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1、真题体验,命题特点,备考指南,假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线（）画掉。 修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。,1. 2016年全国I卷,My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though n
2、ot very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some People even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that,fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle
3、says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.,used,本文主要讲了作者的叔叔拥有一家餐厅，作者的叔叔告诉作者，成功的秘诀在于诚实。 1.thatwhere 介词to后应是宾语从句，在从句中作地点状语，用where，意为“的地方”，close to where I live (离我住的地方不远的)是形容词短语作后置定语，修饰a restaurant。 2.去掉but 因在英语中，though与bu
4、t不可以同时出现，故应把but去掉。 3. had have 全文用的是一般现在时，故had也应用一般现在时。 4. honest honesty 由句意“成功的关键是诚实”，故用与名词the key相对的名词honesty作表语。,5.or and 在肯定句中，表示并列应用and。 6.using used 因be used for为固定搭配，意为“被用来做”。 7.在dreams后加of 因dream of doing sth.为固定搭配，意为“梦想做某事”。 8. the a 意思是“在一段短时期内”致富，表示“一段”用a。 9.our his 根据主语he可知，指“他的”事业，用形容词
5、性物主代词his。 10.steady steadily 修饰动词grow，表示“稳步地”扩大（生意），应用副词steadily。,2. 2016年全国II卷,The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend
6、money. But in that case, we will learn little about world.,If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn
7、 a lot.,本文主要讲了作者与同学谈论如何规划即将到来的暑假。 1.how what 因about后为宾语从句，从句中缺宾语，用what。 2.chose choose 因can为情态动词，后接动词原形。 3.take taking 此处与前面的staying为并列结构，故应用动名词形式。 4.but and 此处连接两个并列分句，用连词and。 5.在world前加the 因world是独一无二的东西，前要加定冠词the。 6. your our 该句主语是we，此处指开拓我们的眼界，故改成our。,7. knowledges knowledge knowledge为不可数名词，故去掉复
8、数。 8. can should或把can去掉 因为此处是suggest 的宾语从句，从句需用虚拟语气，故应用should+动词原形，其中should可以省略。故可将can改成should, 也可直接去掉。 9. thought think 根据上下文时态可知，此时应用一般现在时，故改成think。 10. many much 根据句意，这里是指花费许多，故用much不用many。,3. 2016年全国III卷,The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best
9、and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didnt seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it.,At one time, I even felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.
10、 I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.,本文主要讲了作者从13岁到19岁这一时期的体会。 1. year years 表示从“13到19岁”这几年，year为可数名词，故应用复数形式。 2. worse worst 根据前面的best可知我们此处应用形容词的最高
11、级。 3. 把first前的the去掉 因at first（最开始，起初）为固定搭配。 4. yourself myself 句子的主语是I，是由“我自己（myself）”做决定。 5. such so 指代上文提到的事情，用so，表示“这样”。,6. tell told 结合全文时态可知，此处应用一般过去时。 7. freely free 因be free from（不受影响）为固定搭配。 8. wear wearing 介词后动词的ing形式。 9. to for 因leave for为固定搭配，意为“动身去某地”。 10. 在need前加I 分析句子结构可知，whenever引导状语从句
12、，从句中缺主语;再根据句子意思，表示“我”需要的时候。,4. 2015年全国I卷,When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green.,Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the envir
13、onment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.,The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, well live to regret
14、it.,作者通过自己从小到大对城市生活态度的变化，说明环境保护的严峻情况，呼吁加强环保。 1. think thought 指小时候“想”。 2. 在countryside前加the 表示“在农村”习惯上说in the countryside。 3. or and 因“空气新鲜”与“山绿”是并列关系。 4. on with 表示“随着”用with。 5. 去掉shown前的been 因“研究”与“表明”是主动关系。,6. seriously serious 在名词前作定语要用形容词。 7. airs air 因air表示呼吸的“空气”时是不可数名词，没有复数形式。 8. Much Many 修
15、饰可数名词复数要用many。 9. found find 在情态动词(must)后用动词原形。 10. your our /the 全文叙述的角度都是作者自己。,5. 2015年全国II卷,One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.,After looks at the toy f
16、or some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.,Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.,本文叙述了Tony在购物中心与父母走散后，在热心人的帮助下找到父母的经历。 1. parent parents 由下文的his parents were missing可知用复数。
