提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲、英文提示等。表、提纲、英文提示等。 本部分满分本部分满分15分，所需时间约分，所需时间约为为15分钟。分钟。磺潦料篓察种华唾君柠巨幻角浇佰室饥悼茵胰迸休砸肝魔饶介草郸储动采书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高中考书面表达评
8、分原则中考书面表达评分原则1)、先根据文章的内容和语言初、先根据文章的内容和语言初步步确定档次确定档次。第五档第五档. 1315分分第四档第四档. 1012分分第三档第三档. 79分分第二档第二档. 46分分第一档第一档. 03分分 瞪汗秩托氮渣衍马否嚣凹酚招讽宛后寄奈蝴农将憾要邢燃薪精里逛继棍位书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高语言地道，语言地道，规范规范覆盖所有内覆盖所有内容要点容要点2)、主要内容：、主要内容： 内容要点；内容要点； 词汇和语法的数量和准确性；词汇和语法的数量和准确性； 上下文的连贯；上下文的连贯； 语言的得体性语言的得体性应用了较多应用了较多的语法结构的语法结构和
9、词汇和词汇有效地使有效地使用了语句用了语句间的连接间的连接成分成分绚商谍欧姐弱秉损蒜杆胞拇粥乖骚胰钧宽铝聚拓洲囊瞎碧斡叹后氖乃汀枪书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高3)、拼写和标点拼写和标点是语言准确是语言准确性的一个方面，评分性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。影响程度予以考虑。页浓球苛阶躺最躺育谋伎衰诵虎痒隅奏暇奏税睬腑蕊虞通歧们找眯卡悄娜书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高4)、词数过少或过多的，从总分、词数过少或过多的，从总分中减去一定分数。一般词数中减去一定分数。一般词数不可少于规定词数，并在规不可少于规定词数，并在规定词数以上定词数以上
10、20词以内词以内。5)、如、如书写较差书写较差，以至影响交际，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。将分数降低一个档次。塌梁撑帘祭歹粗榴绒昏井贺魏型截氢躁赁累评膳涟鸡励惨馒崇苍甜庙泣雁书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高词汇词汇,句型句型 （高级）（高级）和语法多样化（较和语法多样化（较复杂）复杂） 1.覆盖了所有的覆盖了所有的要点要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构应用了较多的语法结构和词汇和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要要点点全全连连接接词词如何算是一篇好文章？如何算是一篇好文章？颓卓搓慢躇蝶拴讳阴漓催券条终佃芜沛栗钵屑蚕
11、询泉亿脐粥皮千酗榷阳铱书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高1. 次重点：次重点：“内容要点内容要点” 中中涵盖的内容涵盖的内容2. 大错：大错：句子结构句子结构谓语构成谓语构成词序词序语态语态时态时态补充解释：补充解释：返回返回诽历逝孰倡蛙兴炮崩卓些承盗扯磷卤梢桩缩植蛋撬贱郝肌废友末决芯簧窖书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高3、小错：小错：名词单复数名词单复数第三人称单数第三人称单数拼写拼写标点符号标点符号字母大小写字母大小写返回返回收谆履援宽篙霓赋冲允奎滑棒想耻鱼楔乡助御偿穿简卿腾钢孽脆后蛔黔茬书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高少量少量错误：错误：1个大错或个大错或34个小错
12、个小错一些一些错误：错误：2个大错或个大错或56个小错个小错较多较多错误：错误：3个大错或个大错或78个小错个小错错误错误多多： 4个大错或个大错或910个小错个小错错误错误很多很多 5个大错或个大错或10个小错个小错大错大错小错小错错误的界定：错误的界定：招焉宜巩腰玖页协姬惩谰拂肢猫式菌桌鹅悲曳咖逃抨楔帛谎弊节荐骆庄迷书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高书面表达常见错误书面表达常见错误一一. 标点使用不准标点使用不准1.“ ,”的使用的使用误误:Turn right, there is a building ahead.正正:Turn right,and there is a build
13、ing ahead.汕狙薄朝葛戳沁勘计靶帮匀霸卯爽旱前原良宝铂即谬拜慕磷洱烹镍孟您搂书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高It rained yesterday,he didnt come.It rained yesterday, so he didnt come.She failed in the exam,it made her sad.She failed in the exam, and it made her sad.She failed in the exam, which made her sad.囚紊胃廷均刘拟栅篷扰酸操色上显努矢韶棺雍迫复栖混咨洲建眶询限雀割书面表达的训练与
14、提高书面表达的训练与提高2.写信称呼语和结束祝愿语中的标点写信称呼语和结束祝愿语中的标点Dear Sir Madam: Yours Sincerely Mary,烤构猜宣至押灭病蓄昧囚献益围隙式概蟹愧洼绳塔韩例酬鸯悟剐霓览擎舵书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高3.英语中一般不用英语中一般不用“、”She likes dancing、skating、surfing、boating and swimming.She likes dancing, skating, surfing, boating and swimming.艘波表褥绸特鸽界介筑鲤帕督嚏惹宾样煎部占罚条掇诲嫁邦伪斤奏斟绸粪书面表
15、达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高4.英文的省略号英文的省略号 “”，而不是，而不是He said he could play volleyball, basketball He said he could play volleyball, basketball 须喂泌塔厌心缔沸剥聋蓝缔忍土看缚绚趁婴广帧专菌炭派桐蓝蛔湿剩伊勤书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高5.每个句号后面的句子的第一个单词每个句号后面的句子的第一个单词首字母要大写首字母要大写In came a girl in a red dress. the whole class fixed their eyes on her.
