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1、English Writing 一、例题精析书面表达（满分25分）题目：请根据下面的提示，以 My good friend为题，写一篇70字左右的短文来介绍你的好友Jimmy。省略号出自己补充适当内容。1 阳光中学七年级一班的学生。家离学校不远，每天步行上学。大约要15 分钟。2喜欢上体育，最喜欢打篮球，经常放学后和同学们做运动。3作业不太多，有时间和同学聊天。还喜欢听音乐4 每天努力学习，希望。 要求： 1.语句通顺，意思连接。2.包含以上所有要点。3.词数80左右。【题目分析】（一）审题可得1. 文体：记叙文2. 时态：一般现在时为主，还有一般时。3. 要点把握：1) Jimmy是阳光中学
2、七年级一班的学生。2) Jimmy家离学校不远，他每天步行上学。步行时间：15分钟3) 他喜欢上体育，最喜欢打篮球，经常放学后和同学们做运动。4) 每天作业不太多，有时间和同学聊天。还喜欢听音乐5) 每天努力学习，希望。（二）要点组织1）Jimmy是阳光中学七年级一班的学生。Jimmy is a student of Class1 Grade 7 at Sunshine Middle School.2）Jimmy家离学校不远，他每天步行上学。步行时间：15分钟 Jimmy lives near his school. He goes to school on foot everyday. It
3、 takes him 15 minutes to walk there.3）他喜欢上体育，最喜欢打篮球，经常放学后和同学们做运动。He likes to have sports lessons. His favourite sport is basketball. He often does sports with his classmates after school.4）每天作业不太多，有时间和同学聊天。还喜欢听音乐Jimmy doesnt have much homework, so he has some time to talk with his classmates. He als
4、o likes listening to music.5）每天努力学习，希望。He works hard every day. He hopes he will be good at all the subjects/ a top student.（三）分析题目，写好开头和结尾，恰当增加连接句子和连接词，使文章一气呵成。My good friendI have a good friend named Jimmy. He is a student of Class1 Grade 7 at Sunshine Middle School. Jimmy lives near his school. H
5、e goes to school on foot every day. It takes him 15 minutes to walk there. As we all know, he likes to have sports lessons and his favourite sport is basketball. He often does sports with his classmates after school. Jimmy doesnt have much homework, so he has some time to talk with his classmates. H
6、e also likes listening to music. Jimmy works hard every day, because he hopes he will be good at all the subjects/ a top student.二、中考考点要求1. 根据中文提示，写一篇100字左右的英文短文。(尽量不要超过120个单词)2. 内容完整，用词准确，句子通顺、连接、单词拼写和标点符号准确，书写工整。3. 有分段，有恰当的连词，有复杂句式。三、作文七注意（一）从整体着眼,提纲挈领扣题意1.审清文体 2. 选准人称 3. 用好时态 4. 突出要点（二）避免使用汉语式英语，
7、尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。句型可交替使用，以避免重 复和呆板。（三）多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。（四）注意语法、句法知识的灵活使用。（五）谋篇布局写好篇章结构【抓两头促中间】（六）检查修改文章: 认真检查，改正错误。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的 连接性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。所以，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：1）格式是否有错。2）拼写有无错误。3）语言是否用错。4）是否遗漏要点5)时态、语态错误。6)标点和大小写错误。7）人称是否用错。（七）写好草稿（假如时间允许的话）, 然后再抄到答卷上。书面表达要特别注意书
8、写工整，卷面整洁。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接相关。四、谋篇布局写好篇章结构【抓两头促中间】（一）作文万能结构示意图Middle 正文Ending 结尾concluding sentence 结论句-对全文的总结和概括。【结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应】supporting sentences 支持句-用例子、实事或数据围绕主题展开表达、讨论。【注意使用连接词】topic sentence 主题句-说出文中的要点、核心问题【写好开头，好的开始是成功的一半】Beginning开头（二）开头、结尾和正文三大板块的训练【写好开头，好的开始是成功的一半】Good beginning is half
9、 done.1. 仔细审题，提炼和归纳主题句2. 造主题句训练Make a topic sentence.1）SmokingAs we all know, smoking is a bad habit.Many students say smoking is fun, but I dont think so. As everybody knows, smoking is bad for our health. 2）The Spring FestivalI will never forget the Spring Festival.The Spring Festival plays an imp
10、ortant part in our life. Many people say that Christmas is more popular than the Spring Festival. But I dont think so. 3）Learning EnglishAs we all know, English becomes more and more popular/ important.Many people say its difficult to learn English. But I dont think so. 4）To be a volunteer for the 1
11、6th Asian Games As we all know, the 16th Asian Games is coming soon. I want to be a volunteer for it.A volunteer plays an important part in the 16th Asian Games. 5）A School TripI will never forget the school trip last week.【写好结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应】1. 与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点, 注意避免重复句式。2. 结尾经典词组、句型： At last/ Finally .
12、最后 In a word, . 总来说之 In short, . 简言之 We hope that 我们希望 Lets try our best to . I believe if we can., . will be . What a .! / How.!3.根据主题概括训练Make a concluding sentence1）Keeping healthyLets try our best to keep healthy. In short, its important to have good habits and keep healthy.2）Helping othersI beli
13、eve if we can help others, the world will be more and more beautiful.3）To be a green consumer(绿色消费者)Lets try our best to be a green consumer. In one word, its necessary for us to protect the environment.4）Beijing How beautiful Beijing is! Why not come to Beijing and enjoy yourself?【正文：语言简洁，层次分明】1.长句
14、短句交叉使用最好。2.基础一般的同学要尽量使用简单句，文章算不上完美，但很实用，基础好的同学要恰当写些从句提升档次。3.把握要点，层次清晰。4.注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连接，注意适当使用连词，例如：and ,so ,or, but, become正文：巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气需要熟记的连接词有：1、按事情发展的先后或时间顺序 1）Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly 2）first, then/next, after that/ next, finally3) soon, suddenly, at that moment , as soon as, from n
15、ow on, at the same time, not.until, before, after, when , while, during2、表示并列not only. but also, both. and, either .or, neither.nor，on (the) one handon the other hand3、表示举例或补充 1）for example 2）besides / whats more/ whats worse4、表示转折 however, but，although, instead of5、表示原因 thanks to, because of，because6、表示结果 as result (of) , so ，so.that, such.that, 7、表目的 in order to, so that8、表比较 the same as, than, o
