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1、主旨升华助人型在读后续写中传达积极向上的正能量，是取得高分的要素之一。主人公受到别人的帮助或者帮助别人，是续写的重要主题之一。运用以下两种技巧，轻松写出助人型的主旨升华句。升华技巧一：from then on+行动1.From then on, I would try my best to help sb. like sb. Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future.从那时起，我会尽我最大的努力去帮助某人。只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。【点评】本句表达积极帮助他人，并传递这种正
2、能量属于升华了文章，且使用倒装句，故属于高级加分亮点句。2.From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness that the Mexican family offered me.从那天起，每次我遇到需要帮助的人，我总是联系他们，希望把墨西哥家庭给我的善意传递给我。3.From then on, I made up my mind to pass on“love”to others. Just as a sa
3、ying goes:“Rose given and fragrance in hands.”从那时起，我就决定把“爱”传递给别人。正如一句谚语所说：“赠人玫瑰，手留余香。”4.From then on , Bernard made up his mind to help someone who needs help. Only in this way, could more and more people help each ot从那时起，伯纳德就决定去帮助那些需要帮助的人。只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。升华技巧二：感动+感悟1.【2022年1月浙江卷读后续写】From this
4、project, we also learned the significance ofteammates. Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.从这个项目中，我们也了解到了队友的重要性。正如俗话说，一个人可以走得很远，但一群人可以走得更远。2.【山东省潍坊市五县市2022-2023学年高三10月统考英语试题】From the experience, I was fully aware of the responsibility and great v
5、alue as a doctor, which, therefore, inspired me to continue to pursue my dream.、从这些经验中，我充分意识到作为一名医生的责任和巨大的价值，因此，这激发了我继续追求我的梦想。3.I held the paper bag tightly, tears rolling down without control. It is love that makes the world go around, which I felt deep in my heart.我紧紧地握着纸袋，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来。正是爱让这世界转动，在我
6、心里深深感受到了这一点。【点评】本句使用了独立主格结构还有一个强调句型，另外运用了非限制性定语从句，这些不仅传神地升华了主题，而且都是作文中的高分句型。主旨升华成长型在改变中成长，是读后续写的一个重要主题。而改变的表达，可以从以下几个方面来进行升华。升华技巧一：学习知识促成长Its never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.学习永远为时不晚。每个人都有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。【点评】individual这里表示“个人,
7、个体”;make more attempts“做更多尝试”。升华技巧二：发挥天赋促成长Actually,every individual possesses talent.Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end.事实上，每个人都有天赋。当你发现它的时候你要勇敢，也要努力。你能最终创造奇迹。【点评】possess“拥有”;create miracles表示“创造奇迹”。升华技巧三：追逐梦想促成长1.【2022年新高考I卷】That day, David got a sp
8、ecial award for his courage. He was shining on the winners podium. David, with so many birth problems, was a hero to all of us and most importantly, to himself!那天，大卫因为他的勇气而获得了一个特别奖。他在获胜者的领奖台上闪耀着光芒。大卫有这么多出生问题，是我们所有人的英雄，最重要的是，是他自己的英雄！2.Its never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp ever
9、y opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dreams.追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会,你就有机会实现梦想。3.As long as we dare to dream and dont let difficulties get in our way, anything is possible.只要我们敢于梦想,不被困难所阻挡,一切皆有可能。【点评】take full advantage of“充分利用”;realize your dreams表示“实现梦想
10、”。升华技巧四：战胜恐惧促成长Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear and accomplish your goal.战胜恐惧和实现目标,需要决心和乐观。升华技巧五：战胜自卑促成长1.【2023届江苏省南京市第一中学高三一模试题】In class, I tried my best to seize every opportunity to improve myself. Gradually, I began to have normal conversations with my classmates
11、 and got along well with them.Everything in life was becoming more and more beautiful.在课堂上，我尽力抓住一切机会来提高自己。渐渐地，我开始和我的同学们进行正常的交谈，并和他们相处得很好。生活中的一切都在变得越来越美好了。2.I smiled as I eventuallyrealized the real source of confidence. Now,I am proud of what I look like and much happier,because I have realized it i
12、s your personality that decides who you truly are.我笑了,因为我最终意识到了自信的真正来源。现在，我为我的样子感到骄傲,而且更快乐,因为我已经意识到，决定你真正是谁的是你的个性。【点评】eventually表示“最后,终于”;personality表示“个性”。升华技巧六：克服困难促成长The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties. We should be brave to face them. As long as we don
13、t give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goat success) finally.通往成功的路不会平坦,它会充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，们最终会实现我们的目标。【点评】smooth表示“平坦的;短语彰显高级overcome all the difficulties；make every effort; as long as。升华技巧七：战胜消极促成长Attitude is more importa
14、nt than facts for us. We can- not change our past; we cannot change the fact. However, the only thing we can do is hold a positive attitude.态度对我们来说比事实更重要。我们不能改变我们的过去;我们不能改变事实。然而,我们唯一能做的就是保持积极的态度。【点评】Attitude表示“态度”;positive attitude就是“积极的态度”。“积极”思维，最终让我们成长改变,这种主题,是读后续写中比较常见的正能量的升华。主旨升华脱困型在往年高考真题中,曾经考
15、过:拍摄北极熊遇险;父子骑马迷路;骑车游玩遇狼脱险。读后续写常涉及到某些危险的情节,我们就把这种类型的文章归为“脱险”型，如：火灾、森林遇到猛兽等。可以采取下列升华技巧。升华技巧一：经历+感悟1.That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆中。2.Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that theres always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。多么难忘的经历啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困难。升华技巧二：名言/句型+感悟1.Life will hit us unexpectedly, but there is always someone to help us out and there is always hope waiting for us.生活总会出乎意料地打击我们，但总有人帮助我们,总有希望在等着我们。3.There is no perfect life i
