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1、Error correction & Composition,Zhundong Middle School Tony Chen,Although nobody wishes to experience failure, failure play an important role on the way to success. Sometime, failure can benefit us a lot. When I failed my English exam three years before, I felt upset at first, but then I made up my m
2、ind to work even hard. That failure motivated me put more time and energy into learning English. After find out my problem was a lack of vocabulary and I was poorly in grammar, I changed my learning methods. I learnt a lot from past mistake. Finally I made a great progress in English. Failure really
3、 helped you to get closer to success.,短文改错考查点,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,2,Although nobody wishes to experience failure, failure play an important role on the way to success. Sometime, failure can benefit us a lot. When I failed my English exam three years before, I felt upset at first, but then I made up my min
4、d to work even hard. That failure motivated me put more time and energy into learning English. After find out my problem was a lack of vocabulary and I was poorly in grammar, I changed my learning methods. I learnt a lot from past mistake. Finally I made a great progress in English. Failure really h
5、elped you to get closer to success.,Although nobody wishes to experience failure, failure plays an important role on the way to success. Sometimes, failure can benefit us a lot. When I failed my English exam three years ago, I felt upset at first, but then I made up my mind to work even harder. That
6、 failure motivated me to put more time and energy into learning English. After finding out my problem was a lack of vocabulary and I was poor in grammar, I changed my learning methods. I learnt a lot from past mistakes. Finally I made a great progress in English. Failure really helped me to get clos
7、er to success.,play sometime before hard motivated me put find poorly mistake made a great progress you,plays sometimes ago harder motivated me to put finding poor mistakes made great progress me,时态语态主谓一致,连接词,介词,副词形容词,介词,非谓语动词,副词形容词,名词单复数,冠词,代词,8,1,1,Although most people have a family, in their dark
8、est moments many will turn to nobody they consider “a true friend” for support and advice. But what make someone “a true friend”, rather than just a good friend? A true friend will always try harder help. They will be sensitive to their feelings and will not criticize you. They will offer help witho
9、ut being asking and will never expect anything in return. A true friend will put aside whichever they are doing to come and see you if you are in seriously trouble. They will offer their support in your need, as if everyone else in the world is against you. If you dont have many friends, but you hav
10、e one true friend, and you are very lucky. But remember, if you have a true friend, you have to be his true friend too. True friend give as well as take.,Although most people have a family, in their darkest moments many will turn to somebody they consider “a true friend” for support and advice. But
11、what makes someone “a true friend”, rather than just a good friend? A true friend will always try harder to help. They will be sensitive to your feelings and will not criticize you. They will offer help without being asked and will never expect anything in return. A true friend will put aside whatev
12、er they are doing to come and see you if you are in serious trouble. They will offer their support in your need, even if everyone else in the world is against you. If you dont have many friends, but you have one true friend, and you are very lucky. But remember, if you have a true friend, you have t
13、o be his true friend too. True friends give as well as take.,8,1,1,Dear Sir, I am Li Hua. I am born in 1992 and I am going to graduate in senior high school. I am willing to be a volunteer in your charity after graduate. I am out-going and warm-hearted boy. I have many hobby. I can also do good in c
14、ommunicating with other. The reason why that I want to be a volunteer is that I can practice myself from the work and I love help others. This job can give him a chance to make my dreams come true. I need such experience. best wishes, Li Hua,Dear Sir, I am Li Hua. I was born in 1992 and I am going t
15、o graduate from senior high school. I am willing to be a volunteer in your charity after graduating. I am an out-going and warm-hearted boy. I have many hobbies. I can also do well in communicating with others. The reason why I want to be a volunteer is that I can practice myself from the work and I
16、 love helping others. This job can give me a chance to make my dream come true. I need such experience. best wishes, Li Hua,9,1,1,较好拿到的分数有： 名词单复数/形容词副词/冠词/代词,做题时应注意： 叙事性文章首抓全文时态，以免理解有误； 论述性文章首抓名词形容词冠词代词错误,小结,Composition,假如你是李华，即将高中毕业，打算毕业后利用假期时间去一家慈善机构做一名义工。现根据以下内容写一封信介绍你自己，希望成为一名志愿者。 1.1992年出生 2.热情开朗，兴趣广泛，擅长沟通，语言表达能力强 3.请陈述你想成为志愿者的理由,Dear Sir, I am Li Hua. I was born in 1992 and I am going to graduate from senior hig
