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1、 第七章第七章 个人情感个人情感写作课写作课l表述喜好表述喜好l谈论规章制度谈论规章制度; 表达同意或不同意表达同意或不同意l询问事物的影响询问事物的影响l正确处理实际问题正确处理实际问题 自教育部提倡初中生每天长跑自教育部提倡初中生每天长跑1500米后，校园里课间可以看到很多学生米后，校园里课间可以看到很多学生跑步的身影。对于这样的提倡，你在学校里做了一个调查，有些学生觉跑步的身影。对于这样的提倡，你在学校里做了一个调查，有些学生觉得好，有些学生觉得不好。请你把调查结果用英语写成短文，并谈谈自得好，有些学生觉得不好。请你把调查结果用英语写成短文，并谈谈自己的看法，发表在学校的报刊上。己的看法
2、，发表在学校的报刊上。注意：注意：1.字数字数80100词。词。 2.短文中开头已给出，不计入总词数。短文中开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3.自己的观点至少写两点。自己的观点至少写两点。书面表达书面表达(2010 烟台烟台)观点点原因原因赞同同可以放松，更健康，帮助学可以放松，更健康，帮助学习更好更好不不赞同同太累，跑步后上太累，跑步后上课不能集中注意力，想睡不能集中注意力，想睡觉你的你的观点点 I did a survey about whether middle school students should run 1500 meters every day. The other day,
3、my friends and I talked about the rules that we have in school. At our school, we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. We think young people should look smart so we would like to wear our own clothes. But our teachers believe that if we
4、did that, we would concentrate more on our clothes than our studies. We disagree. We would feel more comfortable and that is good for studying. If we cant do that, we should be allowed to design our own uniforms. That would be a good way to make both teachers and students happy. We also think that t
5、eenagers should be allowed to study in groups during the evening. I know we get noisy sometimes, but we learn a lot from each other. As for the vacations, we think that they should be longer. At present, theyre too short. Longer vacations would give us time to do things like volunteering. Last summe
6、r I had an opportunity to volunteer at the local hospital, but I couldnt because I had to go back to school. It would be a good experience for me because I want to be a doctor when Im older.经典课文重现经典课文重现rules in schooluniformsstudy in groupsvacationsmy classmates think teachers believe should be long
7、er too short条理清晰，语篇流畅条理清晰，语篇流畅 examplesolution The other day, my friends and I talked about the rules that we have in school. At our school, we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. We think young people should look smart so we would like
8、 to wear our own clothes. But our teachers believe that if we did that, we would concentrate more on our clothes than our studies. We disagree. We would feel more comfortable and that is good for studying. If we cant do that, we should be allowed to design our own uniforms. That would be a good way
9、to make both teachers and students happy. We also think that teenagers should be allowed to study in groups during the evening. I know we get noisy sometimes, but we learn a lot from each other. As for the vacations, we think that they should be longer. At present, theyre too short. Longer vacations
10、 would give us time to do things like volunteering. Last summer I had an opportunity to volunteer at the local hospital, but I couldnt because I had to go back to school. It would be a good experience for me because I want to be a doctor when Im older.找出表达观点的句子找出表达观点的句子找出描写规章制度的句式找出描写规章制度的句式 The oth
11、er day, my friends and I talked about the rules that we have in school. At our school, we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. We think young people should look smart so we would like to wear our own clothes. But our teachers believe tha
12、t if we did that, we would concentrate more on our clothes than our studies. We disagree. We would feel more comfortable and that is good for studying. If we cant do that, we should be allowed to design our own uniforms. That would be a good way to make both teachers and students happy. We also thin
13、k that teenagers should be allowed to study in groups during the evening. I know we get noisy sometimes, but we learn a lot from each other. As for the vacations, we think that they should be longer. At present, theyre too short. Longer vacations would give us time to do things like volunteering. La
14、st summer I had an opportunity to volunteer at the local hospital, but I couldnt because I had to go back to school. It would be a good experience for me because I want to be a doctor when Im older.圈出连词及过渡语圈出连词及过渡语 The other day, my friends and I talked about the rules that we have in school. At our
15、 school, we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. We think young people should look smart so we would like to wear our own clothes. But our teachers believe that if we did that, we would concentrate more on our clothes than our studies. W
16、e disagree. We would feel more comfortable and that is good for studying. If we cant do that, we should be allowed to design our own uniforms. That would be a good way to make both teachers and students happy. We also think that teenagers should be allowed to study in groups during the evening. I kn
