《江苏省高考英语一轮复习第24讲 书面表达写作技巧指导(二)课件》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《江苏省高考英语一轮复习第24讲 书面表达写作技巧指导(二)课件（104页珍藏版）》请在金锄头文库上搜索。
1、成化高中 张 鑫第24讲 书面表达写作技巧指导（二 ）考纲对写作的要求概 述具体解题步骤一 认真审题，攫取要点 二 理顺要点，挖掘要点 三 灵活表达，化解难点 四 逻辑清晰，过渡自然 题型特点2012江苏卷生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执，导致关系紧 张。请你结合此事，并根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向学校英文报 “Happy Teens”专栏投稿。 一、认真审题，攫取要点生活中冲突时有发生（开头句已经给出）； 苏华和李江打篮球时因为碰撞发生争执，导致关 系紧张； 他们俩遇事不够冷静。二、理顺要点，挖掘要点（一）“分析发生冲突的原因”和“谈谈避免冲突 的做法”需要我
2、们去想象挖掘要点； （二）在“简要描述事情的经过”时，我们要增加 合理的细节。三、灵活表达，化解难点 1.简要描述事情的经过Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. Yesterday afternoon there was a basketball game. During the basketball game, Su Hua and Li Jiang tried to catch the ball and knocked down each other. They started shouting at each other.
3、A horrible quarrel happened. It contributed to the tension between them. Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. While playing basketball yesterday afternoon, Su Hua, trying to catch the ball, knocked down Li Jiang. Then they started shouting at each other and a horrible quarrel happened,
4、 which contributed to the tension between them. （范文） Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.
5、 2.分析发生冲突的原因 Su Hua and Li Jiang were not calm enough. Both of them attacked at each other by mean things. They cared too much about whether they would win or lose. They didnt realize that such a thing was common in such a close game.In my opinion, both Su Hua and Li Jiang were to blame. Because the
6、y were not calm enough and both attacked at each other by words. They cared too much about whether they would win or lose. But ,as we all know, something like blocking, pushing and bumping is common in such a toughgame. （范文） To be honest, it was Sus fault but Li was also to blamethey were not calm e
7、nough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game. 3. 谈谈避免冲突的做法 To avoid such conflicts, we should be friendly to one another, which is important to enjoy a peaceful life. It is
8、also a virtue to forgive each other especially in such a competitive and stressful society. We should not blame each other but communicate more. Whats more, we must learn to how to handle such conflicts if we stood in the opposite side. To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, whic
9、h is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others place. （范文）四、逻辑清晰，过渡自然 Conflicts with others are common in everyday l
10、ife. Yesterday afternoon there was a basketball game, during which Su Hua and Li Jiang tried to catch the ball and knocked down each other. Then they started shouting at each other. As a result, a horrible quarrel happened, which contributed to the tension between them. In my opinion, both Su Hua an
11、d Li Jiang were to blame. Because they were not calm enough and both attacked at each other by mean things. They cared too much about whether they would win or lose. But, as we all know, such a thing is common in such a close game. To avoid such conflicts, we should be friendly to one another, which
12、 is important to enjoy a peaceful life. It is also a virtue to forgive each other especially in such a competitive and stressful society. We should not blame each other but communicate more. Whats more, we must learn to how to handle such conflicts if we stood in the opposite side.(161 words)范 文 Con
13、flicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel. To be honest, it was Sus fault but Li was also to blame
14、they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game. To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life
15、. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others place. Dont be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.(150
16、words)题型特点写作要领准确审题 把握情境 发表感想请根据你对以下两幅图的理解，以“Actions Speak Louder than Words”为 题，用英语写一篇作文。参考词：banner (横幅) stump (树粧) 你的作文应包括以下内容: 1. 简要描述两幅图的内容； 2. 概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解； 3. 举例说明两幅图对 你的启示。 注意： 1. 可参照图片适当发挥 ； 2. 作文词数150左右； 3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Actions Speak Louder than Words2013江苏卷描述图画一、提炼要点围绕图中人物的动作和重要的图标来提炼要点 。（一般表达）In picture 1, a man is trying to put up a bann
