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1、高考英语书面表达写作指导之漫 画 作 文(议论类)2010届Tasks:1. To deal with difficulty in writing about cartoons2. To learn the basic structure of cartoon writing3. To learn some useful expressions of cartoon writing2010年江苏省高考说明：writing示例示例2010年江苏省高考说明：writing文字材料类2010年江苏省高考说明：writing漫画类19971997199819981999199920002000叙述类2
2、010年江苏省高考说明：writing议论类2010?之英语漫画作文(议论类)攻 略Group work （1）:1. share your essay with your group members 2. raise the difficulties you had when writing itDifficulties?1. 读图2. 解意3. 谋篇读图1. 漫画的题目 眼睛2. 漫画的画面 细节3. 漫画的文字 观点4. 漫画的夸张 寓意读图题目 画面 文字 夸张 读图The underwear ( shorts for men and panties for ladies) is a
3、funny way to look at how desperate parents get - trying to prevent children from seeing things they should not - and maybe underwear isnt a good thing to see either but a lot better than some of the materials on the Internet!夸张Lets practise!题目 画面 文字 夸张 解意1. 辨明褒贬，找准角度 夸奖褒扬 or 批评讽喻？ 解意. 联系生活，明晰主旨 Imag
4、ination! 解意注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)， 切记要认真阅读！Lets practise!Lets practise!The picture shows some problems in the present education system in China. In the poor countryside, there are no buildings for classrooms, let alone good teachers. They are sometimes forced to leave their studies because their
5、families cannot afford the necessary fees. However, the situation is totally different in the cities. Almost all the children in the cities can have regular education. But they have their own problems. What they face is the endless homework, which puts so much pressure on them that some students don
6、t want to continue their studies. 谋篇3 parts:1) describe the picture2) interpret its meaning3) give your opinions about the phenomenonPart 1 Describe the pictureThe picture is talking about/showsThe picture shows a common phenomenon. The picture describes an interesting phenomenon.In the picture, the
7、re are/is (are) doingThe picture above is about Lets look at the picture above/first.Lets practise!Describe the pictureThe picture is talking about a story about neighborhood. Two ladies living in the opposite apartments say “hello” when they happen to meet each other in the corridor. One of them sa
8、ys, “I moved here 5 years ago, but I never met you before. Could I ask your name please?” The other says,” I have been here for 6 years. How should I call you?”Lets practise!Describe the pictureWe can see in the picture that a child is burdened with heavy schoolbags as well as huge mental pressure.
9、When he was a kid, he was expected to be able to go to a key elementary school, and later a key high school. And now he is expected to be admitted to a key university.Part 2 Interpret the pictureIt seems very ridiculous thatHowever, this kind of story is performed everywhere.The picture shows thatIt
10、 is the exact reflection ofThe picture indicate that weNowadays, it is a common phenomenon thatThis is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon amongPart 3 Give your opinions I think/believe that As far as Im concerned, In my opinion, From my point of view, shoul
11、d It is better/advisable to I consider it necessary Only in this way can.2/3 must have to Do/DontGroup work （2）:Join your group and rewrite the essay together, using the expressions youve learned.Polish up your article!1. To use linking words if necessary2. To use complicated structures if possible
12、1. To use linking words表示平行、对等或选择关系 and, as well as, together with, not onlybut also. 表示转折关系 but, however, in spite of, although, otherwise, while 表示对比关系 on the contrary, instead of, on one handon the other hand. 表示因果关系 so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to. 表示时间、顺序关系
13、 first, second , then, next, finally, for one thing . for another, in the end, 表示递进、强调关系besides, whats more, in addition, worse still, above all 表示解释、说明关系 such as, for example, for instance(例如), in other words, and so on 表示结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion1. T
14、o use linking words(五三)2. To use complicated structuresPeople suggest that the conference be put off. It is suggested that the conference be put off. She walked out of the room and many students followed her. Followed by many students, she walked out of the room To his surprise, the little girl knew
15、 so many things. What surprised him was that the little girl knew so many things. 被动语态非谓语动词从句The couple was so curious about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest. 倒装So curious was the couple about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest. Regular radio broadcasts began
16、in 1920.强调句It was not until in 1920 that regular radio broadcasts began. Many lives were saved because there were the efforts of firefighters.虚拟语气 But for the efforts of firefighters, many lives would not have been saved.My version:For most of the parents, its no easy job to keep their children away from the PC monitor. Lets look at the picture above. Two pe
