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1、读后续写读后续写读后续写读后续写 The event(that stands out in Toms memory)happened one morning when Tom was only ten years old.He was at home with his elder sister Jane.Tom was doing his homework when he heard raised voices.At first,he thought nothing of it since customers in the motorcycle shop directly below thei
2、r flat often became loud,but he soon realized this time it was different.“Quick!Quick!Remove the motorcycles from the shop.”Someone shouted.Then a thick burning smell filled the air.When Tom opened the front door of their flat to investigate,(a thick cloud of)smoke greeted him.The motorcycle shop ha
3、d caught fire and people were running and crying.Jane,(who had been playing the violin in her room),hurried to the living room.They rushed out of the door and along the corridor(走廊)through the smoke.They were heading towards the stairway at the far end of the corridor when Jane suddenly stopped in h
4、er track.She turned around and headed back the way they came.Tom had no idea (what she was doing,but he followed her.)Jane had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s(who lived next door to them),(who they/called/Makcik.)Jane began banging on Makciks door,but got no answer.As the smoke thickened aro
5、und them,Tom could see many of their neighbours-some still in their pajamas(睡衣)-running for safety.The thought of fear crossed his mind.“She would have run for safety like everyone else!”Tom cried.However,Jane refused to give up.“I know Makciks still inside.”She said she was familiar with Makciks da
6、ily routine and was certain she would still be sleeping.She pounded against the door.“Go downstairs.Go now!Go!”What/HowWhat/HowWhen/WhereWhen/WhereWhoWhoWhy Why SettingCharacterPlotThemeWhenwhowhereone morningone morningTom&Jane(Toms Jane(Toms elder elder sister)sister)Narrator叙事者叙事者“third person”pe
7、rspective 第三人第三人称视角称视角Tense:_SimplepasttenseMomSettingCharactera flat a flat building in building in flames flames Character analysisDetails.Jane suddenly stopped in her track.She turned around and headed back the way they came.Tom had no idea (what she was doing,but he followed her.).Jane had sudde
8、nly remembered the lady in her 70s(who lived next door to them),(who they/called/Makcik.).she was familiar with Makciks daily routine and was certain she would still be sleeping.She pounded against the door.Work out the conflict or the climaxBeginningDevelopmentConflictClimax/Ending.The motorcycle s
9、hop had caught fire and people were running and crying.Remember to solve the conflict.Tom was at home with his elder sister Jane.He was doing his homework when he heard raised voices.As the smoke thickened around them,Tom could see many of their neighbours-some still in their pajamas(睡衣睡衣)-running f
10、or safety.The thought of fear crossed his mind.PlotA.an emergency.B.a fire.C.Thoughtfulness and kindness in a fire emergency.Jane suddenly stopped in her track.She turned around and headed back the way they came.Jane had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s(who lived next door to them),(who they/
11、called/Makcik.).clue 线索线索Theme【Paragraph1】Tom noticed the flame(火焰)was reaching up 根据第根据第1自然段给出的首句，自然段给出的首句，可以判定可以判定：火情危急，已由一楼冲至他们所居住楼层。Analyze Analyze the 2 given sentencesthe 2 given sentences and the original passage and the original passage Add some details by raising questions Add some details
12、by raising questions 【Paragraph2】.Analyze Analyze the 2 given sentencesthe 2 given sentences and the original passage and the original passage Add some details by raising questions Add some details by raising questions Luckily,some neighbors (passing by)stopped and offered help.根据第2自然段首句 可以判定：她们姐弟俩一
13、直没下楼，所以，路过的邻居看到他们的举动后才会停下来并提供帮助。那么，他们在做什么呢？。可以朝着这个方向发散思维，构思情节，方能达到完美收尾效果。所见所所闻闻所感所思外貌描写环境描写语言描写动作描写心理描写情感描写所所见见所所做做所所感感Appearance/Surroundings Conversations/LanguagesBehavior/Actions/VerbsEmotions/Feelings通通过细节描写呈描写呈现出情出情节的的_跌宕起伏跌宕起伏UP-DOWN-UPUse the descriptive techniques to enrich the details 【Par
14、agraph 1】Tom noticed the flame(火焰)was reaching up.Frozen with fear,he stood rooted to the spot.He comprehended the gravity of the situation and held Janes hand tightly.Both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging.Time seemed to stand still,though they were probably there for only two or t
15、hree minutes.Tom begged Jane to run for safety as quickly as possible.Jane tried to shield her nose from the choking smoke and shook her head.She kept pounding against the door.Tom burst out crying.环境烘托境烘托心理描写心理描写心理描写心理描写 【Paragraph 2】Luckily,some neighbors (passing by)stopped and offered help.A sen
16、se of strength immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Janes mind.She told them Ms.Makcik must be still in the room.They forced the door open with all their might.Sure enough,Makcik was lying in bed,unconscious.She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital,(where she finally came to herself.)People in the neighbourhood felt relieved and Jane and Tom were very happy.动作描写作描写心理描写心理描写THANK YOU!
