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1、写实派1As is illustrated/depicted /conveyed/revealed/betrayed/shown in the picture, (图的内容 原则上用一个主从句表达, 功底.两句合一句的途经,1 AND连结2 WHICH或WHEREAS 连结3 非谓语 )the two pet neighbors greet each other politely and amicably ,whereas (=WHILE/ON THE OTHER HAND)the two pets owners seem to ignore each other. Simple as it
2、is, the drawing renders us pondering awefully. (凑字数,其富余时,可省去)Accordingly, what this far-reaching/thought-provoking picture depicts reflects a common phenomenon in todays society:(反映的现实) pets, rather than/instead of people around them, are such an indispensable part in their daily life to the point w
3、here (加以讲解) they are excessively/inordinately(负面词汇,作者的态度尽在不言中,回避使用 I BELIVE,I THINK 之类的句式) fond of their beloved animals while neglecting those who care them, which has aroused great concern and should be given enough consideration. It goes without saying that its symbolic meaning that (主题句,尽量避免使用1
4、主系表 2 THERE BE结构 主张使用下列句型,1 NOTHING+BE+ADJ+THAN+TO+DO 2 ON NO ACCOUNT CAN WE 3 IT IS TIME +S +V-ED 4 IT 无主句) indifference should be cleared up among people, with the harmonious society echoed vigorously nowadays in China ought to be weighed /taken/pondered seriously./earnestly/conscientiouslyWhy do
5、we lay emphasis on this(指代词表过渡) several points(名词复数,总分总的标志) analyzed below might equip us with the deeper understanding of what we are heading for. For one thing,(分述标志词) since we have to live on an on-the-move lifestyle , we are denied chances to share our feelings with our friends and relatives. Fo
6、r another (分述标志词), with so many dishonesties going around in our life and then indifference occurring, we might have no choice but to enjoy the company of pets. And above all(分述标志词), too many tragedies - seeing someone in mortal danger without lifting a finger to save him- put on the stage in our da
7、ily life almost everyday, No better illustration of this idea touched on above can be maintained/taken/weighed than the case as listed below,( 例证)a crowd of people remained appallingly nonchalance(=indifference,论据是论点的具体体现,主题核心词汇重复) to the plea of a mother, since she failed to offer the required amou
8、nt of cash as a price to save her drowning son, the woman at last watched her son sink to death. Consequently/Accordingly/On balance/Therefore/It follows that, no issue in china is as basic to build up the society in harmony as ironing out indifference among people.(此句为小节,1 与TS首尾呼应,重复原则grow out of=c
9、lear up 2 为第三段起势)Judging from what has been argued above, people have come to realize the harms of indifference has been , like Pandoras box, the crippling force of establishing the harmony society. It is , therefore, necessary that some effective steps be made to(点主题 重复原则) narrow and bridge the gap
10、 among people. To begin with,(以法治国) the government should make law to establish the society in which people live in harmony. In addition,(以德治国) people should enhance the awareness of concern and care each other especially. Only by undergoing these measures, can we make our society, where people ,eve
11、n not knowing each other, help among them ,appeal to everyone. 2As is illustrated/depicted /conveyed/revealed/betrayed/shown in the picture, (图的内容 原则上用一个主从句表达, 功底.两句合一句的途经,1 AND连结2 WHICH或WHEREAS 连结3 非谓语 )a lady and a gentleman are watching an artificial scene on the top of a building with numerous t
12、ower blocks surrounding them. (=WHILE/ON THE OTHER HAND) Simple as it is, the drawing sets us thinking too much. (凑字数,其富余时,可省去)Accordingly, what this far-reaching/thought-provoking picture depicts is a common phenomenon in todays society,(反映的现实) too many man-made projects such as skyscrapers have ex
13、cessively been built, whereas too much natural resources including afforested land has vanished appallingly. (加以讲解) (负面词汇,作者的态度尽在不言中,回避使用 I BELIVE,I THINK 之类的句式). There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning that (主题句,尽量避免使用1 主系表 2 THERE BE结构 主张使用下列句型,1 NOTHING+BE+ADJ+THAN+TO+DO 2 ON NO ACCOUNT CAN W
14、E 3 IT IS TIME +S +V-ED 4 IT 无主句)it is imperative to check the blind actions and activities of human beings in the urban development ,with nowadays values of scientific development echoed vigorously .why do we lay emphasis on this(指代词表过渡) ? several points(名词复数,总分总的标志) analyzed below might help us ga
15、in an insight into the dramatic change to which we have been qualified to bear witness. To begin with,(分述标志词) over the past decades, much arable land has been destroyed in the rush for rapid urban development. Such blind development has damaged the natural balance to the point where people only live
16、 in a box of lifeless cement and steel. What is more, most people still lack the concept of scientific development. Some urban planners and designers focus their attention simply on their immediate interests and problems ,which has in turn degraded wrethchedly the quality of our living environment. As many famous ecologists point out that a cluster of high-rise buildings in a city often overburden living capacities, which once could afford to residents enough.
