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10、gupearlywillbenefitusalot 71words Beginningsentences Thepassage authordiscussestheimportanceof 本文 作者讨论了 的重要性 2 Thepassage authorarguesthat 本文 作者主张 3 Thepassage authorcompares with 本文 作者比较了 与 当然 不一定每篇记叙文都包含这六个要素 但 某人做了某事 结果如何 是应当包括的 因此 要写好概要 须找到以下两个问题的答案 1 谁做了什么 whodidwhat 2 结果如何 whatwastheresult 如果是
11、夹叙夹议的文章 还要加上这个故事给人们的启示或教育 例1 2011年广东 阅读下面短文 然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文 WhenSamfirstgottohisboardingschoolwithhisparents hewasveryhappy Hethoughthewouldbeabletogohomeeveryweekend Whenhewastoldhewouldnot hestartedcryingbecausethethoughtofnotseeinghisparentswasdrivinghimcrazy Hewasgivenuniformsandallotherthin
12、gsthathewouldneedfortheterm Hestartedcryingwhenitwastimeforhisparentstoleave Hewasthentakentothedorm wherehesawotherchildrenhappy Hetriedasmuchashecouldtofitinbutcouldnotbecausehismindwasathome Hestartedfeelinghomesick 想家 andwantedtogohomesassoonaspossible Hegotsicksoonbecausehecouldnoteattheschoolf
13、ood Hecouldnotconcentrateintheclassroom Allhecouldthinkwasbeingathomewithhisfamily Hehadnomobilephoneorothermeanstogetintouchwithhisparents Hewasangryandfeltlonely Hethoughthisparentshatedhimandthatwaswhytheylefthiminaboardingschool 写作内容 以约60词左右概括上文的主要内容 解题过程第一步 扫视材料可知是记叙文 于是可推知 本文的概要框架应是 Sam想家的时间 地
14、点 原因 影响和结果 串联要素法 写作方法 串联要素法记叙文的概要 一般包括记叙文的六个要素 who when where what how why 也就是考生应先通读阅读短文 找出这六个要素 然后用自己的话将这六个要素串成6句话即可 第二步 阅读材料 回答以下两个问题 1 谁做了什么 Samgottoaboardingschoolandhefelthomesick 2 结果如何 Hegotsick Hewasangrywithhisparentsandfeltlonely 第三步 用自己的话将其串联起来 参考范文如下 范文1 Samcouldnotgetusedtothelifeoftheb
15、oardingschool andhethoughthisparentshatedhimandlefthiminit whichmadehimsick angryandlonely 范文2 Inthepassage thewritertalksaboutSam sexperienceofhomesickness Hesufferedalotandfeltdissatisfiedwithhisparentsafterbeingleftinaboardingschool 例2 2011年广州一模 阅读下面短文 然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文 内容略 写作内容 1 以约30个词概括这篇演讲稿
16、的主要内容 2 然后以约120个词写一篇读后感 说明 诚信的重要性 解题过程 第一步 根据 写作内容2 快速获取大意 写作内容2 说明 诚信的重要性 扫读原文可以发现该文章是夹叙夹议的记叙文 那么我们可以形成概要框架 作者讲述了一个故事来说明诚信的重要性 这样 就有了方向和思路了 第二步 阅读材料 回答以下三个问题 1 谁做了什么 ThewritertellsastoryofanoverseasChinesestudent Thestudenthadbeencaughtwithoutaticketinthesubwaythreetimes 2 结果如何 Hewasnotevenallowedthechanceforaninterview 3 说明了什么 Honestyisthebestpolicy 第三步 用自己的话将其串联起来 参考范文如下 范文1 TodayIreadaninstructivespeech inwhichthespeakerargueshonestyisthebestpolicybytellingthestoryofanoverseasChinesestudentw
