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1、 续写素材整理 1What is a climax of a story?（什么是故事高潮 ?） More tension=satisfying climax 文学故事中的高潮（ climax）-故事的主要场景（ key scene）也通常是故事的转折点（ turning point），是指故事达到最紧张或扣人心弦的那一部分。高潮有时候是剧情中的 “危机“ 点。有时候 , 它只是达到关键时刻或者转折点 , 发生了一些事情 , 或者主角必须做出决定 , 从而导致一个结果或其 他。我们在分析叙事 类故事或者小说故事的时候常常用下面的图 表来表示故事情节。常常见见故故事事高高潮潮示示例例： 1. A
2、 little girl has been searching for her lost dog. All of a sudden, she hears a bark coming from around the corner, and she looks around to see . . . 2. Kevin has worked very hard to try out for the soccer team at school. The coach has posted a list of this years team members on his office door. Kevi
3、n walks forward to look at the list . . . . 3. Marys parents have been discussing whether or not to move to another state. They call Mary and her sister down to talk with them about their decision . . . 4. Lois has performed in the state gymnastics finals. She waits anxiously to hear the names of th
4、e winners. The announcer says, “And first place goes to . . .“ 文学名著中的一些故事高潮 1. The deaths of Romeo (who kills himself because he thinks Juliet is dead) and Juliet (who kills herself when she awakes and sees Romeo dead). Romeo and Juliet, Shakespeare （罗密欧和朱丽叶，莎士比亚）2. When Gaston and the townspeople c
5、ome to attack the beast, and Belle admits her love for the beast. Beauty and the Beast, Disney （美女与野兽，迪士尼） 3. In “The Three Little Pigs,“ suspense builds up until the confrontation between the third pig and the wolf. This confrontation is the climax.（三只小猪）How to create a climax of a story? (如何营造故事的高
6、潮？ ) 方方法法 1.增增加加外外部部冲冲突突 增加外部冲突是一种明显有效的可以达到故事高潮的方式。冲突带来紧迫感, 将故事推向必要的解 决或崩溃。 1）角角色色之之间间的的冲冲突突 (人物观点差异 , 竞争需要等 ) 如：2017 年年 11 月月浙浙江江英英语语高高考考： On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didnt we fi
7、nd a house 续写素材整理 2with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. 开车 找旅馆-徒劳无功-母亲建议搭帐篷在他人后院 -David 和我倍感紧张，心有不悦（母子的观点不 一） 2) 角角色色与与环环境境之之间间的的冲冲突突 如：2017 年年 6 月月浙浙江江英英语语高高考考： Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. he saw instantly that it
8、wasnt a dog at all, but a wolf: quickly catching up with him. Macs heart jumped. , he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Macs relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, . Then it , tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second tim
9、e, and again, it fell back Mac 骑车独自行，路遇饿狼，与之搏斗，险象环生。（人（角色）-狼（环境）大战） 3) 时时间间依依赖赖的的发发展展 ：决策变得紧急 如： 2017 年年 6 月月浙浙江江英英语语高高考考： The car abruptly stopped in front of him. “Get into the car.“ Paul shouted at Mac. Mac jumped off the bike and slid into the car without delay as the wolf was just two steps awa
10、y and was about to tear Mac into pieces. What a narrow escape! 骑车突停面前 -急喊上车- Max 上车避险-饿狼近在咫尺（此情此景，刻不容缓） 4) 增增加加的的障障碍碍 ：人物角色必须克服 挑战, 以达到他们的目标 例如：2018 年年 6 月月高高考考 But before we jumped off the horses, we found that we had been off the beaten track and got lost. We had no idea where we were and it got d
11、ark. Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back. 小兔突现-马儿受惊-草原迷路（障碍 1）-天色渐黑（障碍 2）- 又累又饿（障碍 3）-心理恐慌（障碍 4） 方方法法 2. 放放大大内内心心冲冲突突 放大内心冲突（你的角色的内心斗争）也有助于建立一个高度紧张和不确定的时刻。 现在我们在来看高考读后续写中的内心冲突是如何体现的： 2016 年年 10 月月浙浙江江高高考考： Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. Jane, exhausted
12、 and scared, lay down near a stone, missing her family at a distance. All the fantastic memory crowded in and she couldnt help crying, “Hadnt I quarrelled with Tom, walked away and climbed to the high place, I wouldnt be trapped in this awful place, confronted with the danger of dying.” She regrette
13、d with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes. 夫妇争吵-独自行走-荒野走散-夜色渐黑-独处森林-阴森恐怖-后悔莫及（内心冲突的刻画） 内心独白（往往昔昔对对比比 +虚虚拟拟语语气气使使用用 +旁旁边边描描写写是是常常见见技技巧巧之之一一） 方方法法 3. 使使用用环环境境描描写写增增加加不不确确定定性性 充分利用环境描写可以起到烘托故事高潮的作用，具体方法可以看上期读后续写微技能 。当故事角 色在碰到困难时候，我们往往要加大笔墨来描写故事环境的黑暗，恐怖和不祥。强化环境描写增强了 高
14、潮元素。我们感受到了紧张的倍增。 例 1：Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest(黑暗). Even worse, the temperature suddenly dropped dramatically. (寒冷） 例 2：It didnt take long for the forest to be enveloped in darkness（黑暗）. Her rasping breath steamed（寒冷） in the moonlight and her throat was parched from thirst.如
15、何通过场景营造（mood）Technique 1: Personification (拟拟人人) Description/purpose: Gives an object the characteristics of a living thing, bringing it to life Examples：续写素材整理 3The flowers nodded. Snowflakes danced. Thunder grumbled. Fog crept in. The wind howled. The haunted house seemed to stare at me, beckoning me towards the door. Technique 2: simile (明明喻喻) Description/purpose: Similes likens something to something else giving a more detailed description Examples： The night sky was as dark as the deepest ocean. The stars sparkled like diamonds. The