17、ow we get noisy sometimes, but we learn a lot from each other. As for the vacations, we think that they should be longer. At present, theyre too short. Longer vacations would give us time to do things like volunteering. Last summer I had an opportunity to volunteer at the local hospital, but I could
18、nt because I had to go back to school. It would be a good experience for me because I want to be a doctor when Im older.经典课文重现经典课文重现Advertising: pros and cons In the modern world, advertising is everywhere! Some people think that ads are great. Others hate ads, saying that they make our cities and c
19、ountryside look ugly. Many ads are aimed specifically at teenagers, and some young people see more than 100 advertisements a day. Its true that some ads can be very useful. For instance, they can help you compare two different products so that you can buy the one you really need. They can also help
20、you save money. When prices are listed, you can go to the store with the lowest price. Ads also tell you when stores are having sales. However, some advertising can be confusing or misleading. Sometimes the words sound good but dont really tell you anything about the quality of the product. At other
21、 times, the picture in an ad looks a lot better than the real thing. So you have to be careful. At times an ad can lead you to buy something you dont need at all.语篇结构语篇结构 层次及中心句层次及中心句Advertising: pros and cons In the modern world, advertising is everywhere! Some people think that ads are great. Othe
22、rs hate ads, saying that they make our cities and countryside look ugly. Many ads are aimed specifically at teenagers, and some young people see more than 100 advertisements a day. Its true that some ads can be very useful. For instance, they can help you compare two different products so that you c
23、an buy the one you really need. They can also help you save money. When prices are listed, you can go to the store with the lowest price. Ads also tell you when stores are having sales. However, some advertising can be confusing or misleading. Sometimes the words sound good but dont really tell you
24、anything about the quality of the product. At other times, the picture in an ad looks a lot better than the real thing. So you have to be careful. At times an ad can lead you to buy something you dont need at all.语篇结构语篇结构 连词及过渡语连词及过渡语Advertising: pros and cons In the modern world, advertising is eve
25、rywhere! Some people think that ads are great. Others hate ads, saying that they make our cities and countryside look ugly. Many ads are aimed specifically at teenagers, and some young people see more than 100 advertisements a day. Its true that some ads can be very useful. For instance, they can he
26、lp you compare two different products so that you can buy the one you really need. They can also help you save money. When prices are listed, you can go to the store with the lowest price. Ads also tell you when stores are having sales. However, some advertising can be confusing or misleading. Somet
27、imes the words sound good but dont really tell you anything about the quality of the product. At other times, the picture in an ad looks a lot better than the real thing. So you have to be careful. At times an ad can lead you to buy something you dont need at all. 自教育部提倡初中生每天长跑自教育部提倡初中生每天长跑1500米后，校园
28、里课间可以看到很多学生米后，校园里课间可以看到很多学生跑步的身影。对于这样的提倡，你在学校里做了一个调查，有些学生觉跑步的身影。对于这样的提倡，你在学校里做了一个调查，有些学生觉得好，有些学生觉得不好。请你把调查结果用英语写成短文，并谈谈自得好，有些学生觉得不好。请你把调查结果用英语写成短文，并谈谈自己的看法，发表在学校的报刊上。己的看法，发表在学校的报刊上。注意：注意：1.字数字数80100词。词。 2.短文中开头已给出，不计入总词数。短文中开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3.自己的观点至少写两点。自己的观点至少写两点。书面表达书面表达(2010 烟台烟台)观点点原因原因赞同同可以放松，更健康，
29、帮助学可以放松，更健康，帮助学习更好更好不不赞同同太累，跑步后上太累，跑步后上课不能集中注意力，想睡不能集中注意力，想睡觉你的你的观点点 I did a survey about whether middle school students should run 1500 meters every day. 写作思路分析写作思路分析布局谋篇布局谋篇 审清题目要求，确立写作思路。审清题目要求，确立写作思路。 时态：时态： 结构：结构： 遣词造句遣词造句 列出所用的句型结构。列出所用的句型结构。 表达观点的句子：表达观点的句子： 其他的句式：其他的句式： 润色提升润色提升：注意句与句之间的过渡。：
30、注意句与句之间的过渡。 可用使用的过渡词有：可用使用的过渡词有： 成文后，通读文章，看行文是否通畅，大小写、标点是否正确。 I did a survey about whether middle school students should run 1500 meters every day. Here are the results. Different people have different ideas. Some think its a good idea to run every day. They think doing sports is a good way to relax
31、 and keep healthy. Whats more, a healthy body can help us study better. However, other students think differently. They think running is too tiring. They feel so tired that they cant concentrate on their study in class. Then they want to sleep. In my opinion, I think we should run every day. After running, we will be more energetic and active, then we can study better and live a happier life. On the other hand, we can learn some spirit during running. For example, when we meet difficulties, never give up easily.Thank you!
