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1、适用于外研新标准版高三 高考综合版第 1 期 适用于外研新标准版高三 高考综合版第 1 期 印 刷:北京世纪华彩印务有限责任公司地址： 北京大兴区本期定价 1.6 元。 1 编辑部质量反馈热线： 0431- 81041508刘老师1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 【例题展示】 家庭生活对每个人来说都是很重要的，因为我们接 触最多的便是家人，我们的主要活动也是在家庭内部完 成的。请结合要点提示，用英语写一篇 120 词左右的短 文， 简要介绍一下你的家庭。 要点： 1. 家庭成员； 2. 家庭活动 【思路点拨】 1. 审题立意 本篇习作要求是描写家庭成员及家庭生活，因此文
2、章内容应该紧紧围绕着自己的家庭生活展开， 切勿偏题。 讲述与自己的家庭生活无关的内容，例如讲到学校生活 或者自己朋友的生活， 这些都属于偏题。 本篇习作是记叙文， 应以自身经历来进行描写， 因此 文章应以第一人称为主，在介绍家庭其他成员时使用第 三人称。在描述家庭生活时应该使用一般现在时。 2. 谋篇布局 文章结构文章内容 总开门见山，“我” 有一个的家庭 分 介绍家庭成员 描述家庭活动 总总结概括，“我” 的感受 3. 遣词 根据写作要点及构思好的提纲，我们可以初步确定 文章中可能使用 到的词汇有： family, family member, father, mother, grandfa
3、ther, grandmother, like, love, study, work, support, help, in trouble. 4. 造句 把文章的主旨了然于心， 再加上词汇的铺垫， 接下来 我们就可以造句了。为了避免句子结构错误， 我们可以先 写一些简单句， 在此基础上再通读全文， 将这些简单句合 成复合句， 或者用一些连词将简单句连接起来， 使文章更 加流畅、 可读性强。如： a. Everybody loves his family. b. I have such a happy family that I enjoy spending time with my famil
4、y. c. There are three people in my family, Father, Mother and I. d. My father is a manager of a supermarket. e. He has to work late into the night. f. He spends most of his spare time with us. g. My mother is a Chinese teacher who works in a middle school. h. I m studying at that school. i. Because
5、of their busy work, we have little time to be together. j. My mother often buys me some books to read. k. My father will take us to the park or cinema when he is free. l. I feel so lucky to live in such a happy family. m. I believe our life will be better and better as long as we love each other. (1
6、) 在文章第一层中， 为了点明文章中心， 我们可能需 要 “I have a happy family.” 或者 “I enjoy spending time with my family members.” ， 我们可以用 such. that .结构将这 两个简单句连接起来“I have such a happy family that I enjoy spending time with my family.” 。 (2) 在介绍家庭成员时，我们可以使用 there be.句 型，“There are . people in my family.” (3) 在介绍母亲或者父亲时， 可能会
7、涉及到工作情况， “y mother/father is .” 或者 “She/He works at .” 。我们可 以使用非谓语将两个句子连接起来， 如 “Being a manager of a supermarket, my father has to work late into the night.” ； 如果你对运用非谓语结构没有把握，也可以使用定语从 句来连接两个句子，如“My mother is a Chinese teacher who works in a middle school.” (4) 在描述家庭活动时，我们可以用 and 等表示“并 列”的连接词来连接句子，如
8、“My mother often buys me some books to read and my father will take us to the park or cinema when he is free.” 。 5. 成篇 最后， 我们要再次阅读全文， 检查文章中是否存在拼 写或语法错误，并在句与句之间增加一些衔接和过渡性 的词汇， 如 “and, but” 等， 使全文衔接自然、 语意流畅。 【范文展示】 Everybody loves his family. So do I. I have such a happy family that I enjoy spending t
9、ime with my family. There are three people in my family, Father, Mother and I. Being a manager of a supermarket, my father has to work late into the night. But he spends most of his spare time with us. And my mother is a Chinese teacher who works in the middle school where I m studying. Because of t
10、heir busy work, we have little time to be together. But my mother often buys me some books to read and my father will take us to the park or cinema when he is free. I feel so lucky to live in such a happy family. And I believe our life will be better and better as long as we love each other. 【习作点评】
11、本篇习作非常鲜明地使用了典型的总分总结 构，一开始便开门见山地点明本篇写作的中心词汇 family， 立意明确； 接下来按照要点非常有条理地进行了 阐述，完整地介绍家庭成员及家庭活动，完成了写作任 务； 最后抒发了自己的感情， 在概括总结全文的同时又表 达出了情感的升华。 另外， 本篇习作使用的句式也比较多样化， 其中既有 简单句， 也有复合句。非谓语和定语从句等复杂成分的灵 活运用使文章增色不少。 【实战演习】 每个人在童年都会憧憬未来的属于自己的家庭。请 你根据要点提示， 用英语写一篇 120 词左右的短文， 描述 你理想中的家庭生活。 要点： 1. 家庭组成； 2. 生活方式 _ _ _
12、 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 彭晨 （供稿） （参考范文见下期） 1._ If you set a goal but it isn t your goal then it will be hard to achieve or even get started with it. Set a few goals you would like to achieve. Or try to find your own motivation and reasons for achieving a goal rather than the ones people around you have
13、set. Then you ll feel motivated to get started. 2. _ The problems that we imagine before getting started are often just in our heads. They are a bunch of excuses or opinions based on something you heard from someone at one time or another. Do your own research instead. Read books, do some research a
14、nd make a plan. With a bit of research you can often reduce your inner resistance and anxieties and find more positive benefits in getting started. With a clearer image of what you can do and how you should go about it, your negative feelings will become less powerful. 3. _ After you have done some research and made a plan you will probably have lessened your fears and anxieties. A lot of fear we feel before getting started comes from fu
