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1、Period Writing |读后续写回忆亲人本单元的写作主要是读后续写，写作主题是回忆亲人。在写作此类型文章时要注意以下几点：1原文中的人称和时态。既然是读后续写，就要和原文的人称和时态保持一致。2原文中的人物信息。主题是回忆亲人，对原文出现的人物特点要精准掌握。3原文中的故事发展。在续写故事时，故事的发展脉络和逻辑要清晰合理。1However decisive she may be at the office, she will secondguess herself constantly as a mother.任凭她在办公室多么果断，作为母亲，她仍经常后悔当时的决定。2I want
2、my sister to know that every decision will no longer be routine.我想让我妹妹知道，她将再也不能按照常规做出决定。3My mommy made it just for me.我妈妈专门为我做的。4At the front of the first car looking out the window at the track that lay ahead were a man and his son.在头节车厢的最前面，坐着一个男人和他的儿子，他们正透过窗户观赏着一直往前延伸的铁道。5He keeps begging his par
3、ents to let him see his sister.他一直乞求父母，让他进去看看小妹妹。6The other woman that my wife wanted me to visit was my mother.我妻子想让我去拜访的另一个女人，就是我的妈妈。7Dad never tried to hug or kiss me when I was a child.在我很小的时候，爸爸从来不抱我，也从来不亲吻我。8What makes a good mother anyway?是什么能成就一个好母亲？阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。I was touche
4、d through experiences, memories, books, stories, animals, angels, and most of all other people. People have moved me and molded (对影响重大) me with moments of love and examples of kindness. One time on the day before Christmas many years ago when I was a minimum wage mill (工厂) worker, I found myself wit
5、h very little money and very little time to buy my small children a few simple toys. I knew that they would have to be cheap ones and I hoped my children would like them. I hated not having enough to give them more. I hated being poor. And I hated feeling bad at Christmas rather than happy.I pulled
6、into a store parking lot and counted my money again. It wasnt much but maybe I could get something small with it. As I was getting out of the car I noticed the Salvation Army (救世军) bell ringer at the entrance. I felt bad again because I didnt feel I could spare anything to give him. I started walkin
7、g towards the entrance when two cars pulled into empty parking spots in front of me. The first was a shiny, new Cadillac and I felt a twinge of jealousy when I saw it. “How nice，” I thought, “would it be to have enough money to buy a car like that.” The second car, though, was an ancient sedan (轿车)
8、more beatup and rusty than the one I was driving. A man hopped (冲) out of the Cadillac and hurried into the store right past the bell ringer without a second glance. Out of the old sedan came a young mother with three small children in tow (紧随着). Her clothes looked as worn out as her car, yet she st
9、opped in front of the bell ringer, smiled, opened her purse, and dropped a bill in his red kettle (钱罐)注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：I stood there for a minute in astonishment. Paragraph 2：In that second a stream of warmth touched m
10、e, my jealousy and hatred (憎恨)left me, and all the love and joy filled me. 精彩范文Paragraph 1：I stood there for a minute in astonishment. “Maybe，” I thought to myself, “its better to be rich on the inside instead of the outside.” That rich man should have done something to help the poor, but he didnt.
11、Sometimes it was really wrong to judge a person by his or her appearance. I really had respect for the poor mother from the bottom of my heart. She set a good example for her children to follow.Paragraph 2：In that second a stream of warmth touched me, my jealousy and hatred (憎恨)left me, and all the
12、love and joy filled me. I searched for a bill out of my own purse, dropped it in the red kettle, and wished the bell ringer a merry Christmas. I found a few fun things to give my kids and drove home with my heart singing. I knew it was going to be a wonderful Christmas. I could hardly wait to see my
13、 children enjoying the presents bought for them, including a special giftlove for those in need.总评文章整体写作流畅自然，心理和精神层面的描写细腻生动，体现了变化和转折，充满正能量。亮点呈现(1)“That rich man should have done something . ”中should have done表示“应该做某事而实际上没有做”，准确体现出作者对富人行为的批评态度。(2)“from the bottom of my heart”，“set a good example”词组的运
14、用准确得当。(3)“with my heart singing”，“see my children enjoying”结构的运用简洁生动，令文章句式显得高级。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。My Dads Best FlowerI remember my first home was a small apartment on the second floor with a lovely and spacious balcony. When my mum was busy in the kitchen, she let me stay on the balcony watching the kids playing in the street. On that balcony I played sometimes with my elder sister, Maria. She was seven years old and when my mum was absent, she was like a mother to me. The balcony was a great hobby pl