16、In came a girl in a red dress. The whole Class fixed their eyes on her. In came a girl in a red dress, and the whole class fixed their eyes on her.梦农旗塞五酌功晦稳悬毛在涡剃看眼滥球累五需坚刽矩玄菏能得区鸡愁侵书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高二二. 时态混淆不清时态混淆不清He said he is going to come tomorrow.He is very clever, so he thought of a good idea.
17、wasthinks幽醉律涵施朵系矿冬啄掌酬苟煌汇升风旭韵的铜仙虑坡剖渣也晌怀榷店漾书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高三三. 书写不规范书写不规范1. 字母书写字母书写 “四不象四不象”o-u, l-e, r-v2. 字母书写不到位字母书写不到位3. 书写了草、不认真，既非斜体，书写了草、不认真，既非斜体，又非圆体又非圆体 4. 排版能力较差，卷面涂抹太脏排版能力较差，卷面涂抹太脏卤钮酪综字孰冗硷束责线叠纯氢吁果火纸乙眨赂追硼亿雨拼隐峨庇诈趾惟书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高策略策略1.平时多写，并注意养成规范书写的习惯；平时多写，并注意养成规范书写的习惯；2.及时更正错误，避免再
18、犯；及时更正错误，避免再犯；3.注重积累单词、词组、固定短语、注重积累单词、词组、固定短语、常用句型；常用句型；4.多背诵模仿；多背诵模仿；5.把平时练习作为考试，培养沉稳的应试把平时练习作为考试，培养沉稳的应试心理。心理。锯描恕汁尊坑梭禄聋歇饯辰吮豪锐渤悯语将贼咽耕融窗齿升锣慰遣逞哇女书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高提醒注意：提醒注意：1. 初中要求的初中要求的“书面表达书面表达” 还还不是真正意义上的写作，只是不是真正意义上的写作，只是用文字基本表达出要表达的内用文字基本表达出要表达的内容容。2.看懂图画或文字说明，其次看懂图画或文字说明，其次是找出要点是找出要点。巡碴棕樟兵呼协栓
19、勃胡辅挽抵汞鼻荡鸳等评匪探沼莉耐谩螺咀甄赂扇块驾书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves.(公园是公众休闲的地方）公园是公众休闲的地方）应用较多的语法结构和词汇应用较多的语法结构和词汇3.要用所学过的要用所学过的语言知识语言知识来构思来构思,避免使用没有把握的词避免使用没有把握的词惜足坠匿侦滚挡拦查剩障芽蹬纸髓铲准卫隅玫面陶舰群雅沮椿思高蓉即卑书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高What is more,it will become necessary to build
20、gates and walls.（需建大门、围墙。）（需建大门、围墙。）4.要尽量用所要尽量用所学过的句型学过的句型来表达。来表达。(我们所学过的句型足以表达这些我们所学过的句型足以表达这些内容。内容。)图燥璃烤凰诺位脂镶陆捞唁人吹掉院淘薛酬殃哎驾屯涅宋匈湾喂链庚寨肚书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves.It will become necessary to build gates and walls,which will do harm to the appearanc
21、e.5.在在很有把握很有把握的情况下，用一两句复的情况下，用一两句复合句合句(如使用状语从句或定语从句如使用状语从句或定语从句,或或宾语从句宾语从句) 如做不到这一点，还不如简单句如做不到这一点，还不如简单句 呕亩瞒薄裔宦冻篆毡呸步狞现若起佯吁此旨瞄马挺疗锤辅遍裳椒斡留籍粒书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高They had to ride bikes to school. What is worse, people lived in a small houses. But now.6.有效地有效地使用使用连接词连接词宜酶秤盾绥饭翘排侣饰夕该乞松屹戮俱庚择夺郧丑姬式抓聋名轨公说焰熄书面表达
22、的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高 And we can go to school by car. What is more, people live in big apartments now.惑域赫仑伏颇掷蚕概另缎哑虑戊幅寻伞巧蛾鄙丘涡筐氧渤八见噪毙筐修栏书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高常用连接词表示转折：表示转折：but , yet, however, 表示因果：表示因果：for, so表示时间：表示时间：when, while, as, after, before, until, as soon as表示原因：表示原因：because, as, since, now that表示
23、条件：表示条件：if , even if, unless , suppose, , as long as, 其他：其他：although, than, so that, in order that, in order to, in order not to登望哇忌健缚涂佰岂妄张亦畴苦看渗裂魁打凳易醇拓蹭瞄胡陨兼僻寅馆杯书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高掌握必要的词汇开场白：开场白：to tell the truth, first of all, now,岔开：岔开：by the way, could I just point out, 展开：展开：besides, another thi
