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1、书面表达,To better your writing,To make your writing sparkle!,2010-2014年全国统一卷高考英语作文分析：,2010,Have a review：书信中的常用句子,1.很高兴收到你的上一封来信。 2期望尽快收到你的回复。 3.最近怎麽样？ 4.感谢您话费您宝贵的时间看我的信。 5.我希望我的建议会对您有所帮助。 6.如果您能接受我的邀请，我会非常感激的。,参考翻译：,1.I am glad to hear from you. 2. Iam looking forward to your early reply. 3.How have y
2、ou been doing? 4.Thank you for spending your precious time reading my letter. 5.I hope my suggestions will be of help. 6.I would appreciate it if you can accept my invitation.,25,20-30minutes80-120words,clear 清楚 accurate 准确 logical 逻辑 fluent 流畅,英语书面表达？,step one 遣词造句：1.升级高级词汇； 2.升级句式,1.Miss liu is my
3、 favorite teacher.(毫无疑问|很显然.) 2.Miss liu helps us with our English.（强调就是刘老师） 3.English is important.（起重要作用） 4.we have enough time to take excercise.（.是可能的.） 5.There must be a use for my talent.（我认为|） 6.The weather was good;our journey was comfortable.(由于),Each student is a sparkle maker!,1.There is
4、no doubt that Miss liu is my favorite teacher.It is obvious that Miss liu is my favorite teacher. 2.I t is Miss liu who helps us with our English. 3.English plays an important role in our daily life. 4.It is possible for us to spare enough time to take excercise. 5.From my point of view,there must b
5、e a use for my talent. 6.Thanks to good weather,our journey was comfortable.,来自这所中学的SueWood老师，不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据写作要点和要求给Sue写封电子邮件。 写作要点：1.假定你是李华。你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里，表达对她的感谢之意;2.介绍她离开后你自己及班里及学校发生的有意义的事情;3.希望了解她的近况。 要求： 1.短文词数不少于100。2.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。3.书写须清晰、工整。4.邮件中不能体现本人真实信息。,step two :整合内容：“全”
6、,step three 有效使用过渡词,闪亮过渡词：first=First and foremostsecond=Addtionallythird=Last but not least in addition,whats more,besides,however,on the one hand.on the other hand.,What makes a good piece of writing?,1.neat writing书写,2. content内容,3. structure结构,4. language语言,干净整洁,恰当的过渡词,全面,闪亮词汇，闪亮句子,our show time
7、,来自这所中学的SueWood老师，不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据写作要点和要求给Sue写封电子邮件。 写作要点： 1.假定你是李华。你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里，表达对她的感谢之意;2.介绍她离开后你自己及班里及学校发生的有意义的事情;3.希望了解她的近况。 要求： 1.短文词数不少于100。2.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。3.书写须清晰、工整。 4邮件中不能体现本人真实信息。,A piece of a students work(学生作品）尝试打分My name is Li Hua. I am one of your student and I study i
8、n XinHua Middle School.Now, I write this letter because I want to thank to you.Its almost two months since you left us. Your words and deeds makes me remember you forever. Under your help,I make great progresses in my english learning.You often spend your time communicate with us ,so we had a good t
9、ime together.you encourage us speak more english,after your leaving ,we started english club,and the whole class decide to learn english well.How is everything with you lately? we hope to know more about you. Hope to keep in touch.,students,make,With,progress,communicating,to,decided,We,17分,simple m
10、istakes,拼写 词性 单复数 冠词 大小写 固定短语,Simple mistakes leave a bad impression!,1. My name is Li Hua. I am a student and I study in XinHua Middle School.,2.I write this letter because I want to thank to you.,I am Li hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle school.,Improve your sentences.(亮化句子),Im writing to express
11、 my sincere gratitude to you .,3.Your words and deeds makes me remember you forever.,There is no doubt that what you said and did was kept in my mind forever.,4.With your help,I made great progress in my English learning.,It was because of your truly help that I made great progresses in my English l
12、earning.,5.You often spend your time communicating with us ,so we had a good time together.,Thanks to your spending your time communicating with us ,as a result, we had a good time together.,我们的文章亮起来了么？,I am Li hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle school.Im writing to express my sincere gratitude to y
13、ou .Its almost two months since you left us. First and foremost,there is no doubt that what you said and did was kept in my mind forever. Addtionally,you taught me so well that I took intrest and made great progresses in my English learning.Whats more,thanks to your spending your precious time commu
14、nicating with us ,as a result, we had a good time together.Last but not least,It was because of your truly help that we made up our mind to set up English club which went well as planned.How is everything with you lately? we hope to know more about you. Hope to keep in touch.,Now, Lets check whether our writing has been improved in content, structure and language ? 我们的文章亮起来了么？,Rome is not built in one day!,Practice makes perfect!May you succeed!,Homework Have a try!,
