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1、英语作文自动批改网 篇一：英语作文批改网 AIDS is the threat of entire society What is AIDS? AIDS is a serious infectious disease that can cause people to death. The AIDS virus which is also call human immunodeficiency virus(HIV) invades the human body then destructs body's immune function. It can make people suffer
2、 from various incurable infections and tumors. The full name of AIDS is Acquired Immune Deficiency Syndrome. From its name we can know three specific definition, Acquired means the cause is acquired rather than innate; Immune Deficiency means in the aspects of pathogenesis, it is mainly caused by th
3、e body's immune system and lead to reduce the damage or loss of the protective function of the immune system; Syndrome means In the clinical symptoms, complex symptoms due to various system immunodeficiency caused by infection and tumor. The origin of AIDS is Africa and mainly comes from develop
4、ing country. Transmission and pathogenesis of AIDS The AIDS virus mainly exists in the various body fluids of the AIDS virus infection and has strong infectious. The main route of infection of the AIDS virus are sexual transmission, blood transmission and mother to child transmission. From HIV infec
5、tion to develop into AIDS patients has four stage: The first phase is acute stage, The second stage is the asymptomatic period, which is called the incubation period, too. The third stage is the pre AIDS. The fourth period is full period of AIDS or AIDS in the late, which is the most complex. The tr
6、eatment and prevention of AIDS AIDS is a serious infectious disease with high fatality rate, there is still no cure for drugs and methods, but can be prevented. Drug therapy can be divided into three categories: Anti HIV drugs, immunomodulators and anti infective Drugs. AIDS is a threat to every per
7、son and every family, the prevention of AIDS is the responsibility of the whole society. Many daily behaviors cannot infect AIDS virus. To comply with sexual morality is the fundamental measures for the prevention of the sexual transmission of AIDS. Sharing syringes, drug taking is a major channel f
8、or the spread of AIDS, therefore, we should refuse drugs and cherish life.篇二：批改网高分作文 批改网高分作文 Who Are Teachers Pets, Boys or Girls? 1） Nowadays, a growing number of people tend to think about a question: who do teachers like more? Reading this table, we can get some information and analyse the result
9、 via the figures. Obviously, teachers favor girls over boys in primary school. As far as I concerned, the most indispensable reason is that girls are quiet, smart and well-behaved during that age. While in junior middle school, hat might seem to be no difference between boys and girls. In a word, th
10、ere is no prejudice and gender discrimination at that time. Nevertheless things are getting change when coming to senior high school. The most reasonable explanation is that girls are superior to boys in math and physics up to the age of ten, fall behind from then on. under that circumstance, teache
11、rs is shown to call on male in class far more than female students. While in college, teachers seem to have no preference in student because of the less attention and unawareness 2） It is obviously that the answer of such question changes frequently as students growing up and here is my analyze acco
12、rding to the chart. First of all, girls, in my opinion, are much more welcomed in primary school. Over two-thirds of students believe that female students are teacher's pet in primary school. Second, however, conclusion in senior middle school is quite different because half of students hold the
13、 view that it was boys that are teacher's pet. Thirdly, the circumstance in junior middle school as well as In college is between two extremes which means neither boys nor girls have advantage to be pets of teachers. What conclusion can I draw is that the chart indicates us girls are more welcom
14、ed by teacher at low grades because they are not only quite gentle and quiet but also boys are naughty at the same time. As time goes by, though, such difference gradually disappear which lead tosuch result. Last but not least, I hold the view that there is no sex, including boys and girls, can hold
15、 teachers' love forever 3） Rencently, a survey on"who are teachers' pets"has developed among students . According to the chart, we can easily find that the majority of pupil's answers are girls, the junior students said that all of them were favored, a lot of middle school stud
16、ents replied: "girls! ", while college students thought neither of them is teachers' pet. So, why did the phenomenon occurred? I suppose the following reasons can account for it. In primary school, girls are generally obedient, while boys may be more naughty. Girls are good at reading and writing, but boys show nothing superior . Of course , teachers think more of girls. In junior school , boys perform as well as girls
