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1、如何提高学生英语写作能力如何提高学生英语写作能力一.审题到位二.语言丰富各类从句、强调句、倒装句、分词2017年1月高考作文题：假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你的好友李宏今年暑假将赴英国参加为期两个月的海外交流活动。如果选择主办方安排的住宿，他需要额外支付较高的费用。但他也可以通过为当地社区养老院提供每月三十小时的义工服务，获得在养老院免费住宿的机会。李宏通过邮件向你征求意见，写一封回信，内容须包括：1.你对此事的明确态度；2.你的理由。ImgladtohearthatyouhaveaccesstoparticipateinanoverseascommunicationactivityinBri
2、tainwhichwilllasttwomonths.Isuggestthatyoushouldchooseworkingasavolunteerthirtyhourseverymonthforthelocalcommunityaginghospitaltogainachancetostayinitforfree.Myreasonsareasfollows.Notonlycanyouenhanceyoursocialexperiences,butalsoyou can reduce your costs. Contrary to the accommodationarrangedbytheho
3、st,youcansavealotofmoney.Undoubtedly,thecostmusthavebeenhighifyouchooseit.Stayingintheaging hospital, the contrast couldnt be greater. On one hand,only by working as a volunteer can you gain a free stay. Itsounds great! Your arrival will add colors to the atmospherethere.On theotherhand, during our
4、spare timewe willalsospendtimehelpingothersinoursocietyteachesustobeawarm-heartedperson.Yourarrivalwillalsoreducetheburdensthere.Asanoldsayinggoes,“wecangainboththingsatthesametime”,sowhynotchooseit?Ihopethatyouwilltakemyadvice, best wishesthatyouwillhaveagoodtimethere, it isagoldenchancethatyouwill
5、gaininsummervacation.Inshort,enjoyyourself.(18分分)*审题假如你是启明中学的王磊，你的学校最近准备引进一个机器人充当食堂服务员或者图书管理员的工作，并在学校的贴吧上向同学们征求意见。你在贴吧上回复向学校提出意见。 1.明确提出你的观点； 2.通过比较，说明你这样选择的理由。 （可从工作效率和服务范围等作比较）（2018年1月高考）通过比较 *审题（2018年1月静安一模）你是王华，临近寒假，你的好朋友刘伟写信向你咨询他的寒假计划。目前有三个备选方案，一. 去美国某高中参加冬令营; 二. 应征某历史博物馆临时讲解员；三. 提前学习下学期的高中课程。请
6、给刘伟写回信，谈谈你的看法。信中必须包括：1. 你建议的方案；2. 你如此建议的理由；3. 你对于执行此方案的建议。*用好插入语Therearepeople,Iamsure,whowillsaythatthewateristoocold.Hiswords,tosomeextent,areright.Thequestion,frommypointofview,deservesthinkingover.4.Whathedidyesterdaywasdissatisfactory.1.Therearepeoplewhowillsaythatthewateristoocold.2.Hiswordsar
7、eright.3.Thequestiondeservesthinkingover.Whathedidyesterday,bynomeans,wassatisfactory.Thereislittle,ifany,hopeofwinning.5.Thereislittlehopeofwinning.*用好副词Obviously,comparingallthecandidates,Idaretosayheisthebestchoice.Tourism,frankly,maypromotethemutualunderstandingamongnations.2.Comparingallthecand
8、idates,Idaretosayheisthebestchoice.1.Tourismmaypromotethemutualunderstandingamongnations.Mostresearchersbelievethat,intheory,mobilephonesareabsolutelysafe.intheoryabsolutely3.Technologicalchangeswillleadtounemploy-ment.Technologicalchangeswillinevitablyleadtounemployment.*用好否定1.Themayorisverysatisfi
9、edinherwork.2.WhenIhearofthebirdssong,Ialwaysthinkofthespringtime.Themayorisneverdissatisfiedinherwork.Ineverhearofthebirdssongwithoutthinkingofthespringtime.3.Itispossibletomasteraforeignlanguagewithinashortperiodoftimeifyouuseagoodstudymethod.Itisnotimpossibletomasteraforeignlanguagewithinashortpe
10、riodoftimeifyouuseagoodstudymethod.*用好排比1.Frommyobservation,manypeopletodayspendtheirtimereceivingmoreandmoreeducation,workingmoreandmorehours,andmakingmoreandmoremoney.2.Aleaderwhohasrespectforotherpeopleatalllevelsofanorganization,fortheworktheydo,andfortheirabilities,desiresandneeds,willfindthatr
11、espectisreturned.3.Iaminfavorofequalrightsforwomen.IthinkwomenshouldespeciallyhavetherighttocompetewithmenforjobsonequaltermsTheyshouldgetthesamepayasmenforthe same job. They should also have equalopportunitiesforpromotion.I am in favor of equal rights for women,especiallytherighttocompetewithmenfor
12、jobsonequalterms,therighttogetthesamepayasmenforthesamejob,andtherighttohaveequalopportunitiesforpromotion.一.审题到位二.语言丰富三.示范有效目前，某某学校正在开展推选“校园形象大使”(imageambassadoroncampus)活动。假定你是该校的一名学生，请以书信的形式向校长推荐一位同学或者进行自荐，并结合具体事例阐明推荐的理由。开头段：1.Frommyperspective,themostsuitablepersonismyroommate,Sophia,whohasreall
13、ytaughtmewhattheword“excellence”means.2.Hearingtheactivityofselectinganimageambassadoroncampus,Idliketorecommendmyclassmate,Sophia,whoisourspiritualleader.3.Frommyperspective,Jackissignificantlybetterthananyothercandidateinourschool.4.MyrecommendationisatopstudentinmyclassnamedJack,whoenjoysagoodrep
14、utationamongallthestudentsofourschool.中间段：1.Hehassomanyadmirablepersonalqualitiesthatthereisnobettersuitablepersonforthisgreathonorinmyheart.2.Asisknowntoall,theimageambassadoroncampusisthesymbolofthewholeschoolstudents.3.Therefore,itsnecessaryforhimorhertogetgoodmarksinbothstudyingandsports.4.Anoth
15、erreason,whichisalsoveryimportant,isthathehascharmingappearanceandelegantbehavior.具体事例：1.Moreover,itwasherwarmheartthathadleftmeadeepimpression.Therewasonceaclassmateofherswhohadtroubleingettingalongwithothers.Hewasso frustrated that nearly tried to commit suicide.Fortunately,thankstoSophiascompanya
16、ndpatience,hewasinspiredtowalkoutofthedarkness.Hetoldme that she seemed to be an angel to him whodelightedhiswholeworld.2.MyconfidenceisbasedonhispreviousexperienceofparticipatinginModelUnitedNations.Representing China, Ling once served as anambassadortodiscussinternationalaffairs.“Ifirmlybelieve”,w
17、ithgesturesandcheerfulaccent,Lingsspeech was so stimulating and convincing thateveryone present was deeply shocked. With such perfectperformance,Ling canbecertainlyqualifiedfortheposition.结尾段：1.ItneverdawnedonmethatIcouldbethesameashe.3.Inanutshell,Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldgivemetheopportunityofbecomingourschoolsimageambassador.2.Itwouldbehighlyappreciatedifyoucouldtakemyrecommendationintoaccount.3.Asitisasymbolofaschoolsoverallstrength,selectingasuitableambassadorisofgreatimportance.Thank you!谢谢观看谢谢观看 希望提出指导与建议
