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1、 说明文地点简介How to introduce a place?Placeocationreaopulationistoryimatelocal prcenery文体特点laph c以“五羊” 为为象征,以岭南文化著称. 气候特征 气候温暖，阳光充足，雨水充沛，年平均气 温为为21.8 。 风风景名 胜胜旅游资资源丰富,如著名的“羊城八景” 。 (Eight Scenes of Guangzhou)Step 1: 审题第三人称(Guangzhou)审内容： 介绍广州审时态： 地点简介属于说明文，用一般现在时审人称：Step2: 理清要点整理成5个句子城市名称 广州，广东东省的省府 地理位置
2、广东东省中部面积积7434.4平方公里 人口9,980,000 历历史文化 不仅历仅历 史悠久,还还是中国古代“海上丝绸丝绸 之路 (Silk Road on the sea)”的发发祥地;以“五羊” 为为象征,以岭南文化著称。 气候特征 气候温暖，阳光充足，雨水充沛，年平均气温 为为21.8。 风风景名 胜胜旅游资资源丰富,如著名的“羊城八景” 。 (Eight Scenes of Guangzhou) Step3: 翻译句子城市名称 广州，广东东省的省府 地理位置 广东东省中部面积积7434.4平方公里 人口9,980,000 历历史文化 不仅历仅历 史悠久,还还是中国古代“海上丝绸丝绸
3、之路 (Silk Road on the sea)”的发发祥地;以“五羊” 为为象征,以岭南文化著称。 气候特征 气候温暖，阳光充足，雨水充沛，年平均气温 为为21.8。 风风景名 胜胜旅游资资源丰富,如著名的“羊城八景” 。 (Eight Scenes of Guangzhou) 10分钟 Exchange your composition with your deskmate and help each other to improve your writing. 在评改时，应注意以下几个方面：1、在语言方面,重点评判句子的语法结构是否正确 、用词是否规范;是否使用了合适而且较丰富的句 型
4、结构;是否用上了较高级词汇 。2、在内容方面，重点评判是否表达全部规定的5项 内容，在表达完整的5项内容时，适当添加一些内 容，不扣分。3、在连贯性方面，重点评判5个句子是否构成一 篇连贯的短文；是否合理使用了过渡词语。Step3 句子翻译广州，广东省的省府，位于广东的中部， 面积是7434.4平方公里，人口是9，980，000。_Guangdong province, Guangzhou, _ of Guangdong Province, _ 7434.4 square kilometers _9.98 million.Located in the middle of the capital
5、 city covers an area of with a population ofStep3 句子翻译不仅历史悠久，还是中国古代“海上丝绸之路”的发祥地。Guangzhou is _a city _, _the birthplace of the ancient “Silk Road on the Sea”.not onlywith a long history but also以“五羊”为象征，以岭南文化著称。Guangzhou, _ is “Five Goats”, _Lingnan Culture.whose symbol is famous forStep3 句子翻译气候温暖，阳
6、光充足，雨水(rainfall)充沛， 年平均气温为21.8Guangzhou has a _climate with_and _ is about 21.8.warmplenty of sunshine and rainfall the average temperature旅游资源丰富,如著名的“羊城八景”。Guangzhou _for tourists to visit, _ the “Eight Scenes of Guangzhou”.has many places of interest particularlyStep4 :检查、润饰, 添加适当过渡词语Located in th
7、e middle of Guangdong Province, Guangzhou, the capital city of Guangdong Province, covers an area of 7434.4 square kilometers with a population of 9.98 million. Guangzhou is not only a city with a long history, but also the birthplace of the ancient “Silk Road on the Sea”. _, Guangzhou, whose symbol
8、 is “Five Goats”, is famous for Lingnan Culture. _, Guangzhou has a warm climate with plenty of sunshine and rainfall and the average temperature is about 21.8. _, Guangzhou has many places of interest for tourists to visit, particularly the “Eight Scenes of Guangzhou”.Whats moreIn addition/BesidesA
9、s we all knowItItItThe steps for basic writingStep 1: Step 2: Step 3: Step 4:审题（内容、时态、人称）理清要点，整理成5个句子句子翻译检查、润饰, 添加适当过渡词语。介绍广东 假如你是一名导游, 你将带领一个外国旅游团 游览广东省。请用英语写一个发言稿，简介广 东。(文章开头结尾已给出) 写作内容 1. 广东省位于中国大陆最南部,南临南海，海岸 线总长3368公里，岛屿众多。 2. 广东省历史悠久，简称粤。 3. 广东素有水果王国之称, 香蕉、甘蔗、荔枝 、菠萝是其中的四大名果。 4. 广东是华南工业发达之省，水陆交通
10、便利， 海运发达。5. 其中，经济特区有深圳、珠海、汕头等。 6. 广东省有“食在广东”的美称。.参考词汇： 海岸线coastline； 甘蔗sugar cane；荔枝 lychee； 菠萝pineapple 经济特区special economic zonesLadies and Gentlemen,Welcome to Guangdong Province. Im Wang Qian. And Im more than glad to be your guide.Finally, I sincerely hope every one of you will enjoy yourself h
11、ere.Ladies and Gentlemen,Welcome to Guangdong Province. Im Wang Qian. And Im more than glad to be your guide. Guangdong Province, also called Yue for short, has a long history and is known for the saying, “Dont hesitate to have meals here.” Located by the South Sea in the southeast part of mainland
12、China, it has quite a few islands off its coastline, which has a total length of 3,368 kilometres. Known as a fruit king, Guangdong Province is famous for its high-quality bananas, sugar cane, lychees and pineapples. It is also one of the most developed industrial provinces in South China, with conv
13、enient transportation both on land and water. It has several special economic zones such as Shenzhen, Zhuhai, Shantou and so on.Finally, I sincerely hope every one of you will enjoy yourself here.介绍中国 一群外国朋友首次参观中国，作为 导游的你向他们介绍中国地理的特 殊情况。写作内容 1. 中国位于亚洲大陆的东部、太平洋西岸，陆 地面积约960万平方公里。 2. 从南到北，从东到西，距离都在5000
14、公里以 上。 3. 大陆海岸线长约1.8万公里。 4. 风景名胜区的资源是以自然资源为主的、独 特的、不可替代的景观资源。 5. 经过几亿年大自然的鬼斧神工，形成了许多 自然遗产，而且世代不断增值。 6. 许多地方被评为世界文化遗产并得到合理的 开发和保护。China lies in the east of the Asian Land and on the west bank of the Pacific Ocean, with an area of about 960 square kilometers. It is more than 5,000 kilometers in distan
15、ce both from north to south and from west to east while the coastal line covers as long as 18 thousand kilometers. The resources in the places of interest are mainly natural- born, some of which are unique and irreplaceable landscapes. After thousands and thousands of years of magic work by nature，many natural heritages have come into being and have become more valuable with time. And
