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1、四级作文评分标准 阅卷标准分为五等 2分 5分 8分 11分及14分 每一等都可上下浮动一分 各等的具体标准如下 14分 切题 表达思想清楚 文字通顺 连贯性较好 基本无语言错误 11分 切题 表达思想清楚 文字连贯 但有少量语言错8分 基本切题 表达思想比较清楚 文字尚连贯 但语言错误较多 其中有少量的严重错误 5分 基本切题 表达思想不够清楚 连贯性差 有较多的严重语言错误 2分 条理不清 思路紊乱 语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误 且多数为严重错误 例 Trees 为题目的作文 Treesareman sfriends Wecanseetreeseverywhere Weplanttre
2、eseveryyear Wecanmaketableswithtrees Treesalsogiveusfruitstoeat Iliketoeatfruitsverymuch 切题 修改后 Treesareman sfriends Theyprovidemanwithtimber fruitsandseeds Withtimber mancanbuildhousesandmakefurniture Fruitsarethefood whichisnecessarytouseveryday Asforseeds theycanbeusedtoextractoil 14points 切题 表达思
3、想清楚 文字通顺 连贯性较好 基本无语言错误 Althoughhonestyisbelievedtobeavirtue therearestilldishonestpeopleinoursociety Forexample somebusinessmensellfakeproducttotheirconsumers somestudentscheatintheexams Dishonestpeopleareshort sighted Thosewhosellfakeproductsmaymakemoneyatfirst butconsumerswon tbuytheirproductsanym
4、ore Asaresult theywilllosetheirfortuneorevenbesenttoprison Bycontrast honestpeoplegainalot Thosewhoalwaystelltruthorkeeptotheirpromisenotonlyletotherstrustthembutalsogainrespectfromotherpeopleaswell Suchpersonsaresuretohavealotofgoodfriends Becausetheyaretrustableandrespectable everyoneiseagertomake
5、friendswiththem Besides itiseasierforapersonwithagoodrecordtogetagoodjob Generallyspeaking everyemployerwantshisemployeestobehonest Sowecansaythatanyonewhoishonestwillbepaidbacklater Inaword honestywinstrust respectandhonor Soitisimportantthatweshouldbehonest 11points 切题 表达思想清楚 文字连贯 但有少量语言错Nowadays
6、manypeoplechoosenotbehonestinourmodernsociety Wealmostcanfindsuchthingseverydayofourlife somestudentscheatintheexamforhighermarks somecorporationstellwrongdatatothepublicinordertogetmoreinvestment andsomedoctorstreattheirpatientswithunnecessaryandexpensivemedicinesinordertomakemoney sometimes 主语 dam
7、agedthepatient shealth eventheirlife Seeingthissituation Ithinkitmustbechanged 诚实带来的好处 Beinghonestwillbenefitnotonlyothers butalsoourselves First yourhonestywillmakeotherswillingtotrustyou Second beinghonestcanleadyoutofaceyourproblembravely whichhelpstosolveit Andthelast honestysurelyhelpstomakethe
8、societymoreharmony So Ithinkeveryoneshouldstarttobehonestandeveryoneshouldhavetheideathatoursocietycannotdowithouthonesty 8points 基本切题 表达思想比较清楚 文字尚连贯 但语言错误较多 其中有少量的严重错误 Inourmodernsociallife therearemanyexamplesaroundusshowmanypeoplearecheated 举例衔接 Advertisementscheatpeople salesmencheatpeople eveno
9、ne sclosestfriendscheathimorher Somanyheartbreaksareheardeverydaythatwecannothelpasking whereisourhonestexist Everybodyistaughthonestintheprimaryschooloreveninthekindergarten 诚实的好处 Honestydoesgoodnotonlytoourselves buttoothersaswell Ifwearehonesttoothers wewillbehappierandbeinabettermood Otherwise w
10、e llfeelguiltyatlast Toacompanyanditsadvertisement honestywillbringitmoreconsumerandmoreprofit Ifwecheatothers friendswillnotbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone Toacompany noconsumerwillbuyyourproductagain So astheaboveissaid itpaystobehonest Let screateamorallyoutstandingsocial 5points 基本切题 表达思想不够清楚
11、 连贯性差 有较多的严重语言错误 Withthedevelopmentofmoderneconomicandindustry competitiveisbecomingmoreandmoreobvious 跑题 Atthesametime theperformanceofdishonestisbecomingmoreandmoreclearly 无例子 Nowadays therearemanydishonestperformanceinoursociety 举例 利弊 Forexample somepeoplefoundthathesaledgoodshadpastthepreservati
12、ondate 主语 Notthrowthemaway therevisedthepreservationdateandsaledthemagainafterseveralday Anothercaseinthepoint apairofshoeswasmadefromgoat However inordertosaleatahighprice thesalerswouldsaytheyweremadefromcowwhichhasgoodquality Fromtheforegoing wecanseethatdishonestdoesnotonlyharmtoyourselvesbutals
13、oharmtoothers Anditisnouseonlyrealizetheharmnessofdishonest Weshouldbehonestfromnowonandbehonestonourdailylife Itisonlythatpeopleallovertheworldarehonestthenourcountrywillbebeautifulandwealthy 2points 条理不清 思路紊乱 语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误 且多数为严重错误 Nowinoursociety manypeoplearenothonestindoingsoming weoftencanm
14、eetwithsominghappenedcausebypeoplewhoarenothonest Forexample Nowwetakethebusneedcarrycentsown andwhenyouupstairsthebus youshouldputthecentintothemoneybox Everypeopledothat butsomeofthepeopleputtheotherthingsinsteadthecents Foranotherexample itismorenormalthatintheexamswecanalwaysfindsomestudentsseeo
15、thers Iconsiderthateverypeopleshouldbehonest Asapeople honestshouldbefirst becauseitcanmakeustobeincreaseandmakeoursocietydevelop Indoingeverythingweshouldbehonestall study work lifeandsoon Ifyourehonest everypeoplewillbefriendtoyou andwhowillregardyougoodpeople Butifyoudon tbehonest peoplemustunwil
16、lingtotrathwithyou Soifyouarewanttobeagoodpeople rememberhonestfirst 评分时还考虑以下三个因素 l 白卷 作文与题目毫不相关 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想 则给零分 2 字数不足者酌情扣分81 89 1分 7l 80 2分 61 70 3分 51 60 4分 不足50最多给5分3 只写一段者0 4分 只写两段者0 9分 作文最低分的规定 1 作文分为0分 总分若高于60分 最后报导一律按59分不及格处理 若低于60分则报导时一律再减6分 2 作文分大于0分 小于6分 则按下面的公式计算成绩 最后报导分 原计算总分 6分 实得作文分 高分作文标志 1 四级 120 150 六级 150 180 2 结构合理三段式 4 层次清晰 3 中心突出主题句 将提纲的中文提示改写成主题句放于段首 1 首先 tobeginwith firstly firstandforemost inthefirstplace2 其次 besides inaddition moreover furthermore inthesecondplace
