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1、大学英语四级写作,一、考核目的 考核学生用英语进行书面表达的初步能力 二、考核要求 1.时间：30分钟 2.字数：120词以上，180词一下 3.题型： 1）对比选择型 2）原因解释型 3）利弊分析型 4）问题解决型 5）记叙文 6）应用文,1作文题满分为15分。 阅卷标准共人为五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分。 2分-条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分-基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重错误。 8分-基本切题，表达思想比清楚，文字尚连贯，但语言错误较多。 11分-切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分-切题，
2、表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯较好，基本上无语言错误。 阅卷人员根根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为某一分数文件次（如8分）相似，即定为（8分）；若认为稍优或劣于该档次，则可加一分（9分）或减一分（7分），但不得加减半分。 字数不足应酌情扣分：,注：1、如题目中给出主题句、起始句、结束句，均不得记入所写字数。 2、 只写一段者：04分，只写两段者：09分（指规定三段的作文） 3、白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给零分。 2. 设作文最低分，采用下列成绩计算方法： 1）作文分为0分者，总分即使高于60分，一律作不及格处理； 2）作文分大于 0 分小于 6 分者，按下
3、列方式计算成绩： 最后报道分 = 原计算总分 6 + 作文实得分,三、评分标准：,二、全文(议论文)基本结构：,第二部分 四级作文的结构,Key to Success In such a competitive society, everyone has a strong desire to be successful and in his life. But how to achieve success? In my opinion, there are three main keys a clear objective, strong willpower and diligence. Fi
4、rst, it is very important to set up a goal before you start. No one can be successful without a goal in his mind. Besides, you need a strong willpower to keep you go ahead. There always are tough stones in every road to success. Whether you can go through it depends on whether you are persistent eno
5、ugh. Last but not least, everyone who wants to succeed should be diligent. There is and old saying, “No pains, no gains.” Most successful people owe their success to hard working, such as Einstein. In conclusion, if we want to be successful, we have to master the three main keys mentioned above. The
6、re is no shortcut to success. The three keys will assure you to realize your beautiful dream.,1. 主题句 主题句表明全段是关于什么及讨论什么的段落中心句，即：明确地表示全段要展开的中心点,四级短文写作中最好是把主题句放在段首。 2. 扩展句 扩展句是用来说明，解释，引申，或论证主题句所表达的中心思想的句子。 3. 结尾句 结尾句是用一句话对段落的主题进行重述,评论,或总结,借以强化主题,加深读者的印象. It is not difficult to make a right choice betwe
7、en buying a house in the low-rise area and buying one in the high-rise area (主题句).If we want to economize and get more personal area, we can choose the low-rise; but if we want to live more comfortably, we will choose the high-rise (扩展句). In a word, the key lies in the alternative of economy and com
8、fort (结尾句).,一、四级作文的段落基本结构：,第三部分 常见的错误和问题 注意方面： 1切题 2结构（三段式） 3落题快（主题句在每段句首，不要绕圈） 4长度（120150字，卷面第二页中间或到三分之二处，不要过多）,语言方面须注意的问题： 1题目的大写 An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident It Pays to Be Honest How to Succeed in a Job Interview 2句子错误 1）语态时态不正确 I read the passage carefully and several mistakes we
9、re found.( 语态不一致 ) I read the passage carefully and found several mistakes. I am very grateful if you could help me with this problem.(时态不一致) I will be very grateful if you could help me with this problem. 2）主谓不一致 He like playing football very much. He likes playing football very much. 3）中式英语 My Eng
10、lish has made great progress. I have made great progress in English. Work makes me feel satisfied. Work is a source of satisfaction to me. 4)结构不完整 Although had many difficulties in studying English, I finally passed the exam. Although I had many difficulties in studying English, I finally passed the
11、 exam.,Suppose you have two options upon graduation,2016年12月CET4作文题,对比观点/原因解释题型/利弊分析,One is to take a job in a company and the other to go to a graduate school.,One is to work in a state-owned business and the other in joint venture.,One is to find a job somewhere and the other to start a business o
12、f your own.,You are to make a decision. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your decision.,对比开头,Take a job in a company v.s go to a graduate school,Upon graduation, some of my classmates will further their education at a graduate school, but I will choose to take up a job immediately. A gradua
13、te education does have its advantages. Armed with more knowledge, you may survive better in the context of a knowledge-driven economy. Nevertheless, ,对比开头,work in a state-owned business v.s work in a joint venture,After graduation, I prefer to work at a state-owned enterprise (SOE) instead of a sino
14、-foreign joint venture or a wholly foreign-owned company. It is true that a joint venture once offered many advantages. In their early stages, they did enjoy preferential policies such as tax cuts or even tax exemptions, thus allowing their employees to earn salaries higher than those at SOEs. But n
15、ow foreign companies are entitled to only “national treatment”the same as our domestic companies are. On the other hand, ,对比开头,find a job somewhere v.s start a business of your own,While most students will try to land a job in a company, in a government agency, or at a school, I would prefer to star
16、t a business of my own. It is true that a stable job offers you some benefits. For example, you dont have to shoulder the heavy responsibility of making overall arrangements for the company, and you have a stable income, modest as it may be. However, ,开门见山，点明观点。小分句铺陈要讨论的问题。 退一步，阐述二选一中另一项的优势。 话锋一转，绕回主题，陈述个人的原因。,开头前两段,We all know that/as we all know There is much discussion about/attention to There are many arguments/opinions/views ab
