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1、情景作文,Controlled writing, 审文字要求 1. 文体： 2. 审人称： 3. 审时态： 4. 审文字： 审图： 审要点、细节（见下文）,Beginning：,Body:,Title:,Ending: 感受,Dear Peter,How are things going? Last week, I took part in the show of “Beautiful Villages around Beijing” in our school.,Linking words 连 接 词,情感的变化,假设你是红星中学学生李华，上周参加了学校组织的“京郊美丽乡村”展示活动，为此，
2、你与父母一起去感受了乡村的变化。请根据下列四幅图的先后顺序，给美国笔友Peter写信，介绍你参加此次活动的全过程。 注意： 1. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好。 2. 词数不少于60。,审题 1. 审文字 上周参加了学校组织的“京郊美丽乡村”展示活动 你与父母一起去感受了乡村的变化 根据四幅图的先后顺序 给美国笔友Peter写信，介绍你参加此次活动的全过程。 字数及生词提示 2. 审人称：I, my parents and I, a farmer /peasant 3. 审时态：主时态：一般过去式 4. 审图：审要点、细节（见下文）,Beginning： Dear Peter,How are th
3、ings going? Last week, I took part in the show of “Beautiful Villages around Beijing” in our school. Body: 去农村参观 时间：上周的某一天 父母开车与我同往、目的 路上的美景，不停拍照 乡村美景拍照 农民的居住条件/住房 拍照纪录农村的变化 进农家、和农民聊天聊天 听取农民生活新变化（业余活动/上网） 记录 整理材料、照片 展示 在校报墙上展示 吸引同学,Ending: 你参观农村的感受,Do keep in touch. Best wishes！Li Hua,Last week, I t
4、ook part in the show of “beautiful villages around Beijing” in our school.On Sunday morning, my parents and I went to suburbs to get some information for my posters. On arriving at the destination, we were impressed by the beautiful scenery and peoples living conditions. I took many photos. Then we
5、chatted with a farmer, who told us about the changes these years. They now can get online to learn agricultural science and trade their products. And in spare time they can enjoy various leisure activities, like table tennis and chess. The next day, I put my pictures and an article on the school wal
6、l newspaper. I feel proud of the development of our country.,Good ends,单写一段 2 分,北京11情景作文,We believe in the philosophy that offering others help makes ourselves satisfied, and here is what happened recently in my class.One day, when our math teacher was giving a class, she suddenly lost balance, and
7、with her high heels broken by the edge, she felt down and hurt her legs! Everyone was astonished at that time. However, we quickly calmed ourselves down and swiftly carried her to the clinic. On the way, we asked anxiously whether it hurt a lot and told her not to move. Having been diagnosed as a se
8、vere bone hurt, she had to stay in hospital for weeks. In order to cease her feeling of loneliness, we planned a visit to her several days later. There we sent her flowers, wishing her a quick recovery. Some held her hands and delivered our care for her, while others promised to study hard. We chatt
9、ed happily, and I saw her tears of satisfaction and pleasure.Yesterday was a big day- our teacher returned “home” form the hospital! Seeing her smiling face, we clapped our hands as a warm welcome. She, though sitting a wheelchair, showed her pleasant smile like an angel, as if she was expressing he
10、r thanks. Again, I saw tears shinning in her eyes - they were the symbols of happiness rather than tiredness.,This was just a simple thing in our school life, but something meaningful. Our teachers never fail to offer us their meticulous care. So when they need help, its our duty as well as honor to
11、 lend a helping hand. In this way, we can create a harmonious teacher-student relationship.,From the experience, I really gain a lot and an shocked by the fast development of the village. Im privileged to have a chance to experience the changes. I wish the village can become better and better in the
12、 future. 王佳琦,The experience of this trip widely broadened my eyes and completely changed the conservative idea I have on Chinese countryside. It told me what advanced technology can bring to the society and every part of the country. And Im glad to have you share the unforgettable memory.张明艳,From th
13、is activity, I leered a lot about the new village and villagers life, the village is no longer a poor place as I thought before. The villages are so beautiful that form my bottom of my heart， I have a sense of proud. The memory of this activity will never fade away in my memory.封晔,This experience not only enlarged my scope, but also let me feel the rapid development of our country. What a meaning day it was!秦臻,I really love the meaning trip which not only give me a chance to get close to the nature, but help me broaden my sight and acquire knowledge as well.李俊超,
