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1、书面表达训练,如何审题、如何遣词造句,如何审题,最近，你校师生帮助辍学的李明同学返校。请根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观介绍这一情况。,注意：1、信的开头已为你写好。 2、词数：100左右。 3、参考词汇：捐款 offer money; 募捐collect money,范例 1,如何审题？,1、审定体裁、题材； 2、审定人称； 3、审定时态； 4、审定要点； 5、审定结构。,1.审定体裁、题材： 2.审定人称： 3.审定时态： 4.审定要点： 5.审定结构：,书信、李明遭遇 第三和第一人称 现在时、过去时 李明1.2.3；师生1.2.3. 可分为两部分,审题提示,最近，你校师生帮助辍学
2、的李明同学返校。请根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观介绍这一情况。,Li Ming was one of the students in our school. He was good at his studies and always ready to help others. His father died and his mother is seriously ill in bed. He had to leave school.,学生习作,如何遣词造句,The whole school was shocked at the news. Every teacher and stud
3、ent offered money to him. They went out to collect money for him. With their help, Li Ming returned to school soon.,学生习作,如何遣词造句,Li Ming was one of the students in our school. He was good at his studies and always ready to help others. His father died and his mother is seriously ill in bed. He had to
4、 leave school.,习作提升,Li Ming is a student of our school. He is not only good at his studies but also always ready to help others. But he had to leave school because his father died and his mother is seriously ill. As a result, he had to make money to help his family.,The whole school was shocked at t
5、he news. Every teacher and student offered money to him. They went out to collect money. With their help, Li Ming returned to school soon.,习作提升,Hearing the news, all the teachers and students were shocked. In order to help Li Ming, we decided to offer money to him and some students went out to colle
6、ct money for him in the streets. With our help, Li Ming has already returned to school.,Dear editor， Im writing to tell you what the teachers and students have done to help a student who discontinued his studies in our school. Li Ming is a student of our school. He is not only good at his studies bu
7、t also always ready to help others. But he had to leave school because his father died and his mother is seriously ill. As a result, he had to make money to help his family. Hearing the news, all the teachers and students were shocked. In order to help Li Ming, we decided to offer money to him and s
8、ome students went out to collect money for him in the streets. With our help, Li Ming has already returned to school. With best wishes! (100) Yours, Wei Fang,定稿誊写,如何遣词造句,范例 2,题目：根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍香港的短文，字数100字左右。 香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，人口600多万，被称为“东方明珠”。1842年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。1997年她已回到祖国的怀抱，其前景会更美好
9、。 参考词汇：明珠 pearl，鸦片 opium。,理清要点 1、香港的地理位置、面积、人口和特点。 2、鸦片战争后香港的处境。 3、1997年她回到祖国的怀抱。 4、其前景会更美好。,题目：根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍香港的短文，字数100字左右。 香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，人口600多万，被称为“东方明珠”。1842年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。1997年她已回到祖国的怀抱，其前景会更美好。 参考词汇：明珠 pearl，鸦片 opium。,题目：根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍香港的短文，字数100字左右。 香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，
10、人口600多万，被称为“东方明珠”。1842年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。1997年她已回到祖国的怀抱，其前景会更美好。 参考词汇：明珠 pearl，鸦片 opium。,1.审定体裁、题材： 2.审定人称： 3.审定时态： 4.审定要点： 5.审定结构：,介绍、香港 第三人称 现在时、过去时、将来时 1.2.3.4. 可分为两部分或三部分,要点 1、香港的地理位置、面积、人口和特点。 2、鸦片战争后香港的处境。 3、1997年她回到祖国的怀抱。 4、其前景会更美好。,译写单句,1. 香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，人口600多万，被称为“东方明珠”。 Hong
11、Kong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k. Her population is more than 6 million. She is called “The Pearl of the East”,要点 1、香港的地理位置、面积、人口和特点。 2、鸦片战争后香港的处境。 3、1997年她回到祖国的怀抱。 4、其前景会更美好。,译写单句,2. 1842年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。 She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War. 1997年她已回到
12、祖国的怀抱， In 1997, she returned to motherland. 4. 其前景会更美好 Her future is / will be very beautiful.,1. Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k. Her population is more than 6 million. She is called “the Pearl of the East”. Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k a
13、nd (. Her) population is more than 6 million. She is called “The Pearl of the East” 2. She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War. In 1997, she returned to motherland. 4. Her future is very beautiful. She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War. In 1997, she returned to motherland
14、 and (. Her) future is very beautiful.,连句成篇,Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k and population is more than 6 million. She is called “the Pearl of the East” . Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of 1,045k and has a population of more than 6 million. She
15、 is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”.,检查润色,It,to us that she is called,She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War. In 1997, she returned to motherland and future is very beautiful.,检查润色,In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hong Kong to Britain after the Opium War
16、, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot. After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997, the people of Hong Kong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard to make her more beautiful.,Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of1,045k and has a population of more than 6 million. It is well-known to us that she is called “the Pearl of the East”. In
