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1、【英语】初中英语中考英语书面表达易错题精选一、中考英语书面表达(含答案详细解析)1 的同学 ,初中生活即将 束,你 一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九( 1)班的学生。 以 My junior high school life 为题 ,写一篇 80 左右的短文。提示:1.个人基本情况介 2.校园(校园干 而美 ,活 非富多彩);老 ( 授知 ,教会做人, 常鼓励);同学(和睦相 ,互相学 ,共同 步)。3. 学校、老 、同学表达感 和祝福。要求:1. 文章包含以上提示内容,适当 。2.文中不能出 真 的校名和人名。【答案】 My junior high school lifeMy
2、name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life iscoming to an end. I m glad to tell you something about my school life.Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourse
3、lves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together.I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】 是一篇 材料作文,介 我的初中生活。【 解】 合所 材料,可知本文主要考 一般 在 和一般将来 ,人称 第一,三人称,注意主 一致 ,句子 构主要 系
4、表 构和 构,注意一些常 句式的 用,比如:My name is,I m glad to ,Our campus is,Our teachers teach us等句式的 用。写作中注意运用代 ,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述 序,符合 关系。【点睛】本文 构 凑, 言 。开 介 了我的个人情况,接下来介 我 的校园,老 和同学,最后 学校、老 、同学表达感 和祝福。此 go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth,all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, le
5、arn from, make progress 等 些 的运用也 文章增色不少。2 面表达“小手拉大手 ,同做文明人。 ”自 建文明城市文明 村以来,淄博人民万众一心,众 志成城 ,让人点 的行 随 可 。作 中学生,我 也做出了自己的努力。 根据以下所 要点 ,写一篇 100 左右的英 短文。1.种植花草 木;2.遵守交通 ;3.公共场合不大声喧哗;4.公交车上主动给有需要的人让座;(自主发挥,至少两点)参考词汇 : civilized 文明的make joint efforts 共同努力obey 遵守【答案】 Since creating the civilized city and co
6、untryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts (共同努力) . Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. Forexample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others safety, we ob
7、ey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition (此外) , we no longer talk or laugh loudly in public.Whats more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never litteringanywhere. Furthermore (而且)
8、, we are accustomed to (习惯于) queuing up (排队) for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮点说明:这篇习作的层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语,例如 make joint efforts , as junior students , for example , obey the traffic rules , r
9、un red light, in addition , no longer ,in public , and so on ,whats more ,on a bus, in need, be accustomed to , queue up , all in all 等。而 to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ Whats more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our
10、 best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized. 等插入语的运用,丰富了短文内容,使语言表达多样化,是本文的最大亮点。点睛:书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。3( B)根据要求完成大作文,词数 :80-100体育运动是中学生的共同爱好.请根据下面提示写一篇题为What We Get from
11、 Sports的短文,应该包含以下要点:1,学生参加体育运动的兴趣不同,理由各异.2.多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自己.3.男孩参加各项体育运动,希望运动能使自己更强壮.4.女孩也喜欢运动,希望运动使自己减肥和保持健康,苗条 .5.你对运动的观点.6.注意 :文中不得出现自己的名字和学校的名字7.短文开头已给出,不计入词数 .8.参考词语 :keep slim (保持苗条)What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in common an interest insports._【答案】 Students in
12、 our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sport
13、s in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise. In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【详解】本篇写作主要是谈论自己对运动的观点和看法,应该用一般现在时态,写作要点要包括:1.提出目前学生对运动的不同看法及原因。2.具体分析(多数学生的观点、男生的观点、女生的观点)。 3.提出自己对运动的观点。亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好地完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态,主谓一致,在文中使用了时间状语从句,定语从句,特别使用一些亮点词句,如have fun ,in order to , as for, in my opinion 等。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,句子通顺,行文连贯。