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1、Unit1Whatsthematter?单元主题写作单元主题写作一、话题分析本单元以谈论“健康与急救（Health and first aid）”为话题，针对健康与安全等问题，利用本单元学习的情态动词should等提出简单的建议。二、写作方法“总分总”法对健康与急救提建议总：总说健康的重要性；分：针对如何拥有健康，分层次、具体地提出建议和方法；总：总结概括以上提出的建议和方法，提出愿望。三、素材积累（一）对健康与急救提建议常用的词汇：healthyimportantnecessarydoctorkeepfruitstrongexercisesleepfeel sicklie downhave
2、a（good）restgo to hospitaltake breaksgive up（二）对健康与急救提建议常用的句型：开头句1.You are often ill，so I want to give you some advice.2.He doesnt sleep well at night.He feels tired.中间句1.You need to take breaks away from the computer.2.You shouldnt eat so much next time.结尾句1.Please look after yourself.I hope you wil
3、l get better soon.2.I hope you will feel better soon.句子升格（用it isto do句式）We must know ways to keep healthy.It is necessary for us to know ways to keep healthy.四、写作任务请结合你了解的健康知识，写一篇题目为“Ways to Keep Healthy”的短文。要求：80词左右。参考短语：a balanced diet均衡的饮食【写作模板】【高分作文】WaystoKeepHealthyHealthisveryimportanttous.Soi
4、tisnecessarytoknowwaystokeephealthy.Healthisveryimportanttous.Soitisnecessarytoknowwaystokeephealthy.Weshouldhaveabalanceddiet.Weshouldeatlotsoffruitandvegetables.Theyaregoodforhealth.Donteattoomuch.Andweshouldexercisealoteverydaytokeepstrong.Alsoweshouldsleepforabout8hoursatnightandneverworktoohard
5、.Remember，itsnotgoodtostayuptoolate.Dolikethis.Iamsurewecankeephealthy.Weshouldhaveabalanceddiet.Weshouldeatlotsoffruitandvegetables.Theyaregoodforhealth.Donteattoomuch.Andweshouldexercisealoteverydaytokeepstrong.Alsoweshouldsleepforabout8hoursatnightandneverworktoohard.Remember，itsnotgoodtostayuptoolate.Dolikethis.Iamsurewecankeephealthy.名师点评：本文运用“总分总”法客观、详实地介绍了如何保持健康。首先从“健康对于我们大家很重要”入题，从饮食、锻炼和休息三个方面提出了切实可行的建议。文章首尾照应，情态动词多次合理使用，增加了建议的中肯性。添彩点：It is necessary to.句型的使用，及a balanced diet，be good for和stay up等短语的正确使用，用祈使句来表示建议等都给文章增加了亮点。
