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1、全椒三中全椒三中王宏霞王宏霞How to Better a Piece of Writing How to Better a Piece of Writing 部分部分201620152014 作文作文writing25分分25分分20分分1.Better the layout (布局布局) 2.Better the grammar （语法语法）3.Better the vocabulary (词汇词汇) 4.Better the sentences （句句子子）5.Better the logic (逻辑逻辑) How can we make the writing better ? Bet
2、ter the layout (布局布局)How to make the writing better Step 1A better layout can make the writing more clear.Basic layout基本结构基本结构 Paragraph 1Paragraph 2Paragraph 3introduction引入引入details细节细节conclusion总结总结 为了更好地开展全民阅读活动，有关部门就为了更好地开展全民阅读活动，有关部门就如何为市民创造良好的阅读环境广泛征求意见，如何为市民创造良好的阅读环境广泛征求意见，你班将举行一次英语主题班会来讨论这个
3、话题。你班将举行一次英语主题班会来讨论这个话题。请你写一篇发言稿，提出自己的想法和建议。请你写一篇发言稿，提出自己的想法和建议。 要点提示要点提示: 1. 阅读的重要性。阅读的重要性。 2. 你的建议。（如建更多小型图书馆，经常性地你的建议。（如建更多小型图书馆，经常性地 介绍好书等）介绍好书等） 要求：要求：1. 词数：词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。词左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。书面表达书面表达 A piece of writing from a student(学生作文）学生作文） Hell
4、o, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is very important to us. It can makes us understand the world, and it can makes us feel relaxing. I want to make more people like reading, so I have some good suggestion. We can build lots of small libraries in the city. If there are more new books, people
5、 will be more interested in reading. We should keep the reading room quietly and clean. It is a public place. You cant make sound or put rubbish on the ground. I hope my advices could be good . More people will like reading. Do you think it is a good piece of writing? Why or why not?Para. 3 conclusi
6、on Para. 2 details Put the writing into a better layout.Para. 1 introduction Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is very important to us. It can makes us understand the world, and it can make us feel relaxing. I want to make more people like reading, so I have some good suggestion. We ca
7、n build lots of small libraries in the city. If there are more new books, people are more interested in reading. We should keep the reading room quiet and clean. It is public place. You cant make sound or put rubbish on the ground. I wish my advices could be good . More people will like reading.Bett
8、er the grammarStep 2 Grammar plays a very important role in English writing!How to make the writing better Common mistakes in grammar 常见语法错误常见语法错误 Parts of speech 词性词性Forms of words 词的形式词的形式Tenses of verbs 动词时态动词时态Example Xiao Ming is a middle school student. He doesnt learn English careful at all.
9、At home, he enjoys watch TV. He always forgot to go over his English lessons.carefully watchingforgets Parts of speech 词性词性Forms of words 词的形式词的形式Tenses of verbs 动词时态动词时态 Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is very important to us. It can makes us understand the world, and it can make us
10、 feel relaxing. I want to make more people like reading, so I have some good suggestion. We can build lots of small libraries in the city. If there are more new books, people will be more interested in reading. We should keep the reading room quietly and clean. It is a public place. You cant make so
11、und or put rubbish on the ground. I hope my advices could be good. More people will like reading. Find the grammatical mistakesmakerelaxedsuggestions advicequiet Better the vocabulary (词汇词汇)Step 3 Better vocabulary can make the writing more vivid (生动的生动的) and meaningful.How to make the writing bette
12、r 1. 我希望你能帮助我。我希望你能帮助我。A. I hope you can help me. B. I look forward to your help.2. 他们冲出教室去吃饭。他们冲出教室去吃饭。A. They rushed out of the classroom for lunch.B. They walked out of the classroom for lunch.How can we better the vocabulary ? Wonderful phrases ( 短语短语) can be used instead of common words. More s
13、uitable words can also be used according to the context (上下文上下文). 1. We should keep the reading room quiet and clean. 2. You cant make sound or put rubbish on the ground. 3. I hope my advice can be good. More people will like reading. noise throw / drop are supposed to useful enjoy Turn the underlin
14、ed words into better ones. Better the sentencesStep 4 Better sentences can make the writing more attractive (有吸引力的有吸引力的).How to make the writing better 1. 他得了第一名，感到很惊喜。他得了第一名，感到很惊喜。A. He won the first place. He was surprised.B. He was surprised to win the first place.A. I find it really interesting
15、to learn English .B. Learning English is interesting, I think.2. 我认为学英语很有趣。我认为学英语很有趣。How can we better the sentences? Simple sentences can be put into complex sentences (复合句复合句) for better. Better sentence patterns （句型（句型) can be used to improve the writing. 1. I want to make more people like readin
16、g. I have some good suggestions. _ _ _ make more people like reading, I have some good suggestions. 2.We can build lots of small libraries in the city. Lots of small libraries can _ _ in the city.3. You cant make noise, and you cant throw rubbish on the ground. You are not _ _ make any noise _ throw
17、 rubbish on the ground.In order tobe builtallowed to Turn the sentences below into better ones. orBetter the logic (逻辑逻辑)Step 5A better logic can make readers have a better understanding of the writing.How to make the writing better 表并列：表并列：and, both and; as well as表转折：表转折：but, yet, however, though
18、表因果表因果：because, so, as a result表递进：表递进：not onlybut also; besides表结果：表结果：so that ; such that ; 表先后表先后：First, Second, Third, Finally表时间表时间：when, after, before, as soon as Linking words (连接词连接词) How can we better the logic ? I like Liu Qian.He is a creative magician. I like Liu Qian _ he is a creative
19、magician.becauseMake sentences with linking words. He did magic shows _ well _everyone was surprised.so that CCTV Spring Festival Gala_ he is very young, he has won many prizes.Although Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is very important for us. It can _ _make us understand the world,
20、_ _ make us feel relaxed. In order to make more people like reading, I have some good suggestions. _, lots of small libraries can be built in the city. _, if there are more new books, people will be more interested in reading. _, we are supposed to keep the reading room quiet and clean. It is a publ
21、ic place, _ you are not allowed to make noise or throw rubbish on the ground. I hope my advice could be useful, _more people will enjoy reading.not only but also Firstly Secondly Thirdly/ Finally / lastly so andFill in the blanks with suitable linking words.1.layout (布局布局) 2.grammar （语法语法）3.vocabula
22、ry (词汇词汇) 4.sentences （句子句子）5.logic (逻辑逻辑) What is a good piece of writing ? three paragraphs few or no mistakes suitable(phrases) complex sentences suitable linking words according to relationsWriting Task 英语课堂上，老师要求学生就英语课堂上，老师要求学生就“与人相处与人相处”的话的话题展开讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，以题展开讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，以“How to Get on Well
23、 with Others” 为题，写一篇英语短为题，写一篇英语短文。文。 要点提示：要点提示： 1. 与人友好相处的重要性。与人友好相处的重要性。 2. 如何与人友好相处的建议。如何与人友好相处的建议。 要求：要求： 1. 词数：词数：80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出。词左右，开头和结尾已经给出。 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 How to Get on Well with Others As we all know, its very important for us to get on well with others. If you
24、 can do that, you will have many friends. How can we get along well with others? Here I have some suggestions. Firstly, sharing is very important. We can have many friends if we share with others. Secondly, learn to respect others. Everyone likes making friends with people who respect them. Thirdly, we should communicate with each other, because communication can make us popular. In a word, getting along well with each other will lead to a better world. Practice makes perfect !
