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1、 Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic. However, not until 1968 were women first a
2、llowed to compete in the Olympic shooting. With the sport becoming more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.广东08高考基础写作范文：句子表达有何亮点？写作中复合句常见的错误1.只有从句，没有主句The keeper who had lived in the light tower for a long time, so he could keep
3、calm in the storm. The keeper, who had lived in the light tower for a long time, could keep calm in the storm.2.以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子 The old man thought of his son, tears came down from his face. The hall is different from all other buildings , it is made of glass.3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然There are over fifty
4、students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday. Over fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday. The hall is different from all other buildings , which is made of glass. The old man thought of his son, with tears coming down
5、 from his face.4.过多地使用并列句组合信息 We were driving out into the country, and we saw our English teacher riding in a bus, and the bus was crowded. It is a beautiful day, and the sun is shining and a breeze is blowing. It is a beautiful day with the sun shining and a breeze blowing. As we were driving out
6、into the country, we saw our English teacher riding in a crowded bus. My English Learning It is six years since I began to learn English. With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made progress in my English. Now Im doing well both in writing and reading in English. But I still find it har
7、d to learn English, such as some difficult idioms. Difficult as it is, I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.请看范例从上述例子同学们可以明白什么样的句子叫“规范的英语句子”。其实， “规范的英语句子” 就是我们经常讲的三种句子：A) Simple sentence:Hearing the news, he was happy. B) Compound sentence A:He gave me a book but I f
8、orgot to bring it back home. C) Compound sentence B:What he is doing has nothing to do with me.=When he heard the news, he was happy.Here are 3 ways to make sentences: I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：1)借助名词短语做同位语如：李立，男，19岁，1986年生； 籍贯：广东。Li Li, a boy of 19, was born in Guangdong in 1986.2)借助介词短语做定语如：李飞，男，10岁，棕色短发，
9、身 穿白色茄克。Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with short brown hair and a white jacket.如：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就 找到了他们的村子。With the help of Tom, we soon found their village.4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。They are standing under the big tree, waiting for the president.3)借助介词短语做状语II. 巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句：如：他给我钱，我不要。I was
10、 just walking down the street corner when I saw you.如：我刚到拐角处，就见到你啦。He gave me a lot money but I refused. III. 用好从句和引导词，写出规范的复 合句：1) 名词性从句如：老师生气。原因：王力迟到。That Wang Li came late to school made the teacher very angry.2) 定语从句如：中国，地处亚洲东部；特点： 地大物博、人口众多。China, which lies in the east of Asia, is a great coun
11、try with a large area and population as well as rich natural resources. 3) 状语从句如：雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受感动 。I was deeply moved by this, because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.学会运用复合句和非谓语动词 Kate is a new student. She comes from a northern province. She speaks a dialect. We find it hard to unders
12、tand her dialect.Kate, a new student from a northern province, speaks a dialect which we find hard to understand.用一句话表达不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时 学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。学会运用复合句和非谓语动词第一步：拆分成几个简单句不是人人都能学好英语。小学生同时学汉语和英语。这会影响汉语学习。第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句 Not everyone is good at learning English. Children from primary school learn
13、 English and Chinese at the same time. This will affect their Chinese study. Not everyone is good at learning English. Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time. This will affect their Chinese study.第三步：合并句子That children from primary school start to learn Engli
14、sh and Chinese at the same time will affect their Chinese study because not everyone is good at learning English. Not everyone is good at learning English. Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time. This will affect their Chinese study.第三步：合并句子If children from
15、primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time, this will affect their Chinese study方法2 ：because not everyone is good at learning English.情景说明通知：新光中学高三年级学生将于9月9日去体检。体检地点：第一人民医院体检时间：9月9日，星期六 注意： 1、7:45在医院门口集合，可以骑车或步行前往； 2、体检前空腹； 3、在医院要保持安静，听从医生和护士的安排。实战练习Notice The students in Sen
16、ior Three of Xinguang Middle School will go to have a physical examination in the First Peoples Hospital on Saturday, 9th Sept. Well meet at the hospital gate at 7:45. You may either walkthere or go there by bike. We are not allowed to eat or drink anything before the examination. Please keep quiet and listen to the doctors
