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1、How to write a good article,By Allen,下面三幅图体现的是学生的课外学习、课余活动和社会实践活动三方面的课外生活。请写一篇题为My out-of-class Activities的短文，并分别写出你的感受以及你对整个开外活动的看法。 字数120个左右,I am a student. I study at Chabei Senior Middle School. We have a lot of out-of-class activities. Some students like reading, some like planting trees, and o
2、thers like playing football. I like playing basketball. I think Planting trees is the most important thing. Out-of-activities is good. It can make our body strong. It can open our minds. It can make us feel relax. It can make us help each other. If you dont take part in it, you will become unhealthy
3、. You cant study well. We can make our school life colorful only in this way. It is helpful to us students,一。注意分层。把握时态。 二。合理使用动词或动词短语 1。避免使用相同词汇，增加表达的新颖性 Some like reading and some like cooking, but I like playing games. Some like reading and some enjoy cooking, but I am fond of playing games. 2。使用助
4、动词增强文章的感情色彩 I went there but I didnt see you. I did go there but I didnt see you. 3。多用词组表达单个词义 John was killed in the accident. John lost his life in the accident,三。注意在写作中使用起、承、转、合的短语 1。个人观点：in my opinion, as far as I know, in short, in a word, generally speaking, on the whole, to tell the truth, to
5、 be honest. 2。解释、说明：that is to say, namely, in other words, according to, in fact, as a matter of fact. 3。时间、顺序: for one thing, for another, on the other hand, in the end, at last 4。递进、强调:besides, in addition, what is more, worse still, to make things worse, What is worse, above all, at the same tim
6、e,5。并列、选择:bothand, as well as, neithernor, eitheror, not onlybut also. 6。转折、对比:however, in spite of, otherwise, while, but, although, though, nevertheless, compared to / with. 7。因果、举例:therefore, as a result, because of, due to, thanks to. for example, Takefor example, such as, and so on, as follows,
7、四。使用各种复杂句子 1。状从，定从 He is a good teacher. We all love and respect him. He is such a good teacher that we all love and respect him. 2。介词短语 Our country is a beautiful country and it has a long history. Our country is a beautiful country with a long history,3。Ving ved形式 When I saw this, I jumped with jo
8、y. Seeing this, I jumped with joy. 4。倒装句 You can learn to write English well only in this way. Only in this way can you learn to write English well only in this way. 5。强调句 It was Xiao Ming who helped me with my English,常用句式 As is well known, The reason why is that Whats the most important is that. d
9、o what (all, everything, all that) sb. can to do Everything has two sides. Only in this way can we It is/was 强调成分 that There is no doubt that Sth .must be done to do sth. 必须采取措施去干某事. find it adj. to do sth,my outofclass activities In our school, our students have outofclass activities every day, wha
10、t is important is that during the outofclass, we can study each other and discuss problems. It makes us feel relaxed and solve many problems. On the other hand, we play balls, it can make our body strong, at the same time, planting trees can make school become more and more beautiful In the opinion
11、of me, outofclass activities is good for our healthy and study. It makes me feel comfortable and make me learn about knowledge. written by Lv xiaoqing,I am a student studying at Chabei Senior Middle School. We have a variety of out-of-class activities. Some students like reading, some enjoy playing
12、football, and others are fond of planting trees. I do like swimming. Generally speaking, what is the important is planting trees. In my opinion, it is good for not only our body but also our mind. First, it can make us feel relaxed. Besides, it is out-of-class activities that makes us help each other. Whats more, it can open our views. Not taking in the activities, you will become unhealthy so that you cant study well. In a word, out-of-class activities are of great help to us students. Only in this way can we make our school life colorful,Chabeis tomorrow will be better
