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1、TRY TO WRITE BEAUTIFUL COMPOSITIONS!,Lets enjoy a video!,Use of the cell phone,send messages contact others play games surf online,take photos watch films listen to music ,We can use it to ,Troubles,Troubles,be bad for our health,may not focus on,search for answers on it , affect their studies,it is
2、 easy to lose, ,What do the mobile phones bring to us ?,send messages contact others play games surf online,take photos (videos) watch films listen to music ,spend too much time playing games be bad for eyes send messages in class surf online, cant put their effort into search for answers on mobile
3、phones,Should the students be allowed to bring the cell phone?,Steps of Writing,题材、人称、时态、要点,Part 1: (instruction),Part 2: (body),Part3: (conclusion),Should the students be allowed to bring the cell phone?,a person / a thing,I /we/you/he/she,V/Vs/Ved/will+V,给我们做了一个报告,discuss the advantages and disadv
4、antages of the cell phone,讨论了手机的利与弊,give us a report,中国有最多的手机,可随时随地与人联系（contact),。 。,有害于健康,。 。,have the most the cell phones,contact people at anytime and in anyplace,be bad for health,英语句子的翻译步骤 Step 1:找出主干(who-do-what),discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the cell phone,give us a report,have
5、 the most the cell phones,contact people at anytime and ,be bad for health,Ms Tang gave us a report.,we discussed about the advantages and disadvantages of the cell phone.,Last Monday we held an activity about whether the students should use the cell phones. Ms Tang was invited to give us a talk. Af
6、ter her speech, we had a discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of the cell phone.,巧用连词,英语句子的翻译步骤 Step 1:找出主干(who-do-what),Try to translate the sentences into English in your test paper!,一、多变句式原则,三、主题句原则,二、巧用连词原则,一、多变句式原则,1、使用感叹句,2、使用with 复合结构,3、使用定语从句,4、使用各种状语从句,5、It作形式主语或形式宾语句型,6、一句多译,二
7、、巧用连词原则,1、表示平行、对等或选择关系：,2、表示转折关系的连接词语有：,3、表示因果关系的连接词,4、表示解释、说明的连接词：,5、表递进、增补关系的连接词,6、表示总结的连接词：,7、表 “一二三”连接词,8、引用谚语,三、主题句原则,1、在讲到过去和现在的对比时，我们通常用：,2、在做调查问卷时，我们通常这样讲：,3、对社会想象一分为二来讲时的主题句：,4、在给对方提建议时：,3 2 5,4 6 7 8 9,1,Introduction,Main body,Conclusion,The person that I never forget is my English teacher
8、. She is a tall woman with thick glasses. She is friendly as well as helpful.,At first, I found it hard to learn English. Although I fell behind others, she always encouraged me to catch up with others. Whats more, she often taught me to solve problems in different ways. For example, she told me it
9、was no use remembering new words without understanding. Thanks to my English teacher, my English has greatly improved.,How lucky I am to have such a good teacher！,My English Teacher,discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the cell phone,give us a report,have the most the cell phones,contact peop
10、le at anytime and ,be bad for health,Last Monday we held an activity about whether the students should use the cell phones. Ms Tang was invited to give us a talk. After her speech, we had a discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of the cell phone.,China has the most cell phones in the wor
11、ld. We can contact people at any time and in any place. We can also send short messages, listen to music and take photos with the cell phones. They are bad for our health. people seldom talk with each other face to face. it is bad for them when they use them in class.,It is reported that,By using it
12、,But,As a result of using it,have fewer chances to,Especially for the students,It is reported that China owns the most cell phones in the world. The cell phones play an important part in our daily life. By using it, we can contact people at any time and in any place. We can also send short message,
13、listen to music and take photos with the cell phones. But they are bad for our health. As a result of using it, people have fewer chances to communicate with each other face to face. Especially for the students, when they use them in class, it is really bad for them.,After taking part in the activit
14、y, we had a better understanding of the cell phones.,Last Monday we held an activity about whether the students should use the cell phones. Ms Tang was invited to give us a talk. After her speech, we had a discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of the cell phone.,Rome isnt built in a day. The more you read，accumulate(积累） and practise，the better your writing will be！,Remember:,+11/12,14/15,Homework,你的爸爸打算买一辆私家车，你是赞成他买还是不买呢？写一封信给爸爸，表明你的想法。,Dear Dad, I know you are going to buy a private car. The car is popular in China._ Yours,
