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1、第十课时（写作专题）一 六步作文法：审抓扩连改抄 首先确定5W1H,即who/what/when/why/where/how 抓要点，确定主要行为What happened? 扩展成句，形成基本语义单位。 连句成文（时间，空间，细节，连贯，呼应） 查错改错（要尽量剔除错误） 抄写（卷面不工整扣分）二 作文经典句型1 主语+is + the + 最高级+ 名词 +(that)+ I have ever seen (known/heard/had/read)Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen。海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。Mr
2、. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had。张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。Yao Ming is the tallest basketball player that I have ever seen。姚明是我所见过的最高的篮球运动员Liu Xiang is the most hardworking sportsman that I have ever seen。刘翔是我所见过的最勤奋的运动员。2Nothing is more important + than + to do sth.没什么比做某事更重要的事。例句：Nothing
3、is more important than to keep fit。没有比保持健康更重要的事。Nothing is more important than to potect our environment。没有什么比环保更重要的事。Nothing is more important than to gain knowledge。没有什么比学习知识更重要的事。3There is no denying that + S + V (不可否认的)例句：There is no denying that Nothing is more important than to potect our envi
4、ronment.不可否认的，没有什么比环保更重要的事。There is no denying that Lin Zhiling is the most charming actress I have ever seen.不可否认，林志玲是我所见过的最有魅力的女演员。4An advantage of doing sth. is that + 句子(干某事的优点是)例句：An advantage of taking exercises is that it can make us keep healthy.锻炼身体的优点是它可以让我们保持健康。5.The reason why + 句子 is th
5、at + 句子(的原因是)例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air。我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。6.The + 比较级 + S + V, the + 比较级 + S + V (愈愈)例句：The harder you work, the more progress you make。你愈努力，你愈进步。The more books we read, the more learned we become。我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。7.By +Ving,
6、xx can xx (通过，能够)例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy。通过做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。By reading, we can get more knowladge. 通过阅读，我们可以获得更多的知识。8.Those who xxx + V（那些的人)例句：Those who break the law should be punished。违法的人应该受处罚。9.That is the reason why xxx (那就是的原因)例句：Summer is hot.That is the reason why I
7、dont like it。夏天很炎热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。10.be closely related to xxx (与息息相关)例句：Taking exercise is closely related to health。 做运动与健康息息相关。11.Get into the habit of + VingWe should get into the habit of previewing and reviewing。我们应该养成预习和复习的习惯。12.Thanks to + N/Ving, xxx(因为，由于) Thank sb. for (doing) sth. 因为感谢某人例句：
8、Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream。因为他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。Thank you for helping me a lot. 谢谢你帮了我那么多。Thanks to Miss Qins help, I passed the examination。多亏秦老师的帮助，我通过了考试。13.have a great influence on xx (对有很大的影响)例句：Smoking has a great influence on our health。抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。14.In my opini
9、on，就我的看法例句：In my opinion, playing copmuter games not only takes much time but also is harmful to health.就我的看法玩电脑游戏既花费时间也有害健康。15As we all known 众所周知例句：As we all known that Hangzhou is a beautiful city. 众所周知杭州是座美丽的城市。三 中考英语作文范文（2011安徽省中考英语作文范文）如今，中学生的假期生活发生了很大变化。假定你是李明，美国的笔友Lisa想了解中国学生现在的假期生活。请写封回信。要点
10、如下：学习和休闲仍然重要;帮忙做家务或干农活;参加社会活动，做志愿者工作，帮助他人。注意：1.词数80一100;2.请结合实际增加细节，适当发挥;3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇 : volunteer 志愿者Im glad to have received your letter. Our holiday life has changed a lot. Learning and relaxing are still very important to us. Besides, we often help our parents do housework or farm w
11、ork. Through that, we realise how hard our parents work every day. And we can make a habit of laboring at the same time. Also, we take an active part in social activities as volunteers. Sometimes, we go to the streets to collect rubbish or go to the hospital to cheer up the sick children. We try our
12、 best to help people in need and make our hometown more beautiful. We find great pleasure in all these activities.Best wishes !（2012安徽省中考英语作文范文）假定你叫张华，最近从报纸上得知美国某公司将在你的家乡建一座工厂，请给该公司写封电子邮件。要点如下：表示欢迎：有利于家乡发展等；感到担忧：造成环境污染等；希望了解有关环保措施及更多信息。注意：1.词数80-100;2.请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥以使行文连贯；3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考范文：
13、Dear Sir or Madam，I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper thatyou are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However， s
14、ome of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection.Would you please offer us more information about it?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours faithfully， Zhang Hua(2013年安徽省中考英语作文范文) 今天是父亲节，假定你是李华，请给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件，谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下：表述你与父亲间的情感；为父亲制作一张卡片；帮助父亲做点事；陪父亲散步等。注意：1.词数80-100； 2.请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥； 3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear John,Its Fathers Day today. Its a special day, isnt it? _
