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1、7A版优质实用文档智课网IELTS备考资料雅思高分必读增强语句表现力的五大王牌_雅思写作一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如：Weak:Thetreesarebare.Thegrassisbrown.Thelandscapeseemsdrab.Revision:Thebrowngrassandbaretreesformadrablandscape.(转换为前置定语)Or:Thelandscape,bareandbrown,beggedforspringgreen.(转换为并列结构作后置定语)2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如：1)Weak:Th
2、eteammembersaregoodplayers.Revision:Theteammembersplaywell.2)Weak:Oneworkersplanistheeliminationoftardiness.Revision:Oneworkersplaneliminatestardiness.3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中，把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如：1)Weak:Thereisnoopportunityforpromotion.Revision:NoopportunityforpromotioneGists.2)Weak:Herearetheb
3、ooksyouordered.Revision:Thebooksyouorderedhavearrived.二、多用语意具体的动词，保持句意简洁明了。例如：1、Poor:Mysupervisorwentpastmydesk.Better:Mysupervisorsauntered(=walkedslowly)pastmydesk.2、Poor:Sheisacarefulshopper.Better:Shecomparespricesandquality.三、尽量运用主动语态。例如：1、Weak:Theorganizationhasbeensupportedbycharity.Better:Ch
4、arityhassupportedtheorganization.2、Weak:Thebiscuitswerestackedonaplate.Better:Motherstackedthebiscuitsonaplate.四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。例如：1、Wordy:Mylittlesisterhasapreferenceforchocolatemilk.Improved:Mylittlesisterpreferschocolatemilk.2、Wordy:Weareinreceiptofyourletterandintendtofollowyourrecommendations.Im
5、proved:Wehavereceivedyourletterandintendedtofollowyourrecommendation.3、Redundant:Wehadaseriouscrisisatschoolyesterdaywhenourchemistrylaboratorycaughtfire.Improved:Wehadacrisisatschoolyesterdaywhenourchemistrylaboratorycaughtfire.4、Redundant:MysisterandIboughtthesame,identicaldressindifferentstores.I
6、mproved:MysisterandIboughtthesamedressindifferentstores.五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。例如：1、Weak:Theywillnotagreetohisproposalsinanyshapeorform.Improved:Theywillnotagreetoanyofhisproposals.2、Weak:IneedherfinancialinputbeforeIcanguesstimateoureGpendituresneGtfall.Improved:IneedherfinancialfiguresbeforeIcanestimateoureGpendituresneGtfall.37A版优质实用文档
