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1、高中英语复习写作讲评课Assessment practiceofWriting 2008年奥运会刚刚落幕 一家英文报刊在其网站上征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议 假设你叫李华 是该报的一名读者 请给该报编辑部写一封信 谈谈你的建议和理由 内容包括 向公众开放 用于健身 租给体育公司 创造经济效益 开辟成旅游景点 吸引游客 Deareditor IamLiHua areaderofyourpaper 评分的四大纬度 内容 语法 思想 框架 组织结构 要点全 拓展有度 有效 连接词 作文结构紧凑 流畅 准确 复杂语法结构 高级词汇 多种句型 开放能引起读者的共鸣 灵魂 常见错误 1 单词拼写
2、或用错 GiveyousomeadviseIjustprovideyoumyownsuggests Theycanattactvisitors advice suggestion attract 问题 2 时态语态问题WemaygivenittothePEcompany WemaygiveittothePEcompany 3 主谓一致问题Thesportstadiumsisverygreatandishighlyspokenofbytheforeigners Thesportstadiumsareverygreatandarehighlyspokenofbytheforeigners 4 逐字
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6、anttowritesomeadvice WouldliketogiveyousomeadviceContributesomesuggestionstoyou CollectsomeadviceHowtouse makeuseof makethebestofthestadiums AftertheOlympicGamesAfterBeijinghostedthe29thOlympicGames The2008BeijingOlympic wereover finished heldsuccessfullyinBeijing 向公众开放 用于健身 租给体育公司 创造经济效益 开辟成旅游景点 吸引
7、游客 2 列提纲 要点 Useitas beusedfor as takeitas openitforPlacesofinterest touristattractionsAttracttourists appealtovisitors beattractionforvisitors Give to Rent to berentedtoSportcompany companieswhichorganizematches organizingmatchesMake createmoney bringinmoney makemoreprofits Open beopenedtothepeople
8、public openthemtopublic Beusedfor as bemadeto Dosomeexercise buildourbodies strengthenourbodies 信息2信息3信息4 向公众开放 用于健身 租给体育公司 创造经济效益 开辟成旅游景点 吸引游客 正文 2 列提纲 要点 信息5 总结 意愿 结尾 Inmyopinion asfarasIamconcerned frommypointofview Iwouldappreciate Iwouldyouwillthinkof take intoconsideration 开头信息1 08年奥运会刚刚落幕 征集奥
9、运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议 你想写一些建议 3 连词成句 The2008BeijingOlympicGameswereover finished The29thOlympicGameswereheldsuccessfullyinBeijing Beijinghostedthe29thOlympicGameswithagreatsuccess The29thOlympicGameswerehostedinBeijingwithagreatsuccess Beijingachieveditsdreamofhostingthe29thOlympicGamessuccessfully Colle
10、ctsomeadviceHowtouse makeuseof makethebestofthestadiums AftertheOlympicGamesAfterBeijinghostedthe29thOlympicGames YouarecollectingsomeadviceonhowtomakeuseofthestadiumsafterBeijinghostedthe29thOlympicGames IhearyouarecollectingsomeadviceonhowtomakethebestofthestadiumsafterBeijinghostedthe29thOlympicG
11、amessuccessfully Wanttowritesomeadvice WouldliketogiveyousomeadviceContributesomesuggestionstoyou Iwouldliketogiveyousomeadvice Iwouldliketocontributethefollowingsuggestionstoyou 4 Useitas beusedfor as takeitas openitforPlacesofinterests touristattractionsAttracttourists appealtovisitors beattractio
12、nforvisitors 3 Give to Rent to berentedtoSportcompany companieswhichorganizematches organizingmatchesMake createmoney bringinmoney makemoreprofits 信息2信息3信息4 向公众开放 用于健身 租给体育公司 创造经济效益 开辟成旅游景点 吸引游客 正文 3 连词成句 2 Open beopenedtothepeople public openthemtopublic Beusedfor as bemadeto Dosomeexercise buildou
13、rbody strengthenourbodies 2 Thestadiumscanbeopenedtothepublic Thepubliccanbuildtheirbodies strengthentheirbodies 3 Thestadiumscanberentedtosportcompanywhichorganizematches Itcanbringinmoremoney makemoreprofits 4 Theycanbeusedastouristattraction Itcanattractmanyvisitors 信息5 总结 意愿 结尾 Inmyopinion asfar
14、asIamconcerned frommypointofview Iwouldappreciate Iwouldyouwillthinkof take intoconsideration Inaword 3 连词成句 Frommypointofview weshoulddowhatwecantomakefulluseofthestadium Iwouldappreciateitifyouwouldtakemyadviceintodeepconsideration 4 连句成篇 Para 1 The29thOlympicGameswerehostedinBeijingwithagreatsucc
15、ess Ihearyouarecollectingsomeadviceonhowtomakethebestofthestadiums Iwouldliketocontributethefollowingsuggestionstoyou Para 2 Thestadiumscanbeopenedtothepublic Thepubliccanbuildtheirbodies strengthentheirbodies Thestadiumscanberentedtosportcompanywhichorganizematches Itcanbringinmoremoney makemorepro
16、fits Theycanbeusedastouristattraction Itcanattractmanyvisitors Para 3 Frommypointofview weshoulddowhatwecantomakefullusethestadium Iwouldappreciateitifyouwouldtakemyadviceintodeepconsideration 4 连句成篇 Para 1 The29thOlympicGameswerehostedinBeijingwithagreatsuccess Ihearyouarecollectingsomeadviceonhowtomakethebestofthestadiums Iwouldliketocontributethefollowingsuggestionstoyou Para 1 Ihearyouarecollectingsomeadviceonhowtomakethebestofthestadiumsafterthe29thOlympicGameswerehostedinBeijingwithagreats
