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1、Writing,Grade Three Class Six Helen Lee Apr.24,2007,Task 1 Review,Dictation:,星期一,星期二,星期三,星期四,星期五,星期六,星期日,Task 2 Sentence,1. 主+谓 (不及物动词) ( S + V ),The children are playing happily.,2. 主+谓 (及物动词)+宾 ( S+V+O ),I like popular music.,3. 主+谓+表 ( S+V+P ),He felt very happy.,4. 主+谓+间宾(人)+直宾(物) ( S+V+In-O+D-O
2、 ),Give me a cup of tea ,please.,5. 主+谓+宾+宾补 ( S+V+O+O-C ),We made the classroom clean.,1. 主+谓 (不及物动词) ( S + V ) 2. 主+谓 (及物动词)+宾 ( S+V+O ) 3. 主+谓+表 ( S+V+P ) 4. 主+谓+间宾(人)+直宾(物) ( S+V+In-O+D-O ) 5. 主+谓+宾+宾补 ( S+V+O+O-C ),The basic sentence structures:,Tense 时态 Voice 语态 3. To-v /V-ing/pp. (非谓语) 4. Nou
3、n clause 名词性从句 5. Attributive clause 定语从句 6. Adverbual clause 状语从句 7. 倒装句 8. 感叹句 9. 并列句 10. With + O +O-C,Practical sentence patterns and structure:,Practical sentence pattern and structure :,1. be + being + done,The classroom is being cleaned now.,教室正在被打扫.,2. make + O +O-C(v-ing/pp.),to/so as to/in
4、 order to,Seeing the cat, the mouse ran away.(状语),Teaching English is my job.(主语),3. No matter what you say , I believe you.(让步状语),I believe whatever you say.(名词从句),4. so + adj./adv.+ that such + a/an + adj.+ n + that,You are so kind that we all like you very much.,看到猫,老鼠就跑了(v-ing).,教英语是我的工作.(v-ing)
5、,无论你说什么,我都相信你(no matter),你是如此友好以至于我们都很喜欢你.,5. There +be + sth./sb. + to-v/v-ing/pp./,There is someone waiting for you.,There were ten people killed in the accident .,6. It+ is/was+ adj./pp./n +that-clause,Its a pity that he didnt come.,It +is/was + adj.+for sb.+to do sth.,It is necessary for us to l
6、earn English well.,think/find+it +adj.+ for sb.+to do sth.,We find it difficult to persuade him.,It + is(was)+被强调部分+that/who,It was in the street that I met her yesterday.,有人正在等你.,有十个人在事故中死亡(kill).,很遗憾他没有来(pity).,我们必须学好英语(necessary).,我们发现很难说服他(persuade).,昨天我们是在大街上碰到她的.,7. How + adj. + sub. + is(was)
7、 What + a/an +adj. + sub. + ,How interesting a story it is!,What bad weather it is!,8. 祈使句+ and/or +主句( 结果),Please speak loudly ,or nobody can hear you.,Go through the gate, and youll find the park .,9. The +比较级, the +比较级.,The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.,10. with + O+ O-C,He stood up wi
8、th his face red.,With his bike stolen, he had to walk home.,多么糟糕的天气啊!,请大点声,否则没有人听得见.,穿过门,你就会找到公园的.,他红着脸站起来.,由于自行车被偷了,他不得不走路回家.,Task 3 Paragraph writing,文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由关联词来完成,在修辞中称为启,承,转,合. “启”就是开头, “承”就是承接, “转”就是转折, “合”就是综合或总结.,“启”(段落或文章开头): first, first of all ,at first, firstly, to begin with,recen
9、tly, now, nowadays, at present, in rencent years, in general, general speaking, lately, currently,Nowadays we are facing a big problem-pollition.,Generally speaking, the more you practise, the better your writing will be.,(2) “承”(段落中的第一个扩展句中): second, third, in addition, besides, then, moreover, wha
10、t is more, what is worse, for example, for instance, surely, centaninly, obviously, in other words, especially, particularly, indeed, still, in fact, at the same time,In other words ,I will try my best to finish the work on time.,(3) “转”(段落的第二个扩展句中): but, however, despite, on the other hand, on the
11、contrary, yet ,instead, or, otherwise, while, in spite of,On the contrary, health is more important than wealth.,(4) “合”(段落的结论句或文章的结论段): in a word, in general, in short, above all, finally, in conclusion, at last, thus, therefore, on the whole, as a result,In a word, we should protect our earth to m
12、ake our world a better place to live.,Task 4 Share,假设你是李华，在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来信.他三 年前参观过你校,听说现在变化很大，希望了解有关情况。参照下图，给他写封回信，介绍你校的变化。 注意 ： 1. 回信须包括图画的主要内容，可适 当增减细节，使内容连贯。 2. 词数100左右。,原操场,新操场,新教学楼,旧教学楼,旧教学楼,三年前,现在,图 书 馆,Dear Mr Smith Im very happy to hear from your letter ，Lets tell you the new scho
13、ol. Our school happened great change. An new labrary build in the three years ago.A new classroom building was built at other side of road. Our new playgroud out the school. At last we planted many trees. That all, thank you.,8,高考书面表达评分原则 第二挡（较差）（6-10分） *未恰当完成试题规定的任务 * 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容 * 语法结构单调，词汇项目有限
14、 * 有语法或词汇错误，影响了对内容的理解 * 较少使用语句间的连接词，内容缺少连贯性.,15,高考书面表达评分原则: 第三档（适当）（11 15 分） *基本完成了试题规定的任务。 *虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有内容应 用的语法和词汇能满足任务的要求。 *有一些语法和词汇错误，但不影响理解 *应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容 连贯。,Dear Smith,I was very happy to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about our new school. Great changes have taken plac
15、e in our school. A new library was built where the old playground used to be . And a new teaching building was set up on the other side of the road. Our new playground was outside our school. At last, we have planted many green trees around our school .Thats all, thank you.,Li Hua,Yours,17,高考书面表达评分原
16、则: 第四挡（好）（16 20 分） * 完全完成了试题规定的任务 * 覆盖所有主要内容 * 语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求 * 语法或词汇应用基本准确，有些许错误 主要是尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致. * 应用简单的语句间的连接词， 使全文紧凑 .,Dear Smith,Li Hua,Yours,22,I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school. Youre right. Quite a few changes have taken place in our school . On one side of the road is a new teaching building; On the other side,where the playground used to be, stands another new buil
