To Perfect the Structure of Our English WritingLearning objectives:By the end of the lesson, the students will be able tohave a better command of the whole structure before writing.attach importance to the topic sentence while writing each part.raise the awareness of making the topic sentence and the supporting sentences cohere.题型题型Part 1Part 1Part 2Part 2Part 3Part 3现象解释型现象解释型描述现象描述现象说明现象产生的说明现象产生的原因原因表明个人观点态度或表明个人观点态度或阐述个人做法阐述个人做法对比选择型对比选择型表明一方表明一方或双方的或双方的观点观点表明另一方的观表明另一方的观点及理由，或指点及理由，或指出双方观点的不出双方观点的不足之处及理由足之处及理由表明个人观点态度或表明个人观点态度或阐述个人做法阐述个人做法问题解决型问题解决型提出问题提出问题分析问题，给出分析问题，给出解决方案解决方案表明个人观点态度或表明个人观点态度或阐述个人做法阐述个人做法观点论证型观点论证型提出论点提出论点例证论点例证论点得出结论或表明个人得出结论或表明个人看法与做法看法与做法应用文应用文描述事实描述事实阐述原因阐述原因表明观点或提出建议表明观点或提出建议常见的作文结构可以参看下表：常见的作文结构可以参看下表：Step1 lead-in 1. 落实段落结构落实段落结构Step2 How to polish up our writing?Part1：30个词的材料概括个词的材料概括Part2：各种分析：各种分析(原因；影响；感受等原因；影响；感受等)Part3：结合个人经验，谈具体做法：结合个人经验，谈具体做法 全全文文Part1材料概括可以用这种结构：材料概括可以用这种结构：Note:The adverbial can refer to time, reason, condition, purpose or concession(让步让步), and the attributive clause introduced by which can be used to present a result.状语状语(非谓非谓语语/从句从句)+ 主主句句 +非限制性定非限制性定从从范例范例1： Although most people have a dream, only the minority of them can make it a reality like the little boy, who keeps his dream regardless of the negative comments. （省联盟大联考）范例范例2：In a bid/ gesture to encourage people to take action to protect the environment, a man is driving a truck releasing waste gas, from which the trees along the road suffer a lot.（1.8模）范例范例3：Dissatisfied with the current schooling system, a father in Luzhou had his daughter quit school and taught her personally for 11 years, which has received both support and opposition. （扬泰通淮宿徐2017届高三3月联考）1.越来越多的学生选择休学一年获越来越多的学生选择休学一年获取技能和生活经验而不是直接上大学，取技能和生活经验而不是直接上大学，这给了他们在找工作方面的优势这给了他们在找工作方面的优势。
_, an increasing number of students are choosing to take a gap year to gain skills and life experience, _.Instead of going straight to universitywhich gives them an edge over others in job huntingPractice: 2.自自从从超超女女在在20042004年年一一炮炮走走红红以以来来，各各种种各各样样的的才才艺艺表表演演深深受受大大众众欢欢迎迎，可可这也引起了社会广泛争议这也引起了社会广泛争议 _, various talent shows are well received by the public,_.Since Super Girl became an instant hit in 2004 which, at the same time, brings about social extensive controversyPractice: 3.担担心心孩孩子子的的吵吵闹闹声声给给他他人人带带来来不不便便，一一些些母母亲亲分分发发纸纸袋袋，附附上上以以孩孩子子的的名名义义写写的歉意信，对此人们的反应不一。
的歉意信，对此人们的反应不一 _, some mothers hand out bags with notes to express apologies in the name of their babies, _. Worried that their babies noises may bring inconvenience to other peoples reaction to which was mixedPractice: 4.多多亏亏了了他他妈妈妈妈的的鼓鼓励励，作作者者在在若若干干次次失失败败之之后后成成功功找找到到了了工工作作，这这表表明明在在陷陷入入困困境境时时我我们们要要采采取取一一种种积积极极的的生生活态度 _, the author succeeded in landing a job after several failures,_ _. Thanks to his mothers encouragement which indicates that we should adopt a positive attitude towards life when in troublePractice: 5.不不管管负负面面的的言言论论和和他他人人的的失失败败，这这只只小小聋聋青青蛙蛙成成功功地地到到达达了了高高塔塔顶顶部部，这表明坚持是通往成功的唯一道路。
这表明坚持是通往成功的唯一道路 _, the tiny deaf frog succeeded in reaching the top of a tall tower,_ _. Despite the negative comments and others failure which indicates that perseverance is the only road to successPractice: 6.父父亲亲曾曾经经在在工工厂厂工工作作8 8年年，之之后后上上了了师师范范，做做了了十十年年老老师师现现在在他他在在家家安度晚年安度晚年 Having worked in a factory for 8 yeas, my father was admitted to a teachers college and served as a teacher for a decade, who is now enjoying the rest of his life at home. 7.为为了了重重视视中中国国的的传传统统节节日日，浙浙江江温温州州的的学学校校禁禁止止过过圣圣诞诞节节。
圣圣诞诞节节在在中中国青少年中已经流行了几十年国青少年中已经流行了几十年 _ _, schools of Wenzhou in Zhejiang province are banned from celebrating Christmas, _ _. To attatch importance to Chinese traditional festivals which has already been popular among teenagers in China for decadesPractice: Part2/Part3的段落结构的段落结构:Part2主题句主题句支撑句支撑句1/拓展句拓展句1支撑句支撑句2/拓展句拓展句2Part3主题句主题句支撑句支撑句1/拓展句拓展句1支撑句支撑句2/拓展句拓展句2结论句结论句主题句的好句式：主题句的好句式：1) 材料分析材料分析As can be learnt from the passage,It can be learnt from the passage thatWhat we can learn from the picture / cartoon is that 2）结合自身经历，举例表达：）结合自身经历，举例表达：The story sets me thinking of one such occasion, when Id like to take myself as an example to show you . When it comes to the relationship between parents and children, Im reminded of my parents, who once quarreled with each other the moment they met. 3) 表达支持表达支持/反对：反对：The reasons why I support/oppose the practice can be listed as follows. To begin with, . In addition,Most importantly, Everything considered, such practice does more good than harm to us. In the long run, it will have a negative/positive influence on constructing a harmonious society.4）结论表达）结论表达From my point of view, what we have to do is /something must be done toPersonally/Consequently, its high time that measures should be taken to .Therefore, I am firmly convinced thatSo vital a role does praise play in our lives that never can we stress the significance of it too much. Its high time that we abandoned the idea of schooling at home, no matter how attractive it seems!Practice：按题目要求写主题句：按题目要求写主题句Tas。