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1、书面表达系列复习,基础篇设计制作：铜梁一中 李川,高考英语书面表达评分标准,一、评分原则： 1本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 2先根据文章内容和语言初步确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。 4评分时主要关注：内容要点、应用词汇、语法结构及连贯性。,5拼写与标点符号，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，但英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受 6如书写较差，以至于影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 二、内容要点：（全面） 一般6、7个要点，10句话描述,三、各档次的给分范围和要求： 第五档（21-25分）：完全完成了试题规定的任
2、务。 覆盖所有主要内容；应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；完全达到了预期的写作目的。有较强的语言运用能力。,第四档（16-20分）完成了试题规定的任务。 虽漏掉1、2个次要点，但覆盖所有主要内容；应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求；语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯；达到了预期的写作目的。,第三档（11-15分）基本完成了试题规定的任务。 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容；应用的语法结构和词汇能
3、满足任务的要求；有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解；应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯；整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。,第二档（6-10分）未恰当基本完成了试题规定的任务。 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容；语法结构单调、词汇项目有限；有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解；较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。,第一档（1-5分）未完成了试题规定的任务。 明显漏掉主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求；语法结构单调、词汇项目有限；较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解；缺乏语句间的
4、连接成分，内容不连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。 0分 未能清楚地传达给读者信息：内容太少，无法评判；无关内容或所写内容无法看清。,四、说明: 1内容要点可用不同方式表达。2对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。 3结尾与上文内容衔接紧密，合乎逻辑。,常见连接词,表示罗列增加 the other hand, besides / whats more/ in addition / furthermore/ moreover /another/ also, especially/ In particular, 表示解释说明 now, in addition, for example, for insta
5、nce, in this case, moreover , furthermore, in fact, actually,表示时间顺序 now, at present, recently, after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days, at first, in the beginning, to begin with, later, next, finally, immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment , as soon as, the
6、moment from now on, from then on, at the same time, meanwhile, till, not.until, before, after, when , while, as, during,表示转折关系 but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other hand, in contrast, despite, in spite of, even though, except (for), instead, of course, after all,
7、表示并列关系 or, and, also, too, not only. but also, as well as, both. and, either .or, neither.nor表示条件关系 as (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless,表示因果关系 because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to., due to., therefore, as a result (of), otherwise, so that, such that表示让步关系 though, although,
8、as, even if, even though, whether .or., however, whoever, whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how (who, what, which, where, when, whom),表示举例 for example, for instance, such as., take. for example表示比较 be similar to, similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with (to). just like, ju
9、st as,表示目的 for this reason, for the purpose of, so that, in order to , so as to, 表示强调 indeed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously, above all,表示概括归纳 in a word, in short, in brief, on the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as far as I know, As we all know,
10、as has been stated，as I have shown, As far as I am concerned, finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion, We can draw a conclusion that,看高考题体会连接词的运用：,2001年普通高等学校招生全国英语统一考试书面表达试题 假如你是李华。你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。,Dear Dick, How nice to hear from yo
11、u again. You want to know what is going on in schools in China? In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. I dont know about others, but I used to have work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well.,Now I have more free t
12、ime. I can follow my own interests such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. Whats more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things. Best wishes, Li Hua,书面表达经
13、典句式,是短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的以下基本句式，每组句式的功能相同或相似，考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的12个，做到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。,1、表示原因 1）There are three reasons for this. 2）The reasons for this are as follows. 3）The reason for this is obvious. 4）The reason for this is not far to seek. 5）The reason for this is that. 6）We have good reason to believe t
14、hat.,There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life. Firstly，peoples living standard has been greatly improved. Secondly，most people are well paid，and they can afford what they need or like. Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life. 注：如考生写第一个句子没有
15、把握，可将其改写成两个句子。如：Great changes have taken place in our life. There are three reasons for this.这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。,2.表示好处 1）It has the following advantages. 2）It does us a lot of good. 3）It benefits us quite a lot. 4）It is beneficial to us. 5）It is of great benefit to us.,例如： Books are like friends. They
16、 can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizons. Therefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us.,3.表示坏处 1）It has more disadvantages than advantages. 2）It does us much harm. 3）It is harmful to us. 例如： However，everything divides into two. Television can also be harmful to us. It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television.,