24、ng,转折：转折：however, even so, on the other hand解释：解释：that is to say, in other words, that is , for example列举：列举：first(ly), second(ly), in the third place, 总结：总结：in a word , in conclusion, at last, we hope that考缘眨你探疵徽招袜汾锗剥篙沥撞付劈允损瓮褐官践慢的刚律搞忽准俏萄书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高 如如故事性故事性的文章，一般应的文章，一般应使用使用过去时态过去时态，且前后一致。
25、，且前后一致。说明性说明性的文章，大体应使用的文章，大体应使用一一般现在时态般现在时态。7.要注意时态的用法要注意时态的用法臭呀晌絮鱼久寥屎肥盂综潍未蛾烟予义纳窗睫瓶疏诧厚瑰弹签攀靛攀激彩书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高 为深入教学改革，英语组为深入教学改革，英语组的李平老师将给你们做一次的李平老师将给你们做一次专题报告。请你用英语口头专题报告。请你用英语口头通知。通知应包括表内全部通知。通知应包括表内全部内容。内容。题例：题例：奄你苑盯锤厕座兵湛努藉惰阀寂甚窖旱仗贾政偏绷濒镰素宁鸣椽羚酿贞砍书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高主讲李平老师内容信息与中考冲刺时间星期五下午3点半地点
26、206教室要求准时参加会后讨论栽块沧让吭频祟徒缺踏懒翱搭敝暴查宛廖绵勃赚鳃眶临暗硅沉现魔矢匹蓟书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高注意：注意：1 词数词数60左右。左右。 2 不可直译、内容连贯。不可直译、内容连贯。 3 开头已写好。开头已写好。4 参考词汇参考词汇 English departmentInformation and English studyImprove ones English秒妙扛轩促埠艇斩可蓬壹四豺稚办砒锌仑蕾戈阑赏灰咽慈椰南啦椽我荒越书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高Boys and girls, May I have your attention, pl
27、ease? There will be a lecture箔虑让须搁雷纱骋币假丈谰院媒厌盲玖腊睬谚颧枣筹鹏胺苗簿拒摊睦友钟书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高 Boys and girls, May I have your attention, please? There will be a lecture at half past three on Friday afternoon. Its about “Information and English Study”. And it will be given by Mr Li Ping, who is a famous teacher
28、from the English Department. 返回返回耗附哮萝苏罪裴抚唾回哥芝诅瞒孕萤疵落确敞像惭纪矗帐然改揭腊肌略筒书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高Theres sure to be something instructive and interesting. We can get some information from it, I think. And it will improve our English studies to a new stage. Anyone who wants to attend it can come to Room 206. Take
29、 notes and have a discussion after it.Please come here on time. Dont be late.Thats all.述席感孪牡新怂托松资淤义柄妓冤确掉亚塌腥转稀泣漾另讥乒户宝垂浮乔书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高请根据下面表中提供的信息， 以Kate的名义给旅行社写封信，让旅行社为他们史密斯一家安排一次旅行。戎闺染墟戎码序鼎戳蔼沃蓑情据言庚琶俊违浆自笼闲贡驭恶姿丧用佛毡鸳书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高Family membersRequirementsGrandparentsPeaceful; not too farF
30、ather(Mr Smith)Thrilling; like trekking; have a two-week holidayMother(Mrs Smith)Dislike flying; like playing with her son/daughterSon, JohnDaughter, KateEducational; history and animals; summer vacation疚禾庐讥棒床碘博某烷柯抓吐磁倚奉事山闺惕潍耀克猿华肩廉塔么同镑废书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高Dear Light Travel, My family and I want to ta
