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1、单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,letter of suggestion,ART EXHIBITION,Persuasive,WRTING A,Hi!Long time no see!,Im LiHua and I want to say something about the exhibition.I think youd better hold it in the library,b,ecause it is big enough.,For the kinds of paintings.I suggest the impressi
2、on panting,cause,its easy to understand but not the modern art.However,poeple may want to see more styles.,Why not,show different art works to us?,God,Im so happy that this event is going to happen soon!I cant wait to see the paintings!,This is so cool!,Dear Committee members,I am writing to make so
3、me suggestions with regard to,holding an Art Exhibition in the near future.,You may consider holding the exhibition in the library,but,w,e have a large number of students,and it may be crowd,ed,when they appreciate those paintings.,Thus,I would recommend that,it should be held at the school hallways
4、.,As for,the contents,for one thing,we can exhibit some masterpieces by the famous painters.For another,if,you could give an opportunity to the students who are fond of art to,get,their,works,shown,I believe the exhibition will be more than success,ful,.,I would appreciate it if my suggestions would
5、 be adopted.Eagerly await your positive response.,Yours,faithfully,Li Hua,FORMAT,Writing,vs.,CONTENTS,STYLE,LANGUAGE,IDEA,Packaging,Smell,Taste,Nutrition,Cooking,Maintain Your Bank,Letter of Suggestions,Clarify intention,I am writing to/would like to make some suggestions concerning/regarding.,Dear
6、committe members/Sir,To whom it may concern,Yours faithfully,name,I feel that it would be beneficial if,I would recommend that,You may consider doing,I hope you will find these proposals practical/useful/helpful.,I would appreciate it if you take my suggestions into consideration.,Make proposals,Ant
7、icipation,The main concerns,What to display?,Where to hold the exhibition?,Possible theme of the exhibition,Students own art works (19 times),Realism(13 times),cartoons(4 times),Impressionism(12 times),Abstract(2 times),Show us the Masterpieces!(9 times),Why Realism,Impressionism.etc.?,As far as I a
8、m concerned,students give a preference to,.,Different people have different tastes,so,variety,is important.,I,conducted a survey，,which shows that.,梁美美,(13,times,),Im writing,on behalf of,my fellow students.,罗泳峰,(,5,times,),LOCATION to hold the exhibition,library,hallways,classrooms,dormitory,36 tim
9、es,17 times,3 times,2 times,stadium,2 times,the lab,1 time,online virtual exhibition,Think out of the box!,施萌,Why Library?,Quietness(6 times),Atmosphere(6 times),Space(3 times),Safety(1 time),Compare,：,Only in this way can we appeal to students.,Its a qui,e,t place where students could focus on the
10、paintings without being disturbed.,T,he site of the exhibition can be located in the school library.,1,no supporting argument,It,s better,that you hold an art exhibition in the school hallways.I am firmly convinced that,it is a good place which can attract a number of students to visit.,2,argument i
11、rrelevant and therefore not convincing,I feel that it would be beneficial if we hold it in school hallways.For one thing,Im firmly convinced that,everything is good in its season.Every student(s)have(has)a power to admire the beauty.,Furthermore,I think,it will provide a good environment,for us to f
12、eel art,create knowledge and learn to live.,3,ambiguity caused by inadequcy in language and logic,As far as Im concerned,the best place to hold the exhibition are the school hallways.,Meanwhile,（？）,it will be a chance for them to,learn from each other,（？）,.Consequently,they will have a preference fo
13、r the exhibition held in the hallways.,4,specific and makes sense,I would choose the school hallways to hold this exhibition.The reason is that its difficult for most students to squeeze spare time from their busy,schedule,to go to a distant place for an art exhibition.However,if you hold it in the
14、school hallways where students often pass,it,will,be more convenient for them to,get involved,.,罗芷若,4,Awesome!,I,t would be a great idea if the the artworks on display vary across a wide range of styles.From Impressionism to Surrealism,artistic style is in constant change while the universality of a
15、rt remains unchanged,and this is the very thing students should get a sense of.,-collection of A+compositions,Language and Thinking,cant be,seperated!,They,shape,each other.,Vocabulary and Structures matter!,Credit goes to Princess and Prince Dilligent!,俞欣洁,郑湘婷,陈宏伟,Mr and Miss Lazy:,Mr.Li,Miss Yang,
16、Mr.,Cai,Miss,He,Credit goes to,Most Responsible Peer Assessors!,区玉浩,薛冰,郭昕颖,夏玥,Who are good at applying whats learned in class?,何秀蓉,朱燕红,陈书攀,10,times,For one thing,.For another,.,Have a preference for,Subjunctive mood,Appeal to,6,times,10,times,12,times,Successful use of target language units,Samples:,For one thing,the library,the best place to hold,(the exhibition),because it be,(is),able to le,t,people enjoy quietly.,For,an,other thing,it is really a good change for students to feel the charm of
