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1、第第12讲过渡在写作中的应用讲过渡在写作中的应用一、魔法导航一、魔法导航(一)恰当地使用过渡语。过渡语可增强句子之间的连贯性,它主要包括起连接作用的副词和起过渡作用的插入语等。如:(1)Meanwhile(同时),somebeautifulpaper-cuttingworks,collectedfromalloverthecountry,willbeexhibitedthere.(2017课标全国卷)(2)Theincreaseinthebox-officeincomecanbeattributedtoseveralfac-tors.Firstly/Tobeginwith/Tostartwit
2、h(首先),thequalityoflifehasimprovedandwatchingfilmsisregardedasagoodmeansofentertain-ment.Inaddition/Besides/Whatsmore(另外),filmingtechnologyhasadvancedandmorequalityfilmsareonoffer.Moreover/Also(此外),theInternetplaysavitalrole.表时间atfirst,then,afterwards,before,after,intheend,later,inthefuture,immediate
3、ly表顺序first,second,then,lastly,finally,lastbutnotleast表并列或递进besides,whatsmore,inaddition,also,moreover,furthermore,worsestill表个人观点inmyopinion/view,frommypointofview,asfarasImconcerned表总结inaword,ingeneral,tosumup,allinall,insummary,inconclusion,generallyspeaking,inbrief表转折或对比however,onthecontrary,yet,
4、bycomparison,bycontrast,ontheotherhand表因果therefore,thus,asaresult,so同学们要熟记下表中在写作中常用的过渡语:(二)正确使用段落主题句和总结句。段落主题句和总结句可以使文章首尾呼应,在意义上形成一个整体,从而在宏观层次上达到增强句子连贯性的目的。如:April12ismemorablebecauseourclasshadameaningfulexperienceonthatday.Inthemorning,webicycledtothesuburbstoplanttrees,talkingandlaughingalltheway
5、.Uponarrival,webegantoworkimmediately.Somewerediggingholes.Somewerecarryingandplantingyoungtrees.Otherswerewateringthem.Aftergettingtheworkdone,weputupaboardremindingpeopletoprotectthetrees.Beforeleavingwetooksomephotostorecordourgreenaction.Seeingthelinesoftrees,weallhadasenseofachievement.Wefeelit
6、sourdutytoprotectandbeautifyourenvironment.【评析】在段落的开头作者用一个句子点出了段落中心思想,在文章的结尾再次用一个句子表达了自己参加“绿色行动”的感受,从而升华了主题。另外,在中间部分作者通过合理运用inthemorning,uponar-rival,aftergettingtheworkdone,beforeleaving和seeingthelinesoftrees等过渡语把活动的整个过程以时间顺序有机地融为一体,很好地体现了文章的连贯性,值得大家学习和模仿。二、学以致用二、学以致用1.完美文章完美文章在横线上填上合适的过渡语或过渡句使上下句连
7、贯。(1)Inordertostudywell,weneedtoplaysportssothat/inorderthatwecankeepfit.(2)Manypeoplesuggestthattheparentsshouldlistenmoretotheirchil-dren,sotheywillunderstandthembetter.(3)ImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecour
8、se,asyouwillbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.(4)Therearebasicallytwowaystogetworkdone.Oneistoworkindi-vidually.Inthisway,peoplecandecidebythemselveswhentostartworkandhowtodoit.Whatsmore,theywillbeabletolearnhowtosolveproblemsontheirown.Peoplemayalsochoosetoworkinateam,whe
9、retheycanlearnfromeachotherandhelpeachother.Besides/Inaddition,theymayworkoutbetterwaystogetworkdonebydiscussion.2.话题写作话题写作【本期话题】地点介绍【写作微练】请根据下面的提示,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。1.我们的祖国位于亚洲的东部,面积约为960万平方千米,人口约为13亿;2.历史悠久,文化丰富;3.有很多闻名世界的旅游资源,如长城、九寨沟等;4.在过去的三十年发生了巨大变化。注意文章的连贯性。答案答案Onepossibleversion:Locatedintheeasto
10、fAsia,ourhomelandisagreatcountrywithalonghis-toryandrichculture.Itcoversanareaofabout9,600,000squarekilometerswithapopulationofabout1.3billion.Inaddition,therearealotofworld-famoustouristsitesinChina,suchastheGreatWall,Jiuzhaigouandsoon,whichattractagoodmanyvisitorsallovertheworldeveryyear.Muchtoour
11、pride,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourcountryinthepast30years.三、实战提能三、实战提能假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon在网上发帖,希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平,她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿;2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由;3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议;4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。注意:1.词数120左右,开头语已为你写好;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。文章体裁应用文主要人称第一人称和第二人称主体时态一般现
12、在时要点分解1.表达帮助Sharon的意愿2.说明自己能胜任辅导的理由3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议4.提出自己学习英语的具体需求我会审题我会审题我会联想我会联想1.词汇铺路词汇铺路(1)乐意willing(2)胜任bequalifiedfor(3)获得二等奖winprize(4)建议advice/suggestion/tip(5)养成的习惯formthehabitof(6)合理使用makeproperuseof我会表达Hi,Sharon,ThisisLiXia.IlearnedfromyourpostthatyouwanttoimproveyourMandarin.LiXia答案答案Onepo
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14、izeintheMan-darinContestheldinourcitylastyear.WhenitcomestoimprovingMan-darin,myadviceisthatyoushouldlistentoMandarineverydayandprac-ticespeakingitwheneverpossible.Justasthesayinggoes,practicemakesperfect.Bytheway,IdohopeyoucanhelpmeimprovemyEnglishwritingability,especiallytheproperuseofvocabularyandsomeimportantgrammar.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.LiXia美句必背美句必背1.LearningthatyouwanttoimproveyourMandarin,Iammorethanhappytolendyouahand.2.SogoodwasmyMandarinthatIwaselectedthebroadcasteroftheradiostationofourschool.3.HowIwishthatIcouldimprovemywritingabilitywiththehelpofyou.
