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1、雅思普通培训类（G类）写作（教师用书） 雅托教材编写委员会湛江市雅托英语培训中心 高等教育培训机构 电话：0759-2296349 网址： 地址：湛江市霞山区城市广场C幢1803室（即：沃尔玛超市的免费巴士候车处找电梯按门铃1803，上18楼）第一章 普通培训类小作文（书信篇）询问如何参加某体育俱乐部(1)题目大意分析 你是一位国际学生，而学校里却没有任何体育设施。要求你写信给附近一个体育俱乐部的经理，询问需要办理什么手续才能加入该俱乐部。 关键词汇分析 facility: 设施、设备 写作实例： Building a new childrens home will cost a lot of
2、 money, but be that as it may, there is an urgent need for the facility. inquire: 询问、咨询 写作实例： When the authorities inquired into his background, they found he had a criminal record. procedure: 程序、手续 写作实例： Social workers have standard procedures which they must follow when they are taking children aw
3、ay from their parents.布局清晰层次分明 Main Body 1 交代“写信目的或原因”： 我写此信的目的，是为了询问需要什么样的手续才可以参加贵俱乐部。 I am writing to inquire about the procedures that are needed to join your sports club. Main Body 2 叙述“重要事实一”： 我是一个来自中国的新生，在附近的皇家大学读书，离贵俱乐部只有两个街区。 As a new student from China, I study in the Royal College nearby,
4、just two blocks away from your club. Main Body 2 叙述“重要事实二”： 该校宣传手册上吹嘘有游泳池和灯光球场，但我失望地发现校园内无任何体育设施。 Attracted by their beautiful prospectus, which boasts of a large swimming pool and a spotlight tennis court, I discovered to my dismay that there are no sports facilities whatsoever on the campus. Main
5、Body 2 叙述“重要事实三”： 作为业余运动员的我实在难以容忍这样的局面，因此急于参加一个体育俱乐部。 Being an amateur athlete, I find this situation is almost intolerable and feel a strong urge to join a sports club immediately where I can participate in a wide range of sports activities. Main Body 2 叙述“重要事实四”： 经朋友介绍了贵俱乐部的良好设施，我非常感兴趣，想了解办理入会的手续。
6、 Impressed by what my friend told me about the excellent facilities in your club a few days ago, I am very interested in the standard procedures that I must follow before joining the club. Main Body 3 阐明对收信人的“期望或盼望”： 如能寄给我一些宣传册子，使我了解入会细节，或附表让我进行填写，我将不胜感激。 I would appreciate it very much if you could
7、 send me some brochures and let me know the details or some forms for me to fill out.投诉有质量问题的激光唱机(2)题目大意分析 你在当地的商店买了一台激光唱机，而几天后它竟然坏了。要求你写信给生产商，询问出了什么问题，并同时投诉店员的不良态度。另外，告诉他们该如何补救。 关键词汇分析 manufacturer: 生产商、制造商 写作实例： Over the years, they have forged an international reputation as a successful manufactu
8、rer of computer equipment. assistant: 助理、助手 写作实例： The shop assistant said that he needed to get his supervisor to authorize my refund. handle: 处理、应付 写作实例： Some people are brilliant with computers, but have no idea how to handle other people.布局清晰层次分明 Main Body 1 交代“写信目的或原因”： 我写此信，是因为我购买的一台你厂生产的激光唱机出现
9、了问题。我是在一家你厂授权的零售店买的。 Im writing to you about a problem that I am having with the CD player produced by your factory. I bought it from one of your authorized branch stores named “Passion” here on May 1, 2004. Main Body 2 叙述“重要事实一”： 由于该唱机无法用遥控来操控，我就把它带到商店，希望进行维修或更换。 Having found it unable to be contro
10、lled by the attached remote, I took it to that shop, intending to have it repaired or changed if necessary as you have described in the instructions. Main Body 2 叙述“重要事实二”： 但是其中一个店员却坚持要收取 5 元的修理费，而保修卡上印有三个月免费保修的承诺。 However, one of the shop assistants, whose badge number was 17, insisted on charging
11、me 5 for mending while the service card promises free service within 3 months of the purchase. Main Body 2 叙述“重要事实三”： 更为恶劣的是，他的态度极为无礼，当我给他看带有日期的发票时，他竟无动于衷。 What was worse, instead of acting in a polite manner, he turned a deaf ear to my request when I tried to show him the invoice with the exact dat
12、e when I bought it and your guarantee of free service. Main Body 3 阐明对收信人的“期望或盼望”： 如果你们能对此事立即予以关注，并在月底之前派人来解决该问题，我将不胜感激。 I shall appreciate it very much if you could pay immediate attention to this matter and send a responsible person to solve the problem for me by the end of this month. Main Body 3
13、 提醒收信人可能发生的“严重后果”： 否则的话，恐怕我只有向当地的消费者协会提出正式的投诉。 Otherwise, I am afraid that I have to lodge a formal complaint to the local Consumers Association.投诉挡在家门口的一棵大树(3)题目大意分析 你是一位当地居民，刚搬入一个新的小区，其中有一棵巨树，正好挡在你家门口。要求你写信给当地政府部门，抱怨该树对你的生活造成的种种不便。 关键词汇分析 resident: 居民 写作实例： He entered the United States in 1988 as
14、a permanent resident because of his marriage to a U.S. citizen. neighborhood: 附近地区、生活小区 写作实例： A neighborhood watch scheme has been established linking each home, where every door is permanently locked against intruders. authority: 有关当局、当地政府 写作实例： There was a lengthy debate about whether local author
15、ities are spending enough on the arts.布局清晰层次分明 Main Body 1 交代“写信目的或原因”： 我写此信，是为了投诉政府环境部门移植了一棵巨大的橡树在我们小区里面。 I am writing to lodge an official complaint about the transplantation of a gigantic oak tree to our neighborhood by the Environmental Department of the local government. Main Body 2 叙述“重要事实一”： 作为新来的居民，我发现这棵巨树的存在给我们的家庭生活带来了诸多不便。 As a new resident who just moved to the new neighborhood, I find this giant tree extremely annoying because its presence brings a lot of inconvenience to our family life. Main Body 2 叙述“重要事实二”： 其浓密的树叶和繁茂的枝条挡住了我们的城市风景，并完全遮蔽了寒冬中的日照
