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1、Unit 1 Friendship writing,写作步骤 1. Creating a motivation to write 2. Brainstorming 3. Mapping 4. Outlining 5. Drafting 6. Editing 7. Revising,3/10,1. Creating a motivation to write,having a clear purpose or reason to write,The letter on page 7,1. What problem does Xiao Dong have? 2. What is Xiao Dong
2、 asking for?,1. He is not good at communicating with people and cant make good friends with them. 2. He is asking for some advice to change the situation.,4/10,2. Brainstorming listing all the ideas related to the topic,5/10,3. Mapping,3. Mapping organising useful ideas,1. change yoursef be confiden
3、t always smile say hello to everyone,2. improve yourself learn more communicating skills help people,4. Outlining,首段： 开门见山，表明写作意图。在本段中，写信人应该先简单介绍自己，然后陈述事由，表明写信的目的及原因。,Dear Xiao Dong , Im glad to receive your e-mail. You ask me something about _ (建议的主题） The following is my advice.,正文：委婉地提出建议及改进措施，或提出
4、忠告。,First, why not.? If you do this, . Secondly, you should/can. Then/That way, . Thirdly, it would be a good idea if . By doing this, .,末段：礼貌地总结并期盼对方的回复。,I hope you will find these ideas _, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to _. Yours Sincerely, .,5. Drafting writing according t
5、o your mapping,In my opinion, you should . My opinion is . I believe we should I dont think its necessary to . I advise you to . We must decide . Im afraid that . I think you should . Dont worry .,6. Editing peer editing: offering praise and suggestions picking out mistakes self-editing: correcting
6、mistakes improving the letter,7. Revising rewriting your letters,Dear Xiao Dong, Im glad to receive your e-mail. You ask me something about how to make friends. The following is my advice.,Everyone needs friends, so how to make friends is very important. First, you must be friendly to others if you
7、want to make friends with them. Then, look after others more than yourself. In my opinion, try to make the stranger feel easy. If you have different opinions, you can discuss with others. I dont think its necessary to quarrel with them.,Finally, I dont trust those people who leave you when you are in trouble, because a friend in need is a friend indeed. I hope everything goes on well with you, and youll make a lot of good friends. Yours truly, Miss Wang,14,Thank You!,
