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1、写作写作题目：题目： Computer age Learning aim Talk about the usage of computers and your ideas on them.Have you seen these inventions? When talk about the most important invention of the world, what comes to your mind first?lTelephones _in 1876.lThey_ call people. (用途用途)were inventedare used toOur life has b
2、ecome_ (convenient) since cars were invented. _, cars cause a lot of air pollution for us.more and more convenientHoweveradvantagesdisadvantagesu Our life _ (已经大大改变）已经大大改变）_ （因为）（因为） the inventions of computers.uWe can_ (上网）上网）on computers. We can_(购物购物)on the Internet and so on.uBut if we spend _(太
3、多时间）太多时间）on computers, it will be bad for our study.go shoppingbecause oftoo much timehas greatly changedget on the Internet 电脑问世以来，大大改变了人们的生活。请围绕电脑问世以来，大大改变了人们的生活。请围绕下面的提示，写一篇下面的提示，写一篇8080词左右的英语短文谈谈电脑对词左右的英语短文谈谈电脑对我们生活的影响。倡议同学们恰当使用电脑。我们生活的影响。倡议同学们恰当使用电脑。提示：提示：1.1.发明时间：发明时间：19761976年年 2.2.最有用的发明之一最有
4、用的发明之一 ，如玩游戏、写文章、听音乐，如玩游戏、写文章、听音乐3.3.利用电脑上网，购物，聊天利用电脑上网，购物，聊天4.4.长时间使用电脑对视力及学习有害长时间使用电脑对视力及学习有害参考词汇：参考词汇：get on the Internet上网，上网，eyesight 视力视力 in the right way恰当的方式恰当的方式审审-列列-加加-连连-美美Think（审题）（审题） 体裁：体裁：_ 人称人称:_时态时态: _List（用简单句列出文章的要点）（用简单句列出文章的要点）The usage of computersAdvantagesDisadvantages说明文说明文
5、第三、一人称第三、一人称一般现在时一般现在时Add（加开头，结尾使文章完整）（加开头，结尾使文章完整）Connect(使用关联词，从句，过渡词）使用关联词，从句，过渡词）Beautify(使用好词好句美化文章）使用好词好句美化文章）ADD介绍产品用介绍产品用途途 Computers are used in/for Computers can helpdo 点明主题点明主题Computers are one of the most useful inventions in the world. 结尾结尾I think连词:as (everyone knows), before, after, w
6、hen, if, because过渡词：however, besides, also, whats more表示列举的词：for example, such as,总结性的短语，句子：in my opinion, in a word , in short, in general, I think审审-列列-加加-连连-美美The most useful inventioncomputer In the past few years, more and more inventions have come into our life. I think computers are one of th
7、e most useful inventions. We live in the “computer age”. Computers are used in many fields. They are very important because they can work faster and make nearly no mistakes. Computers can help people do a lot of work. Writers use them to write. Teachers use them to help teaching. They are also used
8、for studying by students. Whats more, we can use a computer to search for information. Computers are very useful and helpful in our life. They have changed our life and improved the quality of peoples life. They are our friends. I think everyone wants to have one.Sample 1开声朗读自己的文章，并开声朗读自己的文章，并从结构、人称
9、、时态、字从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。符号等方面进行自我修正。Task 1自我欣赏与修正自我欣赏与修正同伴互赏同伴互赏欣赏角度欣赏角度： 1.写作基本要求写作基本要求:人称人称, 时态；时态； 2. 要点齐全；要点齐全； 3. 结构结构: 开头，正文，结尾；开头，正文，结尾； 4. 好词好句。好词好句。Task 2欣赏与修正欣赏与修正 请请交换习作交换习作欣赏，用欣赏，用红笔划出红笔划出对方的对方的亮点亮点词、句词、句 , 并运用并运用改错符号改错符号找出不足，进行适当找出不足，进行适当修改修改。评分评分以满分以满分15分分为标准，
10、给同伴的习作打分。为标准，给同伴的习作打分。点评点评由亮点欣赏到不足的修正（篇章结构由亮点欣赏到不足的修正（篇章结构 分析分析-细细 节点评节点评) 集体赏析，共同进步集体赏析，共同进步Task 3 Computers have greatly changed our life since they were invented in 1976.They are one of the most useful inventions in the world. They are used to do many things, such as playing computer games, writi
11、ng articles and listening to music. Besides, we can use them to get on the Internet. Then we can do shopping and chat with friends online.Sample 2 However, computers also have disadvantages. If we spend too much time on computers, it is bad for our eyes. Whats more, spending too much time getting on
12、 the Internet will affect our study. In my opinion, we should use the computers in the right way.HOMEWORKRewrite your article and hand it in. 本本单单元元我我们们主主要要学学习习了了被被动动语语态态，学学会会利利用用被被动动语语态态谈谈论论发发明明的的历历史史、描描述述物物体体的的用用途途。此此类类文文体体属属于于说说明明文文，说说明明文文常常用用一一般般现现在在时时。写写此此类类文文章章应应明明确确说说明明的的先先后后顺顺序序，描描述述产产品品的的特特
13、点点和和用用途途，最最后后结合发明给人们生活带来的便利谈谈自己的感受。结合发明给人们生活带来的便利谈谈自己的感受。习作指导习作指导习作资料习作资料单词单词invention useful use important helpful change improve quality短语短语in the past few years, more and more, make no mistakes, be use for, help sb do sth句子句子I think computer is one of Computers are used for/inComputer can help. do. They have changed our life and improved常用句型：常用句型： 1. I think is a very useful invention. 我认为我认为是一项很有用的发明。是一项很有用的发明。2. was invented by 是由是由 (某人某人)发明的发明的3. was invented in 是在是在 (某时间某时间)发明的发明的 4. It was used for 它被用来它被用来 5. is made of 是由是由(材料材料)制成的制成的
