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1、读后续写ANoteoftheNicestThingsA Note of the Nicest ThingsHe was in the first third grade class I taught at Saint Marys school. All of my students were dear to me, except Mark Eklund. He often talked constantly. I had to remind him again and again that talking without permission was not acceptable. One m
2、orning my patience was growing thin, and then I made a new teachers mistake. I looked at him, saying, “If you say one more word, I am going to tape your mouth shut!”It wasnt ten seconds later when Chuck, another student, blurted out, “Mark is talking again.” Since I had stated the punishment, I had
3、to act on it. I took a roll of tape out of my drawer. Without saying a word, I proceeded to Marks desk, tore off two pieces of tape and made a big X over his mouth. When I walked back to Marks desk and removed the tape, his first words were, “Thank you for correcting me, Sister.” A Note of the Nices
4、t Things One Friday, I asked the students to list the names of the other students, leaving a space between each name. Then I told them to write down the nicest thing they could say about each of their classmates. As they left, each one handed me the paper.That Saturday, I wrote down the name of each
5、 student and listed what everyone else had said about that individual. On Monday I gave each student his or her list. Before long, the entire class was smiling. “Really?” I heard the whispers. “I never knew that meant anything to anyone!” “I didnt know others liked me so much!” Then Mark said, “Than
6、k you for teaching me, Sister.” Years later, after I returned from vacation, my parents met me at the airport. My father cleared his throat as he usually did before saying something important. “The Eklunds called last night,” he began. “Really?” I said. “I havent heard from them in years. I wonder h
7、ow Mark is.” Dad responded quietly. “Mark was killed in Vietnam,” he said. “The funeral is tomorrow, and his parents would like it if you could attend.”I had never seen a serviceman in a military coffin before, so handsome, so mature.Readingforstructure01Readingforinformation02Cluestowriting03Contin
8、uationwriting04CONTENT1ReadingforstructurePART ONEA Note of the Nicest Thingsfalling actionclimaxrising actionintroduction (setting)conclusion(evaluation) plot plot Markwasatrouble-makerinmyclass.(Para.1)Markthankedmeformypunishmentandteaching.(Para.2-5)Yearslater,IgotthenewsaboutMarksdeathandattend
9、edthefuneral.(Para.6-7)2ReadingforinformationPART TWOMy general impression about MarkAll of my students were dear to me, except Mark Eklund.I had to remind him again and again that talking without permission was not acceptable.He often talked constantly.Conclusion: Mark was a trouble-maker in my cla
10、ss.Mark was my headache.A Note of the Nicest ThingsMark got punished.When did it happen?One morning my patience was growing thin, and then I made a new teachers mistake.What did Mark do?I looked at him, saying, “If you say one more word, I am going to tape your mouth shut!” It wasnt ten seconds late
11、r when Chuck, another student, blurted out, “Mark is talking again.”What did I do?Since I had stated the punishment, I had to act on it. I took a roll of tape out of my drawer. Without saying a word, I proceeded to Marks desk, tore off two pieces of tape and made a big X over his mouth.What was his
12、reaction?When I walked back to Marks desk and removed the tape, his first words were, “Thank you for correcting me, Sister.”A Note of the Nicest ThingsRegardless of /Turning a deaf ear to/Ignoing my warning, Mark still offended the rule and talked in my class. His misbehavior was reported by a class
13、mate. So, in order to maintain my authority, I implemented the punishment of taping his mouth shut, for which Mark thanked me.A Note of the Nicest ThingsUse your own words to retell this incident A Note of the Nicest ThingsI made a new teachers mistake.When I walked back to Marks desk and removed th
14、e tape, his first words were, “Thank you for correcting me, Sister.”Thank you for correcting me, Sister.Thank you for teaching me, Sister.A Note of the Nicest Thingsask to list the names , leaving a space .write down the nicest thinghand me the paperOne FridayI wrote downand listed That SaturdayI ga
15、ve each.his or her list.On Monday123A Note of the Nicest ThingsThe reaction of the classBefore long, the entire class was smiling. “Really?” I heard the whispers. “I never knew that meant anything to anyone!” “I didnt know others liked me so much!”The reaction of MarkThen Mark said, “Thank you for t
16、eaching me, Sister.”A Note of the Nicest ThingsThe reaction of the classBefore long, the entire class was smiling. “Really?” I heard the whispers. “I never knew that meant anything to anyone!” “I didnt know others liked me so much!”The reaction of MarkThen Mark said, “Thank you for teaching me, Sister.”Whatcanweinferfromit?They didnt know their image in others eyes. They were glad to know their image in others eyes. The list meant a lot to the whole class. It made a difference to Mark, in partic
