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1、专题09 难忘回忆类1、 真题链接(2018年6月浙江卷)It was summer, and mydadwanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle Paul, my dads friend, p
2、icked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of thefarm houselistening to the frogs and water rolling down therivernearby. Very early in the mornin
3、g. Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tinafeedthe chickens,while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take thesheepout to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool
4、.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Dont belatefor supper,”
5、Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to thetrackso that you dontget lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out ofsight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the lateafternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.
6、 It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.Paragraph1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse._Paragraph2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark._2、 真题解析2.1 整体把握:主题语境人与自我-生活与学习-个人、家庭、社区及学校生活语篇话题本篇读后续写为记叙文,文章大意为爸爸带我去西部叔叔家度假时,我和爸爸去骑马
7、遇到的趣事,令我终身难忘。情节梳理故事要素when:one summer holiday where:the mountains in the Wild West, in New Mexicowho:my dad and I what:My dad took me to take a horse ride, and during the ride we met a little rabbit. When we chase after the rabbit, we got lost.情节走向通过第一段首句“ Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front
8、 of my horse.”可预测,续写思路为:兔子什么样-骑马追兔-兔子不见-我们迷路。通过第二段首句“We had no idea where we were and it got dark.”可预测,续写思路为:天色渐黑-害怕惊恐-借助大自然知识找到方向-成功找到家。2.2逐句写作:第一段:1. 它毛茸茸的,有一身漂亮的棕色头发。It was furry with a coat of gorgeous brown hair. 2. 它用它的一对红眼睛看着我,然后开始在前面疾驰。After looking up at me with its pair of red bulbs, it be
9、gan to scurryahead. 3. “为什么不把它抓回来交给保罗叔叔呢?他们一定很高兴。”想到这一点,我拼命地骑着马去寻找它。 “Why not catch it and bring it back toUncle Paul? They must be very happy.” With this thought, I rode hard to hunt for it.4. 爸爸看到了,只好跟着我。兔子非常敏捷,很快就进入了一片山林。Dadsaw it and had to follow me. The rabbit was very agile, soon entering a m
10、ountain forest. 5. 我们不得不下马,继续追赶,完全忘记了后面的赛道。We had to get down the horses, continuing the chase and totally forgetting thetrackback. 6. 尽管我们拼命尝试,但兔子最终还是看不见了。Even though we tried desperately, the rabbit was out ofsightin the end. 7. 然后我们意识到我们在森林深处。Then we realized we were in the deep part of a forest.
11、第二段:8. 乌云似乎在天空聚集。And dark clouds seemed to be gathering in the sky.9. 拿出手机,我们很快就发现出了问题:没有信号。Taking out the cell phone, we soon found something was wrong: no signal. 10. 没有指南针。我吓坏了,盯着爸爸,试图从他那里寻求解决问题的办法。And no compass. Frightened, I stared at Dad, trying to seek a solution for the trouble from him. 11
12、. “也许你在地理课上学到的东西管用,”他指着天上的星星说。 “Maybe what you have learned in geography class works, he said, pointing to the stars in the sky. 12. 我知道他指的是北极星。很快我们找到了正确的方向。I knew he meant the North Star. Soon we found the right direction. 13. 我们赶紧回去找马。河又出现了。We hurried back finding the horses. And theriverwas in si
13、ght again. 14. 家人很担心,准备报警。The family was worried and about to call the police. 15. 一看到我们,他们松了一口气,紧紧地拥抱着我们。At the sight of us, they were relieved and hugged us tightly. 16. 在我的一生中,没有什么比这次猎兔更令人难忘的了!There was nothing more memorable than this rabbit hunting in my life!2.3 范文赏析Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.It was furry with a coat of gorgeous brown hair. After looking up at me with its pair of red bulbs , it began to scurryahead. “Why not catch it and bring it back toUncle Paul? They must be very happy.” With this t