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1、由译雷峰塔下总结出在翻译过程中的注意点。2021/3/91点1，根据语境选择合适的词义2021/3/92涵！你放大胆子，悄悄的握住我的手，这是我们头一次的接触。You then plucked up enough courage to softly hold me by the hand .你悄悄对我说 You said to me in a whisper. Each word is a new word in a context.-Firth同样的一个词，在不同的上下文里，就会产生不同的意思。2021/3/93晴雨最是无凭，但我们凄恋着，忘记风雨无情的吹淋。一直四年间，我们是度着悲惨的恋念
2、恋念的生活。涵！你抛得下走了，大约也再不恋恋着什么。涵！这都是你临死而不放心的事情，但是现在我都告诉了你你也有点眷恋眷恋吗？2021/3/94晴雨最是无凭，但我们凄恋着，忘记风雨无情的吹淋 We were at first too much seized with tender feelings to notice the unpleasant rain and wind. 一直四年间，我们是度着悲惨的恋念恋念的生活 we lived a miserable life with love .涵！你抛得下走了，大约也再不恋恋着什么 You may have the heart to leave
3、me and forget all about me! 涵！这都是你临死而不放心的事情，但是现在我都告诉了你你也有点眷恋眷恋吗？ Now, when I tell you all about what has happened, do you feel sad too? 2021/3/95雷峰塔下，是我们生命史上一个大大痕迹 。well leave a significant imprint of our life history 你到底有灵感灵感没有？May your soul exist! 我们不是很凄然的惋惜惋惜吗 ？Do you remember how we mourned over
4、 it? 2021/3/96点2，呼语直接翻，叹词也不难2021/3/97唉！涵！就在那夜，你对我表明白你的心曲 呵！涵！我从前惋惜雷峰塔的倒塌，现在，呵！现在，我感谢雷峰塔的倒塌 哎！父亲年纪老了！ 2021/3/98唉！涵！就在那夜，你对我表明白你的心曲 Oh, Han, that very night you made known to me your pent-up feelings. 呵！涵！我从前惋惜雷峰塔的倒塌，现在，呵！现在，我感谢雷峰塔的倒塌 Ah, Han, I used to grieve over the collapse of the Pagoda, but, now
5、, oh, now I am thankful for its collapse 哎！父亲年纪老了老了！Oh, father is getting on in years! 2021/3/99点3，语言习惯的不同 语序的不同。 与汉语的语言习惯不同，英语中，倾向于将一些总结，结论，概括性的句子放在前。2021/3/910山脚上忽涌起一朵黑云，远远的送过雷声，-湖上的天气，晴雨最是无凭。 Suddenly, as was characteristic of the capricious weather of the Lake area, a dark cloud emerged from the
6、 foot of a mountain followed by the far-off rumble of thunder. 2021/3/911点3，英语中的暗否定表达2021/3/912我永远觉得我们没有幸福的可能！ I always doubted whether we would be happy together. 不过我绝不曾想到，就在这一年十月里你抛下一切走了，永远的走了 ！ But little did I then expect that 2021/3/913点4句子该长长，该短，短2021/3/914家里呢；也是树倒猢狲散，父亲的生意失败了；两个兄弟都在外洋飘荡，家里只剩母
7、亲和小弟弟，也都搬到乡下去住。At home, fathers business failed, my two brothers rove outside, and only leave mother and little brother move to countryside. 2021/3/915家里呢；也是树倒猢狲散，父亲的生意失败了；两个兄弟都在外洋飘荡，家里只剩母亲和小弟弟，也都搬到乡下去住。 My family has also got into deep trouble. Father has failed in business. My two elder brothers a
8、re wandering overseas. Mother and my younger brother have moved to the countryside. 2021/3/916点5，精彩表达 记一记2021/3/917人间是更悲惨了！ Things have gone from bad to worse in this human world. 父亲年纪老了！ Father is getting on in years! 不知不觉落下泪来 tears began to tickle down my cheeks unconsciously. 2021/3/918点6，还有些挖空脑袋
9、也想不出的东西，是因为原文就没理解。2021/3/919今年是你死后的三周年我就把这断藕的残丝，敬献你在天之灵吧！2021/3/920 Let me offer this message to your soul in heaven as a token of my ever lingering love for you despite our separation. 今年是你死后的三周年我就把这断藕的残丝，敬献你在天之灵吧！2021/3/921THE ENDTHANK YOU!By:王玉兰 张春花 石琳 陆明星 江蔷薇 章丹2021/3/922放映结束 感谢各位的批评指导！ 谢谢 谢！谢！让我们共同进步2021/3/923
