Unit 5 Here and Now. (话题写作指导）【话题分析】描述正在发生的事情 本单元的话题为“此时此地”，要求能写一篇有关人们正在做的事情的短文写作时，一般采用“总一分—总”的形式，即先总述后分述，最后写一个总结性的结尾 写此类作文时，通常使用现在进行时态，要注意正确使用动词的现在分词常用句型： What am/is/are sb doing? Sb am/is/are doing...【写作实例】假如你是你们学校《校园之声》英文栏目的撰稿人现在是晚上7点，请根据Kate提供的信息，用现在进行时描述一下 Kate 一家人的活动情况 爸爸：读书 妈妈：看电视爷爷：听收音机奶奶：打扫房间凯特：做作业贝蒂：玩游戏 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路点拨】【教材典句】1、 It’s eight o’clock in the evening.(SB,1a)2、 I’m doing my homework.(SA,1d)【经典范文】 It's seven o'clock in the evening. Kate's family are all at home.Kate is doing her homework .Her father is reading a book. Her mother is watching TV. Her grandfather is listening to the radio and her grandmother is cleaning the room. Her sister Betty is playing games. They are all having a good time.【亮点点评】①用“It's seven o'clock.”点明动作发生的时间。
②用 be at home点明动作发生的地点③用现在进行时结构“be+动词-ing 形式”介绍 Kate 一家人正在做的事情④用“They are all having a good time.”来表达他们快乐的心情同步检测】1．今天是星期天，史密斯一家人都在家现在是下午4点，他们正在做不同的事情请你根据下面表格中的内容，写一篇不少于60词的短文史密斯先生看报纸史密斯夫人做蛋糕珍妮和朋友琳达一起看电视弗兰克和朋友吉姆一起打电脑游戏__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】It is Sunday today. The Smiths are all at home. It’s 4:00 in the afternoon. Mr. Smith is sitting on a chair and reading a newspaper. Mrs. Smith is making a cake. Jenny and her friend Linda are watching TV in her room. Frank and his friend Jim are playing computer games. They are having a good time.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态以“现在进行时”为主；③提示：根据提示内容介绍史密斯一家人在周日下午四点的活动，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题；第二步，详细介绍史密斯一家人在周日下午四点的活动；第三步，书写结语[亮点词汇]①at home在家②have a good time玩得开心[高分句型]①Mr. Smith is sitting on a chair and reading a newspaper. (现在进行时)2．今天是周末，你们一家人相聚家中，并且正在进行着不同的活动：爸爸和弟弟在院里种树、妈妈在打扫房间、姐姐在看书、你在上网课请根据以上提示，写一篇英语短文，对你们的活动进行描述要求：1. 词数：70左右；2. 语句通顺、内容详实，可适当发挥答案】It’s 10 o’clock in the morning. We are all at home. What are my family doing?My father is planting a tree. Is my brother planting a tree, too? Yes, he is helping my father. What are my mother and my sister doing? Oh, my mother is cleaning the room and my sister is reading a book. What am I doing? I am taking an online class!How busy we are! We are all having a great time.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态主要为“现在进行时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点介绍，可以结合自己的生活实际适当增加，注意保持主谓一致性，无语法和标点错误。
[写作步骤]第一步，介绍时间、地点，并引出话题；第二步，具体阐述写作内容介绍正在进行着不同的活动：爸爸和弟弟在种树、妈妈在打扫房间、姐姐在看书、我在上网课；第三步，书写结语我们很忙但很愉快[亮点词汇]①plant a tree种树②clean the room打扫房间③take an online class上网课④have a great time 玩得开心，过得愉快[高分句型]How busy we are! （How引导的感叹句）3．假设现在是星期日下午三点钟，卡萝尔(Carol) 和她的家人正在公园里请根据下面提供的信息描述他们此刻的活动1. Carol: play games with her friends;2. Carol’s grandmother: tell a story to Carol’s brother Bill;3. Carol’s father: read a newspaper under a tree;4. Carol’s mother: listen to music by a pool要求: 1. 语句通顺、语意连贯、语法正确；2. 包含所给信息，可适当发挥；3. 不少于60词。
It’s three o’clock on Sunday afternoon. It’s a fine day. Carol and her family are in the park. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】It’s three o’clock on Sunday afternoon. It’s a fine day. Carol and her family are in the park. There are many people there. What are Carol’s family doing? Look! Carol is playing games with her friends. Carol’s father is reading a newspaper under a tree and Carol’s mother is 。