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1、假设你是李华，光明中学的学生。寒假期间你参加了社区居委会组织的社区服务活动。请你按照图片顺序，以“CommunityService”为题，向学校英文校刊投稿，介绍这次活动情况。注意：1文章开头已为你写好2词数不少于603参考词汇：sportsfacilities体育设施,Duringthewintervacation,thestudentsinourclassjoinedinameaningfulactivityinwhichallofusdidourbit（做有益的贡献）forthecommunity._,高考英语书面表达,第三档：1214分及格。基本完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖了内容要点；运
2、用的句式和词汇基本满足任务要求；语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。基本达到了预期的写作目的。第四档：611分较差。未恰当完成试题规定的任务。漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容；所用句式和词汇有限；语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解。未能清楚地传达信息。,StandardsofGrading（评语与评分标准细则）,Step1:审题,假设你是李华，光明中学的学生。寒假期间你参加了社区居委会组织的社区服务活动。请你按照图片顺序，以“CommunityService”为题，向学校英文校刊投稿，介绍这次活动情况。注意：1文章开头已为你写好2词数不少于603参考词汇：sportsfacilities体
3、育设施,时态,人称,一次活动,Step2:,Duringthewintervacation,thestudentsinourclassjoinedinameaningfulactivityinwhichallofusdidourbitforthecommunity.,visitoldpeopledosomecleaning,cleanthesportsfacilities,pickupthelitter,putupdecorations,找要点,talkwiththeoldladycleanthetable；cleanthewindow；sweepthefloor；cleaner,tidier
4、；,sportscenter；providesb.withagoodexerciseplace；,step3:加细节,communitypark；lookdirty；pickupthelitter;agoodenvironment,putupapostersaying“HappySpringFestival”；gluesomepapercuts,Theending:Ithinkthisactivityisverymeaningful.(孙菀遥）Wefelttheactivitywasverymeaningfulandinterestingandwewantedtotakepartinitaga
5、in.(付荔）Ithinkthisactivityisnotonlymeaningfulbutalsohelpusimproveourability.(杨爱文）Thisisameaningfulactivitythatcanmakeusrealizethatwehavetheresponsibilitytodosomethingsforourcommunity.（乔佳宾）Weweresohappytotakepartinthisactivity,becauseitnotonlyhelpedthecommunitybecomemorebeautifulbutalso.(王菁钰）,points+d
6、etailslanguage,Beforewriting:,Readtheinstructionsverycarefully.(theperson,tenseandthetopic),Whilewriting:,审题,内容完整,语言准确,人称,时态,主题,Dontforgetthelinkingwords!,CommunityServiceDuringthewintervacation,thestudentsinourclassjoinedinameaningfulactivityinwhichallofusdidourbitforthecommunity.Inthemorning,wevis
7、itedtheoldwomanwhoisaloneliveinthecommunity.Wehelpedhertosweepthefloor,washthewindowsandcleanthetable.Agirlinourclasstalkedwiththeoldwoman.Theoldwomanfelthappyandthankful.Afterwelefttheoldwomanshouse,wecametothecommunitysportsground.Wecleanedthesportsfacilitiescarefully.Soeveryoneinthecommunitycanus
8、ethecleansportsfacilities.Intheafternoon,wecleanedthegrassinthecommunity.Wepickedupthelittersinthegrass.,livedalone,Thelast,wedecoratedthecommunitywiththepostersandtheflagsinordertocelebratetheSpringFestivial.Ithinktheactivityisbeneficialtousandthecommunity.Ilearntohelpothersfromtheactivity.,王佳唯,Com
9、munityServiceDuringthewintervacation,thestudentsinourclassjoinedinameaningfulactivityinwhichallofusdidourbitforthecommunity.First,myclassmatesandIwenttothehousewhichwasbelongedtoanoldman.Helivedalone.Wehelpedhimtocleantheroomandhadatalkingwithhim.Wedidourbesttohelptheoldmangetridofthealone.Theoldman
10、wasveryhappy.Then,wewenttothecommunitypark.Wecleanedthesportsfacilities.Althoughtheweatherisverycold,nobodysaidtiredorbadinourteam.Wealsowenttothecommunitygarden.Wepickeduptherubbishinthegrass.Itsverydirty.Buttherewasnoonewhodroppedoutoftheteam.,loneliness,was,theyweretiredorcold,Finally,wemadeablac
11、kboardforthecommunity.ThetitlewasCelebrationoftheSpringFestival.Althoughwewereverytiredinthisactivity,weenjoyedit,too.Ihope,ifmoreandmorepeoplejoinedthisactity,ourcommunitywillgetbetterandbetter.,幺维博,CommunityServiceDuringthewintervacation,thestudentsinourcommunityjoinedinthemeaningfulactivity,inwhi
12、challofusdidourbitforourcommunity.Firstwewenttovisitanoldladywholivedallalone.Whilewewereinherhome,oneofuschattedwithherandtheresthelpeddoathoroughcleaning.Wesweptthefloor,cleanedthetableandthewindow.Whentheworkwasdone,thehouselookedreallyneatandtidy.Thenwewenttothesportscenter,wheredifferentsportsf
13、acilitiesneededpolishing.Wesetouttoworkatonce.Innotimeeverythingwasdust-free.Tomaketheenvironmentclean,wealsopickedupthelittersonthegrassandalongthepaths.AstheSpringFestivalwasaroundthecorner,weputupNewYeardecorationsonthebillboardandaposterwiththecharactersHappyChineseNewYearonit.Havingdoneallthese
14、,wesawamorepleasantcommunity.Tiredaswewere,wefelthappyasallofourworkpaidoff.,情景作文（20分）（2008北京）假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“OurSpringOuting”的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。注意：词数不少于60.提示词：游乐园amusementpark垃圾箱bin,LastThursday,wehadaclassmeetingtodiscusswheretogoforourspringouting.Wecameupwi
15、thseveralchoicessuchasgoingboating,climbingamountain,andgoingtoanamusementpark.Finally,wedecidedtogomountainclimbing.Thenextday,wesetoffearlyinthemorning.Whileclimbingthemountain,weenjoyedthewarmsunshineandabeautifulview.However,whenwereachedthetop,wewereshockedtoseelitterhereandthere,suchasbottlesa
16、ndbananapeels.Thenwestartedtopickupthelitter.Afterwards,weputtherubbishintothenearbyrecyclingbinandnon-recyclingbinrespectively.Weweretiredbuthappy.,step3:加细节,我们去拜访了社区里一个独自居住的老人。我们帮她扫了地、擦了桌子和窗户。一个女孩和她聊天。Wevisitedanoldladywholivedaloneinthecommunity.Wehelpedhersweepthefoor,cleanthetableandwindows.Andagirlhadachatwithher.,Onecleanedthewindows,onesweptthefloorandonecleanedupthedesk.(王菁钰）First,wewenttoanoldmanshouseandhelpedhimtocleant
