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1、读后续写读后续写读后续写读后续写 A man came home from work late,tired and irritated(不耐烦的),【to find his 5-yead-old son waiting for him at the door.】“Daddy,may I ask you a question?”“Yeah sure,what is it?”replied the man.“Daddy,how much do you make an hour?”“Thats none of your business.Why do you ask such a thing?”th
2、e man said angrily.“I just want to know.Please tell me,how much do you make an hour?”pleaded the little boy.“If you must know,I make MYM20 an hour.”“Oh,”the little boy replied,with/his head/down.Looking up,he said,“Daddy,may I borrow MYM10?”The father was angry,“If the only reason (you asked that)is
3、 so you can borrow some money to buy a silly toy or some other nonsense,then you march yourself straight to your room and go to bed.Think about why you are being so selfish.I work hard every day for such childish behaviour.”The boy quietly went to his room and shut the door.The man sat down and,star
4、ted to get even angrier about the little boys question.How dare he ask such a question only to get some money?After about an hour or so,the man had calmed down,and started to think:Maye there was something (he really needed to buy with that MYM10 )and he really didnt ask for money very often.The man
5、 went to the door of the little boys room and opened the door.“Are you asleep,son?”he asked.“No,daddy,Im awake,”replied the boy.“Ive been thinking,maye I was too hard on you earlier,”said the man.“Its been a long day and I took out the anger on you.Heres the MYM10 (you asked for).”The little boy sat
6、 straight up,smiling.“Oh,thank you,daddy!”he yelled.Then,reaching under his pillow he pulled out some crumpled(皱皱巴巴的)up bills.What/HowWhat/HowWhen/WhereWhen/WhereWhoWhoWhy Why SettingCharacterPlotThemeWhenwhowherelate at late at nightnightaboy&his&his fatherfatherNarrator叙事者叙事者“third person”perspect
7、ive 第三人第三人称视角称视角Tense:_SimplepasttenseSettingCharacterthe boys the boys homehomeCharacter analysisDetails.A man came home from work late,tired and irritated(不耐烦的).The father was angry,“If the only reason (you asked that)is so you can borrow some money to buy a silly toy or some other nonsense,then y
8、ou march yourself straight to your room and go to bed.Think about why you are being so selfish.I work hard every day for such childish behaviour.”.“I just want to know.Please tell me,how much do you make an hour?”pleaded the little boy.Work out the conflict or the climaxBeginningDevelopmentConflictC
9、limax/EndingThe boy asked how much his father make an hour and then wanted to borrow MYM1o from his fatherRemember to solve the conflict.Amancamehomefromworklate,tiredandirritated(不耐烦不耐烦的的),tofindhis5-yead-oldsonwaitingforhimatthedoor.ThefathergavetheMYM10totheboyashewished,onlytofindtheboyalreadyha
10、dhadsomemoney.PlotA.a rude and rageous father.B.a poor boy.C.a naughty and greedy boy.D.a touching and thought-provoking parent-child story.“Daddy,how much do you make an hour?”.“If you must know,I make MYM20 an hour.”.“Daddy,may I borrow MYM10?”clue 线索线索Theme【Paragraph1】The man,seeing that the boy
11、already had money,started to get angry again.根据第根据第1自然段给出的首句，自然段给出的首句，可以判定：第1段开头应该是父亲的咆哮式的责备，Analyze Analyze the 2 given sentencesthe 2 given sentences and the original passage and the original passage Add some details by raising questions Add some details by raising questions 根据第2自然段首句 Not knowing
12、what his son meant,the father just stood there,waiting for his boys explanation.可以判定：第1段结尾处应该描写到儿子说出的一番话。第2段首先描写儿子这么做的初心；继而父亲的反应；大方向应该是：结局完美，具有教育意义。【Paragraph2】.Analyze Analyze the 2 given sentencesthe 2 given sentences and the original passage and the original passage Add some details by raising qu
13、estions Add some details by raising questions Not knowing what his son meant,the father just stood there,waiting for his boys explanation.根据第2自然段首句 可以判定：第2段首先应该描写儿子这么做的初心；继而父亲的反应；大方向应该是：结局完美，具有教育意义。所见所所闻闻所感所思外貌描写环境描写语言描写动作描写心理描写情感描写所所见见所所做做所所感感Appearance/Surroundings Conversations/LanguagesBehavior/
14、Actions/VerbsEmotions/Feelings通通过细节描写呈描写呈现出情出情节的的_跌宕起伏跌宕起伏UP-DOWN-UPUse the descriptive techniques to enrich the details 【Paragraph 1】The man,seeing that the boy already had money,started to get angry again.“How can you be so selfish?Why do you want more money since you already have these bills?”The
15、 father could hardly hold his anger back and inquired with/two eyebrows/knotted into one.With/tears/in his eyes,the little boy slowly and carefully counted out his money,and then looked up at his father,replying,“Because I didnt have enough before,but now I do.”心理心理描写描写动作行作行为描写描写心理心理描写描写 【Paragraph
16、2】Not knowing what his son meant,the father just stood there,waiting for his boys explanation.Wiping away his tears and with/an innocent smile/appearing on his face,the boy requested in a relieved voice,“Daddy,I have MYM 20 now.Can I buy an hour from you?Please come home early tomorrow.I want to have dinner with you.”Hearing the boys small but sincere request,the father couldnt help shedding tears.Realising he was too busy with his business to spare some time with his beloved ones,he gathered hi
