2024-2025学年八年级上期期中考点大串讲（人教版）专题08 书面表达1． （23-24八年级上·浙江宁波·期中）我校正在进行“青年之星”评选活动假如你是李华，请你根据以下表格要点提示，用英语完成一封推荐信姓名李明性格外向、乐于助人爱好运动 (每周锻炼2次)看电视……学习情况班上最努力……未来计划……注意：1.文章必须包括全部要点，适当增加细节；2. 词数80左右开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数Dear Sir/ Madam,I would like to recommend Li Ming for this year’s Young Star.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I think Li Ming should be a Young Star in our school. Looking forward to your reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua【答案】例文：Dear sir/madam,I would like to recommend Li Ming for this year’s Young Star. He is outgoing. He is also very polite and kind. He is very helpful. He likes sports. He exercises twice a week. After school, he often plays basketball with his classmates. He likes watching TV programs about sports. He studies very hard. He is the most hard-working student in our class, so he did well in all subjects. The teachers and students in our school like him very much. His hero is Dr. Zhong Nanshan. He wants to be a doctor in the future.I think Li Ming should be a Young Star in our school. Looking forward to your reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：需包含提示中的所有要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，即向收件人推荐李明作为今年的青年之星； 第二步，分别从性格、体育、学习和理想等方面详细介绍了李明的情况，每个要点都有相应的具体描述，内容丰富且有条理，使读者能够全面了解李明的优点和特点； 第三步，简单总结并表达期待回复 [亮点词汇] ①do well in擅长于 ②look forward to盼望 [高分句型] He is the most hard-working student in our class, so he did well in all subjects. (so连接的并列句) 2． （23-24八年级上·湖南娄底·期中）假如你是Mary，请根据表格提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍你和你的好朋友Lisa的相同之处和不同之处不同点相同点Lisa①更高，更开朗②喜欢吃垃圾食品③喜欢看动作影片①喜欢音乐和运动②喜欢阅读，周末一起去图书馆③学习成绩好Mary①喜欢玩电脑游戏②喜欢水果蔬菜牛奶注意：1）短文需包括以上内容提示，可适当发挥；词数在60词左右2）语句通顺；卷面干净整洁答案】例文My name is Mary. Lisa is my good friend.In some ways we are the same. Both of us like sports and music. And we are good at our subjects. We both like reading and we usually go to the library on weekends. But in some ways, we are different. Lisa is taller and more outgoing than me. She likes watching action movies, but I like playing computer games at home. She likes eating junk food, although it is unhealthy. I usually eat healthy foods, such as fruit, vegetables and milk. I don’t think we need a lot of friends as long as they are good. Would you like to tell me about your friends?【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己及朋友；第二步，介绍两人的相同点和不同点；第三步，书写结语[亮点词汇]①be good at 擅长②on weekends 在周末③such as 例如④as long as 只要[高分句型]①We both like reading and we usually go to the library on weekends.（and连接的并列句）②She likes eating junk food, although it is unhealthy. （although引导的让步状语从句）3． （23-24八年级上·浙江金华·期中）秋天是旅行的好季节你的朋友李华想了解你上次去八里湾秋游的情况，同时他也想去，向你征求一些建议假设你是李明，讲述你在八里湾一日游的经历，并给他提出游玩建议HowBy busWhenLast weekWhatCut rice, catch fishes, pull sugarcane (砍甘蔗)The impression of BaliwanFresher air, cleaner water ...FeelingsRelaxEnjoy the natureExperience the hard work of farmersTeamwork...Advice...Dear Li Hua,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________。