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1、PART THREE,第三篇 写作妙解篇,话题(四) 交流与提高,典例分析,初中三年的学校生活即将结束。在这三年里,你一定在某些方面取得了进步并积累了一些经验。你愿意和初一新生分享吗? 某英文网站正在开展以“分享经验、助力成长”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,主要内容包括:你在什么方面取得了进步(如学科学习、体育运动、人际交往等),你是如何取得进步的,你想给初一新生提出什么建议。,提示词语 make friends, smile, in trouble, help 提示问题 What progress have you made? How did you make the prog
2、ress? Whats your advice for 7th graders?,_ _ _ _ _,【写作架构】,【思路点拨】 1.要点提炼:本文是一篇记叙文,主题是交流与提高。根据题目要求,可以提炼出3个要点: (1)描述你哪方面取得了进步 (2)说明你是如何取得进步的 (3)为新生提建议 2.时态:一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时 3.人称:第一人称和第二人称,【基础写作】 .根据所给提示词补全下列各句 1.在过去的三年里,我在很多方面都取得了进步。(make great progress) I in the past three years. 2.我想与你分享我在英语学习上的经历。(
3、sharewith) I want to . 3.为了改善我的发音,我开始观看英语电影。(To improve) , I started to .,have made great progress in many things,share my experience in studying English with you,To improve my pronunciation watch English movies,4.一开始,我不懂演员说的每一句话。(couldnt) At first, I everything the characters said. 5.我发现听一些有趣的东西是学习
4、语言的关键。 (I found that) _,couldnt understand,I found that listening to something interesting was the key to learning a language.,.句子升格 按括号中的要求改写句子。 6.I became interested in English after I met Mr.Li.(用notuntil改写句子,意思不变) _ 7.I repeated what I heard.Their body language helped me guess their meaning.(用on
5、 the one handon the other hand连接两个句子) _ _ 8.Listening to something interesting is important to learn a language.(用be the key to改写句子,意思不变) _,I didnt become interested in English until I met Mr.Li.,On the one hand, I repeated what I heard.On the other hand, their body language helped me guess their me
6、aning.,Listening to something interesting is the key to learning a language.,9.You can try my method if you have the same problem.(用I advise you to改写句子,意思不变) _ 10.Work harder and you will become better.(用the morethe more改写句子,意思不变) _,I advise you to try my method if you have the same problem.,The har
7、der you work, the better you will be.,【连句成文】 I will graduate from middle school.In the past three years, I have made great progress in many things and learned a lot.Id like to share my experience in studying English with you. My spoken English used to be poor.I was afraid to ask questions because of
8、 my poor pronunciation.In order to improve my pronunciation, I began to watch English movies that I was interested in.At first, I could not understand everything the characters said, but their body language and the expressions on their faces helped me to get the meaning.Later, I could get the meanin
9、g by listening for just the key words.My pronunciation improved as well by listening to the conversations in English movies. Personally, I find that listening to something interesting is the secret to language learning.If you have the same difficulty as me in learning English, I advise you to try my
10、 method.,拓展积累,【描述取得的进步】 1.I have made great progress in the past three years. 2.My English has improved a lot in the past three years. 3.I have been better at getting on with others in the past three years.,【取得进步的方法】 1.I listened to the teacher carefully in class and reviewed my notes from time to t
11、ime after class. 2.If I had problems, I would ask my teacher or classmates for help. 3.I kept reading English texts aloud every morning and listening to English tapes.,【提出建议的句子】 1.I advise you to try my methods and not to give up. 2.Its important for you to listen to teachers carefully in class. 3.Y
12、oud better know clearly what your weakness is and find correct ways for your problems.,实战演练,假如你叫李华,你和远在英国的笔友Peter通过博文交流英语阅读体会。请用英文写一封信告诉他你何时开始英语阅读的,你阅读的内容及方式,以及你的收获。,提示词语 begin, read, text(reading material), story, fast, careful, word, knowledge 提示问题 When did you begin English reading? What and how do you usually read? What do you learn from English reading?,Dear Peter, How is it going? Im writing to talk abou
