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1、高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家 版权所有高考资源网- 1 -最新六年高考英语满分作文及评析（04-09）2009 高考英语满分作文【全国卷 I 海南、宁夏】 【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给 Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：1外出购物2替房东还书 K3 Tracy 来电话留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消2）此事已告知 Susan3) 尽快回电注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Mrs. Wilson,Im going out sho
2、pping, and wont be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 oclock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very so
3、rry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. Yours,Li Hua 名师点评 本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点
4、合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。【北京卷】【试题回放】情景作文假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。注意：词数不少于 60提示词：郊区 suburbs高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家 版权所有高考资源网- 2 -April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningf
5、ul experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a bo
6、ard reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel its our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【名师点评】本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较
7、好的句式表达。【北京卷】【试题回放】开放作文请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于 50In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家 版权所有高考资源网- 3 -What an interesting picture! A western young man, sitting at a table, is read
8、y to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think its a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man i
9、n the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we dont need to copy others ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.【名师点评】本文是开放性作文，要求考生把握好图画内容，发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人，要体会到西式刀叉对
10、中式食物的矛盾性。行文结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。【江苏卷】【试题回放】鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。鼠标的必要性 对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪鼠标的便捷性 编辑文本，搜索信息高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家 版权所有高考资源网- 4 -收发邮件，选购商品点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除点播音乐，下载电影如果过分依赖鼠标 （请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点）注意：1对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2词数 150 左右。开头
11、已经写好，不计人总词数。3作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computerFor most people, its almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the
12、 screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.A convenient tool can certainly make our wor
13、k easier, but it doesnt always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physical
14、ly.【名师点评】本文为提纲式说明文体裁，所选内容与我们生活相关，考生只要把所给要点逐条陈述，适度发挥，不要逐条翻译即可。文章说理清楚，语言流畅，句式表达多样，用词恰当、准确。不失为一篇满分作文。2008 高考英语满分作文【全国卷】【试题回放】假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（panda）,一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳” 和她的母亲 “白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：1、 自我介绍；2 、 祝贺苏琳生日；3 、 感谢工作人员； 4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。注意：1、词数 100 左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、开头语已为你写好。例文：Dear Sir/Madam,Greetings from China!Im Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. Ive been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her