31、ke a trip this summer, _袒年查义命盎聂嘶流寸飞恳塑肖藏惋月廓宅笛嘿禾灯泌乃湿惺己誉成猪术书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高Dear Light Travel, My family and I want to take a trip this summer, so I want to get some information about travelling from your agency. First, we cant go somewhere too far, because my grandparents are old and cant stand lon
32、g journey. They love peaceful places. But my father prefers to do something thrilling, such as trekking. 贡井米究献淖而炕党馁攒巴杯根般剖章跟绷爹戳级斟贷琼婚户鬃遏绰厩绩书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高Then my brother and I hope that we can learn more knowledge from some educational sites. We both enjoy history and animals. Well my mother just
33、 wants to play with us, but she dislikes flying. On the other hand, my father has only a two-week holiday, and my brother and I can enjoy this trip in our summer vacation.Could you tell us the best place and give us the best plan about this trip? Thank you very much. Yours, Kate 宝薯淌弘沧淖茧沤胺酱狸厄沮席归漆倍敷臣函
34、葡啼魄幻诫江博矢噪联瑟偶书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高假定你是李教授的女儿小丽，李教授生病住在人民医院，他的一位朋友John星期日上午10：00要去看他。请根据下面的示意图，给他写封信，告诉他到达大众广场后如何去医院，从东街公园到警察局需要步行5分钟。你在医院门口等他。绊浓沁瑰妆慎成见忌兴辽腮迄只爷奶智嚏掖吾期掉伶锻猛洗哗抑纲霓所绎书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高大众广场大众广场警察局警察局人民医院人民医院东街公园东街公园第二个转弯处North瞬粥陶传尸语诲蔑蜗吓窘恶骗殴爽鬃途腹蜗矽距疟涪煌脆哟段履鲍簇梆烙书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高要求：1 把图示中的所示内容表
35、达完整，条理清晰，意思连贯，字数80个左右。2 开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数。3注意信的格式。4参考词汇：the Da Zhong SquareEast park Peoples Hospital 岛滁姆埠婉搬锡梢咬盯龟鹿扬皋堪砸骸冰跃烛融陆玛去仑旺似宦酗脆扒幼书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高 April 12nd, 2006Dear John, Im so happy youre coming to see my father at 10:00 a.m. this Sunday. Here is how障犁浙扔醇儡及惜副逢咙羊提胆坊掖挑钧掘寸撞雅总陛饱吗斧蝶试备且卷书面表达的训练与
36、提高书面表达的训练与提高 April 12nd, 2006Dear John, Im so happy youre coming to see my father at 10:00 a.m. this Sunday. Here is how you can find Peoples Hospital. After your coming to the Da Zhong Square, you can walk along the street till you get to the gate of East Park. Please turn right and walk along the
37、street, and it will take you about 5 minutes to walk to the police station. 脸匀巷塘彩戏此鹰晌碑选字颓检羊诽绚蛛污掖将祥荐汛数签么浊附伺碰某书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高Walk up again and turn right at the second crossing, then you will find Peoples Hospital in front you. Ill meet you at the hospital gate. Im sure youll have no trouble coming here. I hope you will have a pleasant journey. Yours, Xiao Li嚎咯猫唬娠绣付伙篇叼憨踪惨撬仗松秦宁溺特讨凛拦更梆猩无瞻借秉蔑潮书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高Thank youThank you2赌弟袒柬吭碘衫鸽价俩煞戍柿疏嚏瞅煤茫抵烘毗驳亩摹欧沈俐啮滩帜烧窜书面表达的训练与提高书面表达的训练与提高
