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1、第九节 凤头豹尾如何写好开头和结尾,技法指导 俗话说得好：好的开头是成功的一半(Well begun is half done)；结尾好，一切都好(All is well that ends well)。一篇英语作文的开头如果写得好，就会给阅卷老师良好的印象，吸引他继续读下去；如果结尾又写得好，就会进一步强化阅卷老师对你所写作文的好感，从而给你的作文打高分。,一、如何写好开头 开头一般来说要做到开门见山，使读者了解文章要谈什么，最好能立刻引起读者的兴趣。下面介绍几种常见开头的写法： 1背景法说明事件发生的时间、地点、背景等 An exciting event“Innovations on Ca
2、mpus”is around the corner.(2014辽宁高考书面表达) 一次令人激动的“校园生活创意无限”活动即将开始。,2主题句法提出一个观点或论据作为文章要阐明和论述的主题 Old people can play an important role in our country，because they have experience，they are wiser，and they have enough time. 老年人在我们国家起着重要的作用，因为他们经验丰富，聪明智慧，时间充足。 3问题法用提出问题的方法来引出文章的内容，以吸引读者的注意力 Why do we go to
3、 university？Different people have different opinions. 我们为什么要上大学？不同的人有不同的观点。,4引语法摘录或引用某些名人的名言或常见的习语、谚语作为文章的开端 There is an old English saying，“Gain time，gain life”. Then what is time？Time is a kind of thing that we cant see or touch，but we can feel it pass by. 有一个古老的英语谚语“赢得时间，就赢得生命”。那么，时间是什么呢？时间是一种看不见
4、、摸不着的东西，但是我们能感觉到它的流逝。,5定义法常见于对标题下定义，然后通过举例、逻辑推理等方法加以说明 A good student is one who possesses good morality，sound health，perfect knowledge and various abilities. 一个好学生要拥有良好的品德、健全的身体、完美的知识和各种各样的能力。,6数据法引用已经证实的某些统计数字来引起话题 The fact that less than 5% of the British population graduate from universities may
5、 seem surprising，especially compared with the American percentage of over 30%. 英国人口中大学毕业生所占的比例不足5%的事实看上去很令人吃惊，尤其是和美国的超过30%的比率相比。 7实例法通过一个实例或现象引出话题 Nowadays，people in many big cities are complaining about heavy traffic. It has seriously influenced peoples daily life and economic development. 现今，许多大城市
6、的人们都在抱怨交通拥堵，它严重地影响了人们的日常生活和经济发展。,学以致用 用上述开头法翻译下列句子 1上周日，我和同学们去了香山公园。 Last Sunday，my classmates and I went to Xiangshan Park.(背景法) 2眼下，街谈巷议，人们的热门话题总离不开“三贵”：买房贵、上学贵、看病贵。 Nowadays it is often talked about that there are three things that people cant afford. It is expensive to buy houses，to pay for the
7、childrens education and to see the doctor.(主题句法),3当有那么多方式可以与学生家长沟通时，家访还有必要吗？ Are home visits necessary when there are so many ways to communicate with students parents？(问题法) 4正如谚语所说的那样“时间就是金钱”，是的，情况确实就是这样。 As the saying goes，“Time is money.” Yes，its indeed the case.(引语法) 5宠物是人们饲养并将其视为伙伴的动物。 A pet is
8、 an animal kept by a person as a companion.(定义法),6最近的研究表明，有50%的学生不吃早饭。 A recent study shows that 50% of the school kids dont have breakfast.(数据法) 7目前，怎样处理垃圾是我们城市面临的一大问题。 How to deal with waste is a big problem for our city now.(实例法),二、如何写好结尾 结尾有概括全文内容，进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想，升华主题的作用。主要有以下几种写法： 1照应开头 Everyon
9、e enjoys beautiful things. And seeing sunrise may be one of the most unusual experiences in our life. 每个人都喜欢美好的事物，看日出也许是我们人生中最不平凡的经历中的一次了。,2复述中心 We must protect the water as well as find ways to reuse it. If not，the last drop of water will be a teardrop. 我们必须保护水源，寻找再利用水的方法，如果不这样做，最后一滴水将是人类的一滴泪水。 3总结
10、式 Therefore，always remember where theres a will，theres a way.(2014山东高考满分) 因此，牢记：有志者，事竟成。,4引用式 I believe my dream will come true one day because “Where there is a will，there is a way.” 我相信我的梦想总有一天会实现，因为“有志者事竟成”。 5希望式 The Internet is now very important to me because it not only gives me a lot of fun b
11、ut also it is very useful. I like it and hope you will like it too. 现在网络对我来说非常重要，因为它给我带来很多乐趣，而且非常有用，我喜欢它，希望你也喜欢它。,6问题式 Will you join us in the next century？How romantic and fantastic it will be! 你愿意在下个世纪加入我们吗？那将是多么浪漫和奇妙啊！,学以致用 用上述结尾法翻译下列句子 1不同的旅行方式都能让人们愉快，但我还是最喜欢乘火车旅行。 Different ways of traveling ca
12、n make people happy，but I like traveling by train most.(照应开头) 2从这次经历中，我了解到细心非常重要，尤其在考试时，我们怎样细心都不为过。 From this experience，I learned that being careful is very important and that we cant be too careful，especially in examinations.(总结式),3爱是给予，爱是关注他人，我将尽力把我所有的爱奉献给他人。 Love is giving and love is paying att
13、ention to others. I will do my best to give all my love to others.(复述中心) 4作为一名学生，我非常支持这项活动，因为它很有意义，对学生很有帮助，我希望此类活动在将来能继续开展下去。 As a student，I am strongly for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful. I hope that this kind of activity will continue in the future.(希望式),5找一个伙伴和我们一起去如何？这样我们
14、可以互相帮助并且在旅途中保持愉快。 How about finding a companion to be with us？So，we can help each other and be happy during the trip.(问题式) 6不管怎样，有不同的文化，就有不同的习俗，如果你能“入乡随俗”，就会更好地享受这里的生活。 Anyhow，different cultures，different customs. If you “Do as the Romans do when in Rome.”，you will enjoy more of your stay here.(引用式)
15、,附录： 常见开头方式： as far as.is concerned对而言，就而论 as far as we know据我们所知 as everybody knows/As is known to all众所周知 as the proverb says正如谚语所说 as the saying goes俗话说 as has been already discussed正如已经讨论过的 as has been mentioned above如上所述 as we can see from the above table从上表可知 compared with.与相比,contrary to.与相反
16、despite the fact that.尽管 for one thing.，for another (thing) 一方面，另一方面 however，the difficulty lies in.然而，问题在于 I am greatly convinced that.我深信 It is estimated/predicted that.据估计 It is generally agreed that.大家通常认为 It is believed/thought that.人们认为 It is said that.据说 It is reported that.据报道,It is well known that.众所周知 It must be admitted that.必须承认的是 It must be pointed out that.必须指出的是 It must be emphasized tha
